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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello P Dykie!

This was well written and quite humorous. This was a great little explanation of what love really is. We make self sacrifices.

When I read this: "Son, marriage is like a job. It is also probably the hardest job you will ever have in your life. The one difference between a job and a marriage is that with marriage, you never get to retire." My very first thought was that is what parenthood is like for sure. I have no marriage experience but now upon reflecion about it, I can totally see how it fits there as well.

This part: My wife is known for remaining for extended periods of time beneath cascades of water hot enough to boil spaghetti. made me think: "who doesn't like a shower that hot? Maybe it is just a female thing. The simile was completely hilarious and made me laugh out loud!

All around great piece and very funny!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Cuzzin Cecil!

Writing.com is for many writers and readers of many experience level. I know that when I first came here, I was way too overwhelmed and left for a while. Then I came back, determined, and did I got very familair with the sire.

Unlike you, I rely on reviewing to give me gift points. We all have our ways though. Reading in genres that you never thought you'd read, then reviewing then is great. Reviewing is not only for the writer but also the reader.

As far as technical errors, I did not see any. This was written quite well.

Write on!

Jenny



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Review of Saturday AM  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jerseyboy!

This was a terrific poem! I loved how you had the names of the characters of the shows in there. I asmit, they all sounded familiar but I was only a hundred percent sure about Lone Ranger and Tonto.

This was very well written and I don't see any room for improvement. I only wish that I could remember what shows those other characters are from.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Dead Gorgeous  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Flamingcherry!

I would just like to start off by telling you that this was verywell written and I see no area that requires work.

This pooem has a great subject matter about beauty and people's appearances. I would never get any kind of surgery because I'd look so unbelievably fake. (And I will never in this lifetime be able to afford it)

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Hambone!

This was very well wriiten. I liked how you said in here that you see life recorded on your face. That is a great way to look at it. It just bums me out to look into the mirror and see laugh lines and crows feet. I keep trying not to make any facial expression for anything but I find humor in everything it seems. So difficult not to laugh.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Planet Earth  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello JP Murphy!

The title of this poem made me think it was going to be a poem about nature but once I started to read it I saw that it was indeed not about nature at all. In stead though, it was more about the people in the world.

This was a very observant poem. That is how a lot of people act. All some people do is lie, cheat, and steal.

I really have no suggestions to improve this.

Write on!

Jenny






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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Thrumyeyes!

This poem definitely portrays the struggle that all writer's have at one point or another. For most writers these are frequent struggles. Personally speaking, these things are all reasons why I am only a recreational writer.

This poem was very well written. It rhymed nicely and had great rhythm. I see no room for improvement.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Mc_Young!

I believe that everybody has felt like this at one time or another; especially someone in high school. I think what you have desceibed here is actually a crush. Of course I don't know for sure. You are the only one that honestly knows the answer.

This was very well written. It flowed smoothly and effortlessly. It had a nice rhythm to it and this poem was full of emotion.


Write on!

Jenny



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Review of As My Love Dies  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Kathie!

First of all, I would like to say that I'm sorry you had to endure this, watching your husband suffer. Something I am sure you will never forget. At least he is no longer in any kind of pain.

This was written so fantistically. I could feel the strong emotions within you as I read this. Quite a powerful poem.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello PDyke!

This was absolutely hilarious! I can totally relate, other than I have a cat. I do not run, but walking outside in the dark, all these things that you have mentioned here, go through my mind and completely freak me out. Then I have to run so nothing gets me. (even if it is only in my head and I HATE runnin)

I laughed outloud a few times reading this. My ultimate favorite things in here are: Except for Great White Sharks, annual prostate exams, and my Mother-in Law’s tuna fish casserole I almost spit my drink on the screen when I read that! Then this one completely tickled my funny bone: The occasional fluttering bat, and a lone paper delivery man, who raced through empty streets as if fleeing some unknown horror, we were completely alone.

This was very well written and gave me a great laugh!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of I remember...  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello drkelley!

This was a very well written recollection about what September 11th was like for you in 2001. Everybody was affected in some way that day and remember that day well.

That is quite interesting that you had an urge to watch the news that morning which was not part of your daily routine. Almost as if you knew that you would see something that was out of the ordinary.

You said When commercial flights were allowed to resume, I remember the fear – and pride – I felt as Diana boarded a plane to go on a scheduled business trip. I knew she was a little scared and for good reason. I just couldn't imagine just how scary that was for the both of you.

I really see no room for improvement. This was wonderfully written with your emotions of that time.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of The System  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Jason!

This was absolutely phenomonal! I wish that I could give it five more stars!

I have seen a great amount of things written, inspired by Edgar Allen Poe. This blows all of the other things I've read that were inspired by him, right out of the water!

