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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
I'm good at...
I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
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Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review of Marriage  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Lina!

I am a fellow wdc addict who stopped by to read this poem.

First of all, I love the look of this. I really love that this is in the form of a triangle! I thought that was quite clever!

You have described marriage very nicely in such a short amount of space.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Just Chill Out!  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Patrece!

I am a fellow wdc addict, dropping by to leave a review.

This picture just cracks me up! THIS is my idea of cooking for sure! I really wish that I created that or something close to that. I LOVE the creativity and humor of this!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Gervic!

I absolutely love when I see that somebody created something like this. Lots of wdc members have something like this but each one is like a snowflake: Not one is like the other at all. I love seeing everybody's creativity shine through making their own unique merit badge list. I am partial to list of any kind, myself.

What I really liked about this one is that the merit badges that you do have, show up and the ones that you don't, all have the same symbol.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Letter to Paul  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello Shadowpup!

This was a very good letter telling just of how you feel towards your brother, Paul. I am sorry to find out that you and your brother are on these kinds of terms. Some siblings are just as different as night and day and want nothing to do with one another. I know many siblings like that. I hope that one day, it just happens to work out.

Just one thing I'd like to point out. Just simple mistakes that can be easily overlooked when writing such a piece. I have done it very often, myself. You said: This are mistakes that, I believe you meant "These"


Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Social Networking  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Jenny!

This definitely describes facebook well, in such a short amount of space. What really gets me is all of the food pictures. Nothing out of the ordinary. Just normal food that they are eating or are about to eat. I enjoy seeing pictures of trees way more because I thin trees are pretty. Their food on the other hand is nothing to brag about. *Laugh*

This was well written and I don't see any areas that need improvement.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of ABANDONED  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Geoff!

I have read your poem "Abandoned" and I would like to share my impressions about it.

As I read it, I felt the sad tone of it. You portrayed the emotion of this quite well.

I see no areas that need any improvement. This was very well done.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tim!

I am not really one that is into sports at all but this was exceptional. This poem was very well done. In such a short amount of time, you have captured the love of playing a sport so amazingly!

It flowed nicely and had great rhytm and rhyme.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of The Call  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Singer!

I really love halloween and anything written with the holiday's elements throughout.

This was quite good and I could see everything come to life as I read it. The flow and rhythm was perfect!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of A Chance at Life  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Featherpen!

I knew that when I clicked on this to open that it was going to be very short since that is what the description said. When I started reading it, I wished it was longer. This was so well written and extremely descriptive! Absolutely beautiful wording and it painted a great picture in my mind's eye. Well done!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of I hurt  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Marci!

First of all I am very sorry to find out what you are going through. That just has to be really tough to deal with. I hope that you find something to help you out with that.

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Everything flowed smoothly and rhymed quite nicely!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Jenna!

First of all, I would like to say what an awful thing to have happened. I honestly have no idea which is worse: Being in a major car accident or having your old enemy as a nurse. I agree with you on the fact that she had it worse. *Laugh*

My only suggestion is for this sentence: From a beret wearing, poetry writing art school protege to a short-skirt wearing, pompom waving cheerleading fool in a few short months. It would sound better if you just mentioned wearing once. Example: From a beret wearing, poetry writing, art school protege to a short skirt clad, pom pom waving..... Just sounds a little better if a word isn't repeated in a short space.

I hope I have helped.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of More About Me  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sherri!

I really enjoy reading about people around this community and finding out just about who they really are. Coincidentally, I also have something by the same title as this. Great minds!

What I really got from this is that you like to do unto others as they have done to you basically. I am that way as well and I think everybody should be but unfortunately not everybody is.

This was a great read and I'm glad to know you a little more after reading this.

Write on!

enny




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Review of Colors of Fall  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Connie Ann!

This was such a terrific poem! I could see everything in my mind so vividly with the fantastic painting of words!

I think that the only thing that may have made this any better was if you had the actual colors that you have mentioned.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lefthanded Penhandler!


I am not sure exactly why but I love to read different stories of people about 9/11. I suppose because that day affected everybody, especially the people that lived in that area. That day will forever be imbedded into the minds of many people in the nation and even the world.

