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*Penbl* Author: Delia Bradley          [Jun 27, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Philosophy :: Self Help :: Spiritual
*Penr* Details: A Candle to Light the Darkness is a series of philosophies for every day living. Based on my experiences through life I have found these invaluable at times when I need to find peace the most.

 A Candle to Light the Darkness  (E)
A book you can dip into on any page and find uplifting and encouraging philosophy's.
#2109905 by Delia Bradley

*Penbl* Author: ~ Aqua ~ Eid Mubarak!          [Jun 27, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): War :: Emotional :: Romance/Love
*Penr* Details: All feedback welcome!

Dear Laurel,  (13+)
A soldier writes a letter to his newly wed wife.
#2126299 by ~ Aqua ~ Eid Mubarak!

*Penbl* Author: Elle          [Jun 26, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Paranormal :: Romance/Love :: Supernatural
*Penr* Details: Looking for feedback on opening and general flow and pace.

 Immortal Danger - Chapter One   (18+)
Lily's POV
#2126346 by Elle

*Penbl* Author: Elefterious          [Jun 26, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Horror/Scary :: Comedy
*Penr* Details: Sci-Fi, Horror, Comedy, Food Critic's monologue. Interested if anyone will enjoy.

- Paul
  [Short Story]

 A Taste of Superbia  (13+)
Food Critic Jean-Baptiste De Richemont embarks on a quest to review new restaurant, Sinful
#2126345 by Elefterious

*Penbl* Author: Hope's Twisted Tales          [Jun 26, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Mythology :: Fantasy :: Romance/Love
*Penr* Details: This is the prologue for a short story I am working on. There will probably be two or three more chapters. I am planning to self-publish this story in the next couple of weeks. Any and all reviews are appreciated, and I am happy to return reviews! Thanks!
  [Short Story]

Envy: The Fallen Goddess - Prologue  (13+)
Short story about the fall of Psyche, a modern day sequel to the myth of Eros and Psyche.
#2126291 by Hope's Twisted Tales

*Penbl* Author: Bryce Raffle          [Jun 24, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Steampunk :: Action/Adventure :: Fantasy
*Penr* Details: I'm looking for some honest feedback on a newly added scene from my steampunk novel.

 The Battle of Yemoja River  (E)
An excerpt from Dead London, a steampunk novel.
#2126144 by Bryce Raffle

*Penbl* Author: ponkacheese          [Jun 23, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Spiritual :: Inspirational :: Young Adult
*Penr* Details: Enjoy! =)

The Journey  (E)
We can do anything in Him.
#2064419 by ponkacheese

*Penbl* Author: ~ Aqua ~ Eid Mubarak!          [Jun 23, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Psychology :: Dark :: Relationship
*Penr* Details: Written for a contest. I would love to get feedback from you. GPs will be rewarded to reviewers.

It's My Turn to Live  (18+)
What more can you do than what you are already doing to me in our abusive relationship?
#2126037 by ~ Aqua ~ Eid Mubarak!

*Penbl* Author: Stephanie- Training for 5k          [Jun 23, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Pets :: Family :: Other
*Penr* Details: Just a quick story about losing our family dog. Going to be using this as a contest entry so reviews are welcome.
  [Short Story]

Saying Goodbye  (E)
Quotation Contest entry ~ The loss of a pet.
#2124566 by Stephanie- Training for 5k

*Penbl* Author: Sew-no-more 🤗          [Jun 23, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Children's :: Action/Adventure :: Fantasy
*Penr* Details: Please review my short children's story.. The Bronco Riding Rooster..
Looking for critiques about this story.. For my grandson Kody.. 😘 🤗
  [Short Story]

The Bronco Riding Rooster  (13+)
Tom Leghorn has to make a decision to ride a dangerous horse. Which will he choose.
#2067386 by Sew-no-more 🤗

*Penbl* Author: Sew-no-more 🤗          [Jun 23, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Biographical :: Children's :: Health
*Penr* Details: Please review my bio from the 70's..

