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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
I'm good at...
I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
I will not review...
Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Victoria!

Well, I can totally relate to this Not for me but for my mother. She is a weirdo magnet. Like you, she often says hi to them. I try not to say anything to them or make eye . After she says hi, woop they are right there telling their life experiences and she can't seem to go away. You and her have the same problems concerning that.

As far as room for improvement: I saw absolutely none in here!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello Patrice!

This was very short, sweet, and right to the point! I loved that you said so much in just so little amount. Nothing was dragged out or anything.

Now onto a personal note: I don't know when but Saturday Night Live is no where as good as it used to be and last time I watched it was the 40th special. (not the marathon like in this piece) I was very pleased with that.

As far as room for improvement in here: I see none!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Maria!

It is always rather interesting to get a background sense of people around wdc. I has a similar poll but it was a flop so I removed it. Yours is so much more done than mine was though and a slightly different angle. So bravo *Thumbsup*

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Nick!

This is a member to member rising star's review.

This was very clever and imaginative. I couldn't even imagine being a vampire let alone a vegetarian one! I took notice on the things it did consume were read. I wondered how the vampire was to get nutrients and nourishment but it turns out that just consuming red was good enough!

I really do not have anything to offer you to improve this. I thought it was absolutely perfect and there is no room for improvement!

Write on!

Jenny

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Review of Try The Uni  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Bill!

Of course this was a fantastic read. Made me laugh out loud too! The subject was slightly disgusting but disgusting things cause great laughs and it sure did that for me!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Doctor's Orders  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Scott,

This was very well written and quite funny where he went to all the different types of doctors.

Actually this reminds me of a contest I have opening up in May. It's probably terribly wrong of me to plug this in your review but after reading what you wrote, I believe it is right up your alley. Hope to see your entry!
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#1473144 by Not Available.


Write on!

Jenny
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Review of PO'd  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Jace!

This is a rising stars member to member review.

As always it is great to read your stuff! It kept my attention and made me laugh. Very good read and I see absolutely no room for improvement!

Write on!

Jenny

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Review of On Angel's Wings  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Lorriern,

This was very well written and is the only thing I have read here that has made me cry. I try to avoid reading things that do this to me but I absolutely had to after reading the description. I had a preemie on christmas 13 years ago. He stayed in the nicu for 3 months. He's now a fine 13 year old but during his stay, I saw babies die and have a lot of problems. I made friends with all of the wonderful nurses.

This was very well written and there were no errors.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Rit,

I absolutely loved this poem! The words painted such a amazing picture in my mind's eye. I can hear, see and feel throughout this poem. It's not often that I come across a poem that does that for me.

Everything in here was just right. Spelling, punctuation, and the flow of it. Great work!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Favorite Genre  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Ellen!

I voted nonfiction. I really love autobiographies. I also love humor but I didn't see that listed. I would have had a tough time choosing between the two if you had both options up though.

In reference to you being brand new here, I would be happy to show you around if you'd like. *Smile*

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of The Last Guardian  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Jack!

I have read "The Last Guardian" and I would like to offer my thoughts on it.

I absolutely loved the style of writing. It reminded me of the short stories I read in school of the renaissance or romantism era. I don't know if that's what you were going for but that is what it reminded me of. Which is a reason why I loved it so much! I haven't seen a story told like that in a long time.

I enjoyed the very end. That was not what I was expecting.

I see no room for improvement. This story was perfect in punctuation and spelling.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Spongebob Poem  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Linda!

I have read "Spongebob Poem" and I would like to offer some thoughts and possible room for improvement.

I happen to love Spongebob and I really like this poem as well. It was to the point. The rhythm of this was great and flowed smoothly.

It may have been just a tad too short. You could have possibly gone more in depth and mentioned Sandy Cheeks, Mr. Krabs, and possibly even Pearl or Plankton. The mention of those other characters would have made it even better than it already is.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Storymistress!

In all my years here, I have never read the faqs. I didn't really need to now but I was just curious. I just came back to wdc after a long hiatis and I actually thought I would read through the faqs to see if there was something I never knew about or forgot. I am happy to report that I still remember everything covered in here.

I must tell ya this....the main reason I am reviewing this is because I have never ever had the opportunity to review a faq and probably will never get the opportunity again! *Laugh*

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Golden Garbage  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello GreenNerd,

I have read "Golden Garbage" and I would like to share my thoughts on it with you.

This was very well done and I love how you were arguing with the paper. It had a fantastic flow, rhyme, and angry tone.

The only error I encountered was the word "Suprized". That word is actually with an s, not a z. Simple mistake that I make all the time. After all, you spell prize with a z. That's what I've always though, anyway.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of A Sleepy Battle  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello Maria!


I have read "A sleepy battle and I would like to share my thoughts on it.

This was very well written and describes perfectly what a lot of people (myself included) battle nightly or almost nightly. I did not encounter any grammatical errors while reading this. Fantastic piece!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello DrSmith,

I have just read You are What you eat and I want to give you my thoughts on it.

This was short and incredible! It gave me a bit of a laugh and I could even picture the people in my head wearing the overalls. Also I heard them speaking. Sure, the spelling made me cringe but that was how the guy was talking. *Laugh* } Great job!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of The End  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Keaton!

I have read your poem titled "The End" and I thought I would offer you my opinions about it. The title alone pulled me in to read more. Then I saw how long it was which definitely piqued my curiosity as I don't ever recall seeing a poem on here that length.

There were no grammatical errors and the rhythm of this poem was superbly done!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Number One Guy  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Hello Enga!

This was a really great read.....It was short and to the point. With that said, personally I believe that it would have been even better if this was a little bit longer ad a little more detailed. I really was no expecting the letter to be from Nick Sr. hahaha That part made me laugh!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Big Bad Wolf,

I have read "February 29th and $10 Watches"  and I'd like to give my thoughts on it.

I can't believe I didn't think of this! I never look at the date on my watch though other than just now. My watch says it's 3-17, which was yesterday. Maybe some day watch companies will get that right.

Very well written and thought out!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (1.5)
Hello Aicha,

I have read "Text me but plz dont call"  and I offer you my thoughts on it.

It was very difficult to read. So many grammatical errors. A lot of punctuation errors. And it was was not pleasant to read at all because of all the errors.

I suggest you completely redo it. Of course that's only a suggestion and by no means do you have to do it.

I hope I have been of some help.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (2.5)
Hello xjocax,

I have read this and I will be offering you possible suggestions. Of course you should not at all feel obligated to change a thing.

Technically, everything was spelled great and described with painting a clear mental image of how you wanted the in and out to work.

This could possibly be because I love zombie stuff and was even in a zombie movie, but really unless you want this to be a comedy all those types of zombies are not needed. This would work splendidly if it was funny. Maybe narrow the list down a tad. Just a suggestion.

Happy writing!

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of My World  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Nicki,

I came to look at your site and thought I may as well review it too.


Absolutely love your page! It's got a lot here and it's nice to see your picture too. I see absolutely no areas that should be improved.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Why do you write?  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello teri,

I think perhaps that you should have an option that says all of the above. That's what I would have said, but I chose "to express feelings". And it most definitely is fun. I get to create things that don't exist and I get to make people up. Yes that's quite fun. lol

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Time To Write  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Leigh,

I loved this poll because I often wonder when other writers write. I do not spend nearly as much time writing as I should or have in the past few years. I have only written letters for a while. Now the writing bug has bitten me again. Yay!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello ishippen,

This was a nice read about a guy's paranoia about something. I could actually envision everything occur as I read this. There were no errors and it was just an all around great read!

Write on!

Jenny
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