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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
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I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
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In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
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I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
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Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
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pros, books
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Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Simon!

This was very well written and felt like I was your passenger as I read this. Sometimes people do lose their cool no matter how professional they are even if it's just one day in thirty years or so. Always an eye opener in that instance.

When I read He asked me where my truck was when I hit the car. I told him that I was moving over from the left lane to the right. He responded that I was driving down the middle of the highway That literally made me do a simultaneous facepalm and eye roll.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SWPoet!

What a fantastic tribute poem of that awful day in American history. It was simple but did not leave anything out.

My favorite version is definitely the revised edition. It is easier to look at and read because I think the flow is better.

Write on!

Jenny






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Review of Johnny Comes Home  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello Chris!

This story has amazing potential. It was incredibly descriptive and painted an amazing picture in the mind's eye.

I do have a few suggestions:

One newly finished and sanded and painted white to match the house, the other unfinished and splintery there are to many ands. Maybe try something like: One newly finished, sanded, and painted white to match the huse. The other was unfinished and splintery.

When you had this: Johnny didn’t have many friends at school, most parents didn’t like their children to associate with Johnny you should have had because most parents.

Throughout this story, you mentioned Johnny's name too much. I suggest to go back and reread, maybe out loud and replace some of those with the pronoun "he".

I hope I have been of at least some help.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Are Women Frail?  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello S.B!

This was very well thought out and written.

I know that it is a man's world basically but I consider myself equal. I think a lot like a man and I also will voice my opinion no matter what, with no fear. I am really not like other women though. I work out very often and one of the reasons that I actually do, is that I could fight a man if I had t. I haven't had to do that since I was a teenager though.

Society has come a long way but it still has a long way to go. Not sure if it will ever get there.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Eagle!

I absolutely love real life stories like this. Seeing the first mention of the rose bush I just knew that your grandma would have something to do with it.

Then the wind at the end....when I read that, knew that your grandma's spirit was with you. That is astonishing that you heard her speak to you.

I see absolutely no room for improvement.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Writing.Com  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello drifter!

Acrostic poetry is definitely one of my favorite forms of poetry so aturally when I saw the description, I had to come read it.

This was very well written and I loved how every word in each line started with the same letter.

Not exactly sure why, but my favorite part was the "." part of it.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Crush that Crush  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Jehn!

This article had some great helpful tips in it. You were right when you said that what works for you might not work for everybody else. People are different. Cutting them from your life altogether may be the best bet although they'd be hurting because they would think they did something, like you have said. I this kind of situation, someone will inevitably become hurt.

I would like to offer some tips:

You have they'd rather torture me with this senseless LOOOVE, *sigh* It would look better if LOOOVE was either italicized or bold.

You said I say give it a shot, while in cases such a mine I believe you meant such *as*. I can relate though because more often than not, I type something without a letter in it that I swear I pushed.

My favorite part: in the words of Donnie Brasco ""Fuggetaboutit".


Write on!



Jenny





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Review of Rating Inflation!  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello Drake!

This was very well written. I want you to know though that I gave you a 4.0 rating because that is what you deserved. The though did cross my mind to give you a 1 but it really did not deserve a 1.

I personally do not follow with everybody else. If something deserves 5 stars, that's what I give. If something deserves 1 star, that is what I give. Not long ago, I gave a write 1 star. He e mailed me back with a bunch of gps and told me nobody has ever given him any lower than a 3.5. I only give what it deserves. So far, people give me gps when I have given low ratings, just for being honest. I do follow the beat of my own drummer, not doing as everyone else does but I also do unto others as I would like others to do to me. If I wrote something with a lot of mistakes, I'd expect a proper rating and review.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Cowboy  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello stricuckoo!

This was a fantastic poem that told just what a cowboy is. The cowboy is a very hard worker and you have captured that well in here.

My favorite part was definitely Like Gene and Roy
Or Wayne and Eastwood
Yankee or Rebel
Cowboy life is good. Being a huge pop culture fan, I really loved those references.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Spirit of Tow  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Don!

This was the first time that I have ever read a poem about a tow truck and as far as I know it will continue to be the only tow truck poem I ever read. This told of all the different circumstances that two trucks are used for and as far as I try to think of the different reasons, I think you have pretty much covered all of them.

This poem had fantastic rhyme, rhythm, and flow!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Tim!

This was a terrific poem about everything in Las Vegas. I have never been there so I imagine you did not leave anything out as I read this. Yu did not leave much out anyway.

This had great descriptions and fantastic adjectives. I knew from the moment of reading the first line, Located in the scorchingly dry Nevada desert I had a feeling this was going to be a superb piece of work and I was not disappointed.


Write on!

Jenny





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Review of Missing You  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Chuckles!

This described perfectly what it is like to end a relationship that brought so much joy to life. Sometimes though, it is just a necessary part of life even if it is one of the hardest things in life. As they say: etter t have loved and lost than to never have loved at all.

Write on!

Jenny






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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
Hello Bookie Taylor!

This has potential. The idea of it is good but it needs to be executed better. Just a few examples:

Things had been this way every sense I left the hospital. Every should be eer.