Growing Up Diabetic  (E)
A true story about having Type 1 Diabetes for the past 40 years and how much has changed
#1987044 by Sew-no-more 🤗

*Penbl* Author: John Yossarian          [Jun 23, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Political :: Dark :: Sci-fi
*Penr* Details: Looking for comments especially plot holes and grammar.
  [Short Story]

Final Solution  (18+)
Trump's Final Solution for the unwanted doesn't go as planned.
#2126009 by John Yossarian

*Penbl* Author: Eogin          [Jun 22, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Young Adult :: Fantasy :: Mystery
*Penr* Details: Any feedback appreciated.

Barnaby, son of the traitor (01)  (13+)
The son of the "Traitor King" is trying to rebuild his family's former glory.
#2124998 by Eogin

*Penbl* Author: KatVon          [Jun 22, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Death :: Fantasy :: Other
*Penr* Details: Please review!!

 Tranquil   (E)
A new year..
#2125932 by KatVon

*Penbl* Author: bubblebear          [Jun 22, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Experience :: Family :: Personal
*Penr* Details: Hi this is a poem I wrote about my dad and our relationship. Any feedback appreciated - Bubblebear

 Flirt with me  (E)
A poem about someone close to me.
#2125513 by bubblebear

*Penbl* Author: S.z.kamoonpuri          [Jun 22, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Young Adult :: Activity :: Biographical
*Penr* Details: Busybee me

Pls read or comment.

Busy bee me.  (E)
I feel the daytime ends too fast, life is too fast paced, time's never enough
#2125641 by S.z.kamoonpuri

*Penbl* Author: Naru          [Jun 21, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Dark :: Drama
*Penr* Details: I'm sorry if it seems short as it is just a prologue of how he obtained the girls.

 The Abandoned  (13+)
A man takes powerful children to form a group to destroy political and modern opponents
#2125874 by Naru

*Penbl* Author: joba          [Jun 21, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Other :: Other :: Melodrama
*Penr* Details: Any comment or cticism of plot, style, dramatic effects etc will be greatly appretiated. thank you in advance.
  [Short Story]

 The Peacock  (13+)
George's irrational jealousyleads to terrible consequences
#2125862 by joba

*Penbl* Author: Loreli          [Jun 21, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Supernatural :: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure
*Penr* Details: I am working on trying to see this published. Does it need to be lengthened? What details need to be added to make it flow better?
  [Short Story]

Vampire, (n)  (13+)
Two hunters tracking vampires gone mad.
#1395030 by Loreli

*Penbl* Author: falselyyours          [Jun 21, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Inspirational :: Regional :: Satire
*Penr* Details: This is my second poem as a newbie, and I would very much like to hear your thoughts about it.

 Won't Stay Gold  (E)
A poem about... well more of a vivid description. All reviews very much appreciated!
#2125808 by falselyyours

*Penbl* Author: KatVon          [Jun 21, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: Other
*Penr* Details: Please review!

 The Wolf  (E)
It's said she's made of storm cells...
#2125817 by KatVon

*Penbl* Author: April Desiree          [Jun 19, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Death :: History :: Medical
*Penr* Details: Written for a contest, thanks

The Solemn Vow  (18+)
Some vows can never be broken...
#2125675 by April Desiree

*Penbl* Author: the scribe          [Jun 19, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Other :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: I would appreciate an honest review on this little poem. It is not a new piece, but my grandson is being Baptised next month, and I would like to put it in a card for him. Any help on improvement would be greatly appreciated.

Unconditional Love  (E)
Short piece on the Love we feel for our children
#2034450 by the scribe

*Penbl* Author: Christianna          [Jun 17, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Action/Adventure :: Other
*Penr* Details: This is the first four chapters of a book I wrote about a year and a half ago. I originally wrote it in first person but rewrote it several months ago in third person. This story is to be the first in a series and I want to edit it again at a later time.

