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Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense • Ghost • Mystery Type: Fiction Request Details: A SHORT story I’m just a sucky writer wanting some critiques
Not reviewed posted: Jul 26, 2024 Genre(s): Emotional • Biographical • Experience Type: Poetry Request Details: An emotional piece for me. Rated XGC, and may not be something you would enjoy reading. It offers a small glimpse into my past
Not reviewed posted: Jul 26, 2024 Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense • Dark • Death Type: Fiction Request Details: Short story, less than 500 words
Not reviewed posted: Jul 25, 2024 Genre(s): Action/Adventure • Teen • Supernatural Type: Fiction Request Details: Looking for critiques on how I can improve my writing and storytelling.
Not reviewed posted: Jul 24, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Emotional • Entertainment Type: Short Story Request Details: Please review my short story and give me some feedback. Thank you so much!
Not reviewed posted: Jul 21, 2024 Genre(s): Dark • Emotional • Other Type: Poetry Request Details: I thought I'd try ' Poetry.' Let me know what you think, for a first. I'm interested in all of it - - what you like, and what you really don't like about it. Thanks In Advanced...
Not reviewed posted: Jul 19, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • Other • Other Type: Chapter Request Details: This is a Rough Draft. I'm wondering what your general impressions are..
Not reviewed posted: Jul 14, 2024 Genre(s): Psychology • Paranormal • Drama Type: Short Story Request Details: Jacob extended his arms towards the echoing object, which seemed to be within reach, but he was unable to touch it. His eyes were riveted on his arms, which stretched upwards against the wall. A shiver went down his spine as he noticed how filthy he was.
Not reviewed posted: Jul 12, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • Sports • Other Type: Novel Request Details: This is the first 2 chapters of my novel. Looking for any constructive comments good or bad. Thank you
Not reviewed posted: Jul 7, 2024 Genre(s): Romance/Love • Paranormal • Supernatural Type: Short Story Request Details: This oldy turns out to be a paranormal romance with an HEA. I applied a great polish of craft to update this, snipping words and shorting paragraphs. Still hefty at 9200, worth 4000 gp at the outset, yet well worth the time.
Not reviewed posted: Jul 2, 2024 Genre(s): Biographical • Writing • Experience Type: Chapter Request Details: Started writing a memoir about my journey to achieving my dreams. It's still rough and this is only 1 segment of it. I want to flesh it out, put it chronologically, at some point. But as a late night musing...I'm wondering if it's any good.
Not reviewed posted: Jul 1, 2024 Genre(s): Mythology • Inspirational • Community Type: Poetry Request Details: Worth your time:)№##№####################
Not reviewed posted: Jul 1, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Friendship • Action/Adventure Type: Collection Request Details: These stories are my first attempt at a fantasy series. I know that they are both long but would love to hear what you think. Blessings and thank you - Moonie
Not reviewed posted: Jul 1, 2024 Genre(s): Adult • Experience • Other Type: Fiction Request Details: This is a short story illustrating a study in characterization. A review would certainly be appreciated.
Not reviewed posted: Jun 30, 2024 Genre(s): Spiritual • Inspirational • Religious Type: Poetry Request Details: "I would appreciate an honest review of my story. Your opinion is very important to me, and knowing what you think will help me improve."
Not reviewed posted: Jun 23, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Occult • Paranormal Type: Fiction Request Details: Sigrun has grown fully into a paladin, then traded her divine guidance to help an innocent. Now, unable to tell good from evil and uncertain of her own heart, she is guided by her own devil to a town beset by a powerful ghost with a familiar name.
Not reviewed posted: Jun 20, 2024 Genre(s): Activity • Writing • Other Type: Request Details: Paranormal short story. The story is a bit offbeat, so keep an open mind. Thanks. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks.
Not reviewed posted: Jun 16, 2024 Genre(s): Sci-fi • Food/Cooking • Drama Type: Fiction Request Details: Kaszime was the newest Protector at Food Feast. Braak was asked to help her for the first few days there. That was her first day, and it had a little bit of everything they had a problem with. Most of it was food-related, but not all of it.
Not reviewed posted: Jun 14, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Emotional • Action/Adventure Type: Short Story Request Details: The first sizeable story that I've actually published would love an honest review. I specifically would like notes on the pacing and tone and your thoughts on how to improve both.
Not reviewed posted: Jun 13, 2024 Genre(s): Horror/Scary • Dark • Ghost Type: Short Story Request Details: It is said that the old man Hoffman's house is haunted, but Lucas doesn't let that stop him from exploring the place. Looking for opinions on plot, dialogue, flow, mood, and whatever catches your eye enough to make a comment about.
Not reviewed posted: Jun 6, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Mystery • Other Type: Chapter Request Details: The first two chapters in an epic fantasy novel. Bit of a slower starter, but I've tried to pack it full of atmosphere and mystery. Does it still entertain? How immersed and invested were you?
Not reviewed posted: Jun 3, 2024 Genre(s): Children's • Family • Friendship Type: Fiction Request Details: The latest draft of my manuscript. It has gone through many revisions and edits based on the great feedback I've received here, as well as from other sources. Did I finally get it right? Thanks in advance! Roy
Not reviewed posted: May 27, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Action/Adventure • Writing.Com Type: Fiction Request Details: I wrote a short story. It has a dragon in it. Let me know how I did. All feedback welcome and super appreciated!
Not reviewed posted: May 23, 2024 Genre(s): Horror/Scary • Mythology • Adult Type: Novel Request Details: A scary story. Please review and analyse the storyline and how I can improve it (somehow)?