This was written JUST like "The Raven. I only wonder how long it took you to mimic the original poem so wonderfully! It would have taken me a long time then I just would have probably given up the entire idea.

Very well done!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello hyperiongate!

I don't know if this was your intention but when I read the title, instantly Joe Walsh's song "Life's Been good so far" came to mind.

In such a short amount of space, you have used such great and descriptive wording.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Janice!

I was browsing things to read, rate, and review and when I saw this title, I just had to open it up. I don't think there's one person today that doesn't know about roasts.

As I read this, I was picturing Maryann on stage in a throne as you were roasting her on stage along with all of the pwer reviwer captains waiting their turn to do the same.

This was very well done and humorous. Great job!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of The night before  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Dhu-Glas!

This poem was very humorous. It made me smile and I nodded my head in aggreement as I read this.

Christmas is definitely a commercialized holiday and has been for quite a long time. This poem did quite well while pointing that out and at the same time giving the reader a chuckle.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello fullquiver!

This was definitely funny. However, I did not laugh at all. Only becua I can kind of relate and I am workng so very hard to maintain my looks. I by no means think that I look like a gift bestowed upon man or woman but I do not want to "grow old gracefully" AT ALL! Just for my own sake.

I think that if anyone wants to have a tummy tuck or liposuction just to feel better about themselves, then they should do so. Also if they have the money. If you don't have the money, you can't exactly do any of that though.

This was very well written and was pretty humorous. The only suggestion I have is: To Tuck or Not to Tuck, that is my question. I think that since you have that it is your question, that maybe you should have To tuck or not to tuck? that is my question.


Write on!

Jenny



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Review of Ordinary Family  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Number_8!

This poem brought a smile to my face and it made me chuckle. The descriotion is absolutely right. Any and I am pretty sure that every family goes through these types of things. Some familes are more dysfunctional than others, so of course those familes are worse off.

My favorite stanza was Sweet old Grandpa Evan

passed on and went to heaven

and evil Granny Belle

died and went to hell.
 Really made me chuckle to read that part!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Biblioboy!

I have read your poem "The Marigold & The Rose" and I would like to share my thoughts on it.

This was very beautifully written. The words were very descriptive and were set into a great rhythm. The flow of this was very well done. I was able to envision everything described within the poem.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sean!

This was really good imagery and I could see everything happen in my mind's eye as I read it. Exceptional eording and superb rythm. The poem flowed nicely.

The first line My eyes open and flutter at the intense light. really grabbed me and pulled me in.

All around great poem!

Write on!

Jenny



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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kat!

I thought that this poem was just absolutely phenomenal! It started out with why some people joing and ended with how it changes a lot of people. Unfortunately, a lot of people are never the same individuals as they once were before they joined.

I see absolutely no room for improvement!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Number_8!

This was such a terrific poem! I loved the style, rhythm and ryme of it. My absolutely favorite part was that a few of their songs were in here and that they stood out in bold.

I really do not see any areas that need improvement. I only wished that it was just a bit longer.


Write on!

Jenny



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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Christen!

This was a fun and interesting personality quiz. The result I got by the way was non-E.


I do have a suggestion. I think that when asking the multiple choice questions, the answers should be labeled with the letters. It just makes it simpler for the quiz takers.

Write on!

Jenny



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Review of CALEB  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Geoff!

This was an interesting little story about Caleb and what was going on in his mind. This has great potential!

I really would have liked to have read more of what made him that way. When did it start? What were his old thoughts? How did he actually feel about his dementia other than knowing that it was his own fault? Why exactly was guilt always his companion? What made him tick? Thia leaves a lot to the imagination.

I hope that I have been of some help.

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Review of I am Sam  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello Popping Corn!

I thought that this was an incredibly unique poem. This had a great story about Sam. It had terrific rhythm and rhyme and flowed effortlessly.

The only thing that I am wondering is what IS Sam exactly? I only ask because he had one red and one orange eye. Humans do not have those eyes. Was he a vampire of some kind?

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello ChuChuRocker!

Wow! I seriously hoped that this was the cause of a great imagination and was completely made up. Unfortunately, after reading the very end in the epilogue, sadly I do not think that is the case.

This poem started out great. I thought for sure that it was going to be happy and upbeat all throughout. At some pont though, my happy feeling reading this, changed to sadness. What a horrible life from childhood on. I wish that was not the case. Although, it was absolutely horrible and disgusting, I was slightly relieved to find out that was not the biological father.

Reading the epilogue and finding out that it was all true, made it even sadder. It brought a tear to my eye as well. I am very happy to see that the ending was on a happier note.

Write on!

Jenny





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