 The Bank Heist Heroine  (E)
This is the first few chapters of a story I wrote over a year ago
#2125276 by Christianna

*Penbl* Author: J. Robert Kane          [Jun 17, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Death :: Ghost
*Penr* Details: Looking for reviews of this new short-story. Thanks in advance!
  [Short Story]

Through the Cracks  (18+)
David Straight can't trust his senses, but that doesn't mean he's wrong...
#2125168 by J. Robert Kane

*Penbl* Author: SoldierBoy Talking Dragon          [Jun 16, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Teen :: Environment :: Relationship
*Penr* Details: My first attempt at this type of work. Any thoughts appreciated.

it was Janice's first camping trip without her parents - and with boys.
#2125148 by SoldierBoy Talking Dragon

*Penbl* Author: Samberine Everose          [Jun 15, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Inspirational :: Relationship :: Opinion
*Penr* Details: Please review anything in my book.
Any comment will be much appreciated, any review to any chapter will be given a corresponding gps. Thank you.

Morning Blossoms  (E)
My opinions, views and thoughts of things
#2077672 by Samberine Everose

*Penbl* Author: Fifthwood          [Jun 14, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: None :: None
*Penr* Details: I came up with this after bouncing the idea around in my head over the weekend. I think it could possibly make a good story, unless it's too controversial. I would like to know your thoughts on it.

The Creators  (13+)
Controversial question, what would happen if society learned our Creator was an alien?
#2125172 by Fifthwood

*Penbl* Author: Jreese          [Jun 14, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Activity :: Experience :: Food/Cooking
*Penr* Details: Couch Potatoes listen up. Advice from experience. If you like reading please read. Does this piece hold your attention and keep you reading?

 You Can Lose Weight, Too  (E)
A testimonial and encouragement for those couch potatoes out there.
#2118531 by Jreese

*Penbl* Author: Archaic Torso          [Jun 14, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Death :: Spiritual :: Philosophy
*Penr* Details: First impressions? Any impressions? :) Thanks!

Outwards  (E)
Paper peels itself...
#2124954 by Archaic Torso

*Penbl* Author: Nightfall          [Jun 14, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Supernatural
*Penr* Details: Honest opinions are appreciated. If you wish to read more, I have chapter one up as well. Thank you.

 Half-Heart: Prologue  (13+)
Prologue to my fantasy story, 'Half-Heart.' Please enjoy.
#2123871 by Nightfall

*Penbl* Author: PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes          [Jun 14, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Mystery :: Drama
*Penr* Details: An update version of a Short Story I wrote at the beginning of the month. I think you will like this one a lot better. I'm still looking for any misspelled word, missing words, and grammar errors. The GPs for quality review has changed to 149.
  [Short Story]

 I Can't Do It  (18+)
Nanca didn't want to do it. But she had no choice. She was the only one there who could.
#2125081 by PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes

*Penbl* Author: Thomas Joseph          [Jun 13, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Mystery :: Horror/Scary
*Penr* Details: I wrote this short story earlier this year and recently heavily edited and rewrote it based on early feedback. I am looking for honest criticism on the storyline, character development, etc. The story has thriller, horror and action elements to it.
  [Short Story]

 Collateral Damage   (13+)
It was clear to Corey who the man staring back at him was. He was a monster...
#2115764 by Thomas Joseph

*Penbl* Author: slowmotionsunset          [Jun 13, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: Contest Entry
*Penr* Details: I would appreciate your feedback for this, my latest poem.

 The Music of the Moon-Cicadas  (E)
The Man in the Moon partakes in a lunar dance party!
#2123433 by slowmotionsunset

*Penbl* Author: Jenniferrunner          [Jun 13, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Contest Entry :: None :: None
*Penr* Details: Want some constructive criticism. How did I do?

 The Write Life  (E)
I submitted this to a writing competition. I created it to show how it feels to write!
#2122289 by Jenniferrunner

*Penbl* Author: Maroua Am          [Jun 13, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Gay/Lesbian :: Emotional :: Inspirational
*Penr* Details: I would like to have honest reviews in order to develop my writing. I am not very familiar with poetry but the best way to become better is to keep trying.

 X and Y  (13+)
It's about love, struggle and hatred.
#2124753 by Maroua Am

*Penbl* Author: BunnyXBunny          [Jun 10, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Emotional :: Personal
*Penr* Details: New work. Need honesty.

 Windchimes  (13+)
More sadness
#2124779 by BunnyXBunny

*Penbl* Author: Archaic Torso          [Jun 9, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Psychology :: Dark :: Gothic
*Penr* Details: I will return the favour. Thanks so much.