Not reviewed posted: May 23, 2024 Genre(s): Action/Adventure • Comedy • Other Type: Draft Request Details: I wrote this and I would like some analysis on the humour and the storyline, since it's supposed to be a comedic short I wrote!
Not reviewed posted: May 23, 2024 Genre(s): Romance/Love • Drama • LGBTQ+ Type: Short Story Request Details: Super nervous about this! I've wanted to write it for years, but it's such a delicate subject. Does it work within the word count? Is it impactful, respectful, understandable, trite, predictable? Just in time for Pride. Any feedback greatly appreciated.
Not reviewed posted: May 23, 2024 Genre(s): Personal • Emotional • Tribute Type: Other Request Details: I would appreciate it if you reviewed this piece. I was trying to go for an epic that left someone thinking about it for a while afterwards. Hope it's up to standards.
Not reviewed posted: May 15, 2024 Genre(s): Animal • Children's • Other Type: Poetry Request Details: A fun poem about my love for guinea pigs. Did I get the punctuation right?
Not reviewed posted: May 13, 2024 Genre(s): Emotional • Relationship • Dark Type: Poetry Request Details: Haven't been on here for a while, coming back with a stream-of-consciousness prose poem. Any reviews appreciated! Thank you
Not reviewed posted: Apr 29, 2024 Genre(s): Activity • Comedy • Writing Type: Request Details: Would love to have readers come and add a line to this crazy interactive story idea and see what kind of story we end up with and the fun we have along the way!
Not reviewed posted: Apr 23, 2024 Genre(s): Romance/Love • Emotional • Relationship Type: Monologue Request Details: I just wanted to share this piece.
Not reviewed posted: Apr 16, 2024 Genre(s): Mystery • Crime/Gangster • Drama Type: Fiction Request Details: Something terrible has happened to two of their friends, and it looks like one of the others is responsible for it. At least that’s what Detectives James Wynn and Kristie Eddison think. Now all they need to do is figure out who has done it.
Not reviewed posted: Apr 14, 2024 Genre(s): Other • Opinion • Personal Type: Essay Request Details: I would love to hear your thoughts on this.
Not reviewed posted: Apr 11, 2024 Genre(s): Writing • Other • Other Type: Short Story Request Details: Wile E. Coyote fires Acme and files suit
Not reviewed posted: Apr 11, 2024 Genre(s): Romance/Love • Philosophy • Emotional Type: Article Request Details: I mainly write poetry but I would like to see what the people think of my Articles. So here is one about the connection of love in a general sense.
Not reviewed posted: Apr 5, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • Family • Relationship Type: Serial Request Details: This is the first part of a series. Please tell me what I need to improve in terms of plot, character development and description. Please tell me what I need to add or cut out. Also, please tell me what you liked and didn't like. Thank you!
Not reviewed posted: Apr 3, 2024 Genre(s): Emotional • Romance/Love • Other Type: Poetry Request Details: Hi there! Just looking for feedback. Happy to exchange a review of your item of comparable length. Thank you!!!
Not reviewed posted: Mar 31, 2024 Genre(s): Community • Cultural • History Type: Poetry Request Details: Please review
Not reviewed posted: Mar 26, 2024 Genre(s): History • Military • War Type: Poetry Request Details: This is my first real attempt at poetry. It is based upon the Band of Brothers mini-series. Honest critique appreciated.
Not reviewed posted: Mar 23, 2024 Genre(s): Supernatural • Mystery • Action/Adventure Type: Short Story Request Details: I'm looking for reviews on this short story. Thank you.
Not reviewed posted: Mar 23, 2024 Genre(s): History • Relationship • Tragedy Type: Novel Request Details: Ode To Oscar: Chapter 1
Not reviewed posted: Feb 27, 2024 Genre(s): Home/Garden • Nature • None Type: Poetry Request Details: A short poem that I wrote about the garden and how it's alive.
Not reviewed posted: Feb 21, 2024 Genre(s): Horror/Scary • Mystery • Paranormal Type: Novel Request Details: Would love some reviews of my first Horror book. It is now available on Kindle and Paperback from Amazon. If you have Kindle Unlimited you can get it for free! http://tinyurl.com/23xtm7dz Appreciate any time anybody spends reading my work. Thanks all!
Not reviewed posted: Feb 19, 2024 Genre(s): Dark • Action/Adventure • Other Type: Novella Request Details: First act and first half of second act on novella about a depressed author struggling to complete his novel in just one night. Story within a story: Hero's journey in Julius Caesar's Rome. I am interested in engagement and any structural insights,
Not reviewed posted: Feb 19, 2024 Genre(s): Sports • Romance/Love • Music Type: Short Story Request Details: Short story about 2 ice skaters - one is American and one is Russian.
Not reviewed posted: Feb 8, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • Family • Tragedy Type: Fiction Request Details: This is the finished manuscript of "The Monster Inside The Bottle," I plan on editing it some more before publishing it in the near future, so please read it thoroughly and critique it well.
Not reviewed posted: Feb 5, 2024 Genre(s): Crime/Gangster • Dark • Drama Type: Short Story Request Details: A banker gets in over his head with a gang. This feels like the summary of a cheap movie… written for Gaby’s Midnight Travelers contest. Any thoughts/criticisms are appreciated
Not reviewed posted: Feb 1, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • War • Family Type: Chapter Request Details: After a few minor alterations.
Not reviewed posted: Jan 14, 2024 Genre(s): Dark • Inspirational • Emotional Type: Short Story Request Details: Even in the darkest of times, there is always the potential for redemption.
Not reviewed posted: Jan 12, 2024 Genre(s): Action/Adventure • Emotional • Supernatural Type: Short Story Request Details: "From this day on, the Salty Siren sails under a new banner."
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