Although this was very tragic, I really love that you did not lose your dad on that day. All because of an accident. There are many cases where lives were spared because of chance. There are people alive simply because they were too sick to go in that day.

You have made me think with this: There are actually heroes everyday that never get the credit for being a hero. Teachers often go above and beyond for their students.

I really have no suggestions. This was written beautifully.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of My big dream  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Izzy!

This was a very good story, in content. I could not seem to read fast enough to find out just what happeed next. Definitely kept me on the edge of my seat! Very well done.

Although the story was great in content, I gave it a 3.5 rating because of technicality. For example:

You have things like this all throughout- "You look pretty star-struck, squirt", Nick said. I grinned. "Squirt? That's a new one! Well, yeah I'm star-stuck. I mean, this is where my heroes play." (when two people are talking, it's a different paragraph each time When someone else is talking, it's supposed to be a completely new paragraph.

Then you had this- -aldsfjalksdfjlaksdfjl;askdfj. I just hugged my favorite player!!- I do not understand why all of those letters are in the start of this. It really is unnecessary

With a little bt of polishing, this story would be phenomenal!

I really hope that I have helped.


Write on!

Jenny



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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Poppinoffalot!

Well, this is not a great start in life at all. As I was reading it, I had hopes that it would get better but unfortunately it did not. At least you had a loving grandma (who was nt your grandma,really) so that's something.

I would have personally liked this more if you perhaps talked about your entire childhood, not just the first year.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sunnystarr!

This was a short, sweet, and right to the point fantastic little poem. Of course there are only so many letters in the name to work with so obviously it was short, sweet, and to the point. Might I add that acrostic is one of my favorite stles of poetry.

Very well done!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Ride The Wind  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello T.L

Seeing the description of this, I knew that it could have gone many different ways. I know many people that ride and ths captured how everyone feels about riding. Of course they can not all put it into such amazing wording as you have here.

I see abslutely no room for improvement!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Old Bear!

Let me start out by saying that my rating is no where near as high as it should be but it only lets me give five stars!

This was just a fantastic poem! Actualy, as I read it I could totally see it being sung to kids in usc class or something. It had very good rhyme, rhythm, and flow. Best of all was the content. I absolutley loved the story you painted with your words throughout this poem!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ben!

What a fantastic poem! That is exactly how I feel about twitter: Trying to find something worth looking at but being unabe to really find anything worthwhile. I don't know about you but personally speaking, I gave up on twitter. It never got any better for me.

I did not see any room for improvement throughout here.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Ode to Coffee ...  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Bella!

I loved this poem very much! So much in fact, that I shared it with a couple of friends. I did not at all take credit for it, just so you know. I only wish that I wrote it. The rhyming was excellent and the rhythm was fantastic! Oh and of course the topic was just superb and is how I feel on a daily basis!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lexi Joy!

This was a really great story! I must say I wondered when it was going to be funny. I was not displeased! It turned out totally funny. Like a joke. If I could remember things more, I would totally tell people that! *Laugh*


I have no suggestions to give you. This was a terrific piece!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Tina!

I thought that this was a great how to article! It went through all of the elements of writing stories about the supernatural beings. It was very well thought out.

On a personal note, I would have been even happier with it if it did not mention Twilight at all. To me, those are fairies, not vampires.

Write on!

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Peaches!

Wow! This was indeed an incredible thing to read!

I was born in the late 70s. I know all of these commercials though because I love tv! Well, really only thing I'm not hip to is “Biggby Coffee jingle:" Or bigby coffee at all.

This is a great thing you brought up “Be good to the last drop.” Are they talking to me? Or the coffee? Now I will wonder that every time I see the commercial.

On one last note regarding commercials: When was seven years old, my parents and their company were talking. I happened to be walking by when someone quoted a commercial "how do you spell relief?" I walked right through at that time, stopped, said "r-e-l-i-e-f" then went along my way!

Write on!

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fictiondiva!

I just absolutely love good parodies and this was just outstanding! So outstanding in fact that as I read it, my mind did not read it in my voice. My mind read it in Weird Al's voice with the actual music playing. You did so amazing at this, that it could be a Weird Al song!

Write on!

Jenny
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