 Flies Die By The Windows  (E)
Inspired by simple observation one morning, grew into something (hopefully) more powerful.
#2124599 by Archaic Torso

*Penbl* Author: JoeEggs          [Jun 8, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Action/Adventure :: Supernatural
*Penr* Details: Synopsis for a screenplay. Some details are left intentionally vague. 4816 words. Best review receives 900 Points. Thanx.

SYNOP10 PART2  (13+)
Synopsis to Sci-Fi WIPS- FINAL GENESIS
#2124137 by JoeEggs

*Penbl* Author: Mina Happy Eid          [Jun 8, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Inspirational :: Contest :: Other
*Penr* Details: I have a problem in my English. I will be happy if you read and review my poem.

Confidence (2)  (E)
You must do the thing you think you cannot do
#2124480 by Mina Happy Eid

*Penbl* Author: Ben Crawford          [Jun 7, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: This is a short 1200 word start to a new book i have been thinking about writing, it is my first time trying first person narration. Not sure if this will be chapter one or just a prelude.

 Blood Freely Given  (13+)
This is a short start to a new book idea, not sure if this will be chapter 1 or a prelude.
#2124424 by Ben Crawford

*Penbl* Author: JJaco          [Jun 6, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Paranormal :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: Please Review

 The carnival  (E)
New Story I am working on
#2123966 by JJaco

*Penbl* Author: Pennywise          [Jun 6, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Dark :: Horror/Scary
*Penr* Details: I've been away from writing and WdC. But my grey cells begun firing and my imagination has started to come alive. This is the first non-contest story I've written. It's Dark Sci-Fi which I wanted to make 13+ and keep it to 1000 words; not sure it works.
  [Short Story]

INvasion  (13+)
When an alien invasion comes their assault will be subtle and quick.
#2124263 by Pennywise

*Penbl* Author: Bert Macklin, FBI          [Jun 5, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Drama :: Action/Adventure
*Penr* Details:

An old Sci-Fi story I wrote. Well, it's not that old but I haven't been here that long, really.

The start to a story. I haven't come back to it and it is among many started stories I never followed through with. Kind of silly.

  [Short Story]

 Crucible  (13+)
Chapter 1 - Journal Entry - Arrival at an unknown system - 6 months into travel
#2100841 by Bert Macklin, FBI

*Penbl* Author: Tam - 月満ちて          [Jun 5, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Young Adult :: Contest Entry
*Penr* Details: Looking for reviews on this short story. I'm mostly wondering if it is too choppy or not, or anything else that seems off.

Stammer  (13+)
Reciting a poem has never been so difficult. Or so important.
#2124131 by Tam - 月満ちて

*Penbl* Author: Robert Edward Baker          [Jun 5, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Dark :: Thriller/Suspense
*Penr* Details: I've just written my entry for the Quotation Inspiration Contest and would love any feedback on what can be done to improve my story. Thanks! Bob
  [Short Story]

An Unthinkable Act  (18+)
Officer Jim McCall attends an emergency where he is pushed to his limits
#2123886 by Robert Edward Baker

*Penbl* Author: Draper91          [Jun 4, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Nature :: Philosophy :: Experience
*Penr* Details: Any honest feedback is appreciated. Thanks for reading!

 Open Window Beside The Bed  (E)
Extracted from an old journal entry, awake in bed late one night
#2124028 by Draper91

*Penbl* Author: Perhaps          [Jun 3, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Community :: Cultural :: History
*Penr* Details: Free your mind.**************

 Serpent lies...  (E)
How do you begin to explain something so reality shattering?
#2110735 by Perhaps

*Penbl* Author: Amber Beddow          [Jun 2, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Romance/Love :: Young Adult
*Penr* Details: I'm looking for honest reviews on the first chapter of my book. Word Count: 4,105

 Crown of Frost  (13+)
After her brother is captured by a malicious elf, Lavinia must brave Faerie to save him.
#2123782 by Amber Beddow

*Penbl* Author: MEwriter          [Jun 2, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Personal :: Family :: Political
*Penr* Details: First part of a short novella

 The camp sleeps  (E)
A story of a Palestinian family "touring" the Middle-East, Work In Progress
#1911293 by MEwriter

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