The last doctor visit, The doctor commented. lower case t in the since it is not the start of a new sentence and in stead of having doctor in there twice, put he or she the second time.

They ranged from about six till about ten years old till should be to.

Hope I have helped at least a little bit.

Write on!

Jenny







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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Alicia!

This is very well written however, I would like to point out that in this game you do not throw turnips. You throw rocks. There actually is a game that you throw turnips in but that is Super mario brother's 2 and isn't as good of a game.

You missed the best level! Right after link has t go through the deku tree, he has to go through goron city. After THAT, then he goes to the castle, meets with the princess, pulls the sword out excalibur style and turns into a grown up. That's when he goes to the lost woods and meets up with someone wh teaches him the forest temple song. The forest temple is amazing. You really did miss out! There are so many awesome things in that game. I think you should go back and get that game. You can get it for just about any system now I think and best of all is there are walk throughs that you can go see what to do if you get stuck. Great game!


Write on!

Jenny


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Review of The Hunt  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Shayne!

I thought that this poem was just absolutely phenomenal! I could see everything as it happened. As if I was watching it on the screen.

The first stanza was my favorite as it grabbed me and pulled me into that darkness.

I see nothing that needs to be improved at all.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Harry!

This was an amazing read. Great rhyming flow and rhythm to it. It also was a bit funny.

Myself, I only watch the superbowl. I pick the winner every year. I really have thought about watching the entire season but I really don't want to jinx my luck at picking the superbowl winner. The sport I can't stand is baseball. I live in "cardinal nation" so spring and summer is one big eye roll to me where sports is involved. Everyone, and I mean like 90% of people are int the cards doing this or that. I like football though!

Great poem!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of A Simple Mistake  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Sombresky!

These were just amazing lyrics. As I read the words I imagined that the music was fast, loud, and aggressive with maybe a brief speedy electric guitar solo. In other words, I read it as metal lyrics.

I didn't stumble upon anything that I thought should not be there. The length, rhythm and rhyme of this were just fantastic!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Phobia Diagnosis  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Whitemorn!

This was indeed quite interesting. In the list of some of the actual phobias, I knew that some were phobias, such as Arachnophobia and claustrophobia. Then others in the list, I had no idea what the phobias were called but knew they existed, such as Ophidiophobia which is the fear of snakes, which I have.

Your made up fears gave me a laugh. Especially Smackufaceaphobia -- fear of disobeying your wife. Good stuff!

This was well written and definitely piqued my interest about other phobias.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Spanky De!

What an interesting poem. The thought on this subject has never even crossed my mind. If someone is born blind or goes blind before they have any memories then how would their minds know of the images to create for their dreams?

This was a very well written poem with good flow, rhythm, rhyme and a great subject!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Love is not  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Mouser!

This poem describes perfectly just what love is. Rather what love is not, as it is so called. I can not think of anything that you have left out. I think you about covered it.

This was well written and mistake free.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Kentucky  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kings!

It is so strange that I stumbled upon this, only because after our last e mail exchange, for some reason I wondered where you're from. I do not know what made me wonder that. I've never wondered that with anyone else here. Maybe I had a glimpse into the future and knew I was to read this.

This was a very well written poem about your state of Kentucky. It sounds like a great place. I have only been through a little bit of Kentucky to get to Tennessee. Haven't stayed there yet.

The poem had great rhythm and rhyme! It flowed smooth and easy.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Lockhart!

This was an incredible piece. I have never read anything like it and I have never actually known any of that other than forcing to throw up and that it is a mental sickness. This definitely was an eye opener that told me many more things.

This does not say it was biographical but something written like this with all that information in it surely would not have been a loved one's story. Someone with an eating disorder does everything in their power to keep it secret. In any case, if this was indeed you, I really hope that you got the medical help that you needed.

I have one suggestion in writing. My head flouts like a cloud yet my body drags me down to the ground, Flout is a word but it does not quite fit. I believe float is what may be better.


Write on!

Jenny






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Review of The 70% Kid -- 17  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Patrice!

This was very well written and brought up some thoughts as I was reading. I did not go to college but I did graduate high school. I remember some teachers telling me that I had potential and that they knew I could do better. If a subject did not interest me, my mind would wander. If I was tired, I would fall asleep. I was thrilled when I got as and bs. Didn't even get those in gym class. Those subjects were not easy to keep my mind straight at times. Even if it was a class I loved like creative writing or crafts, it was pretty much 70%. I'm not making excuses but some kids just have a harder time in school.

Also as I read this, I could not help but think that you are a teacher. It would not shock me one bit to find out that you are.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Tag  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Innes!

This was a terrific tribute to your beloved pet that kept you company and went with you on hunting trips. I thought it was amazing that this was from your pets perspective. It had a lot of emotion in it and told a great story in poetry form.

I see absolutely no area that should be improved.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Nap Time  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello A.E Haas!

This poem captures exactly what it is like to be a new parent of a little one. Nap time is a wonderful time to nap, get things done, or just rest in peaceful quietness.

This poem had great structure with fantastic rhythm and rhyme.

Write on!

Jenny




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