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Review of Soul Mates  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Mouser,

This is right up my alley! In fact, I am rather surprised I have not stumbled upon this sooner!

This told of the differences you and your wife have in the matter of astrology. Where daily horoscopes are read, those are very wrong and just thrown together. Such as "You will have good fortune today" Those have as much credibility as fortune cookies. Interestingly enough though, when astrology talks about your personality aspects and compatibility aspects they are pretty much dead on. The very same rings true for the chinese horoscope signs. I have seen proof a countless amount of times. I have even gone through it as well. Plus young souls and old souls really do not match up well either. They are both on different journeys within their own paths and do not compliment one another on the journeys.

So with that said, I do hope you are proving the astrologer and myself wrong. That is one instance that I would not at all mind to be proven wrong.

Write on!

Jenny







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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lucas!

I have open minded parents as well and I could relate to the mother part for sure. We had very similar childhoods in that aspect with the rolling.

I hate dancing though. I always feel like I\some convulsing animal or something. The only time I danced was when I was too drunk to care and that was years ago.

I only encountered one error. An a hundred and eighty eight pound six foot four just take out an.

My favorite part was But instead he would open his front door, stand behind the screen and just watch me. Lock his crow’s feet framed eyes on me and stare. Eventually, his hostility spawned our enmity. We never spoke. But when I would see him looking at me, I would sing and spin and sashay and shante. It felt like every effeminate step I took was like a piercing insult towards him. That I was making it as hard as it could be for him to look at me I just do not understand why anybody has to do that. He was clearly judging you. That is not right for anybody to do! I LOVED LOVED LOVED that you kept eye contact with him! I just do not understand people like that. It does not affect them!

I hope that to this day you are doing that and doing just what makes you happy!

Write on!

Jenny






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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Peach!

This was very well written about what goes on with somebody who is depressed. There are several people in the world that are like that. Fortunately, there is help out there. There is medications and counselling for when just speaking with friends and family about it do not help at all.

I personally have known a few people in my life that were depressed without knowing why at all. The declining change in mood that you mentioned, does in fact really push people away if they are not ready to deal with it daily from you, even if they have the best intentions. If you are still a teenager and this was not just written years ago, confide in somebody and have them take you to see a professional. This can be fixed and you can be happy again.

As far as grammar, everything was spot on and you have portrayed the emotions and thoughts quite well.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of Coffee and Korea  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Martin!

Being the coffee addict that I am, I had to read this. I can not start my day without any and I find it pointless to even get out of bed if there is none in the house....although I never let THAT happen.

You said Not minding a nice gulp of hot sugar-water every now and then, again I adjusted. I love sugar but that made me cringe. I just would not be able to live there at all. hahaha

Well done and write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Simple Dykie!

This was an absolutely brilliant read. It kept me engaged and had humor sprinkled at exactly the right spots.

A couple of my favorite things:

It was replaced with a nightmare involving a surly, impatient gravedigger, the hammering of nails to seal my coffin, and my still living body being buried deep in the cold dark earth. When I read that, I had to laugh because I've had similar things happen more often than not.

They must be culinary geniuses. The combination of thin and light vanilla cookies coated in a mouth-watering layer of caramel, lightly sprinkled with just the right amount of coconut, and laced with smooth and creamy chocolate strips is.... is.... Sorry, I'm getting a little off track here. Thanks a bunch! Now I want a samoa and girl scout cookie season is over!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Home Improvement  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Daffy!

This was quite humorous and it was written very well with the humor in the exact right spots.

Given the name of this and the topic, I was picturing "Tim the Tool Man Taylor" played by Tim Allen on the show Home Improvement doing these things. He definitely did those sorts of things often. I almost expected a talk with Al or Wilson in here.


One of my favorite parts was Now locate another problem because the first problem you locate will be either too challenging for bob villa and therefore hopeless, or located in a part of the house more suitable for cave dwellers. This gave me a nice laugh.

The ending was great and tied the whole thing up very nicely.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Grayson Jack!

This was just absolutely hilarious and really tickled my funny bone because I have also thought these exact things. In fact, it is because of these things that I don't even watch the news. I only watch the weather, just to get a general idea of temperatures.

A couple of my favorite parts:

“Back in my day we thanked God for making our parents allow their children to eat the lead bearing paint that lined our walls. It provided sustenance…and we turned out mostly functional”.
 I have thought this many times. People act like everything is the end of the world now.

It’s not good if I feel I must take Xanax before the five o’clock news just so I can make it through the full hour without building a doomsday bunker while sobbing inconsolably. I laughed when I read this. It is so true. The news seems to be nothing but bad news. So I avoid it as not to feel like toy have described here.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Coke Addict  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Wayne!

This is just a fantastic song about the other kind of coke addiction!

It had a great beat, rhythm, and rhyme. The only line that I didn't really see went well with the rest was Gonna let this thing kill me, now I got to will me to keep goin on and stay strong and find something to fill me It was longer and threw off the rhythm of it. Content wise though it was great. Maybe try to condense it.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Lions crown!

I loved this. It was very interesting and quite funny. My favorite lines are who gave us lots of money
so we bought a stereo Not what was expected which made it funny.

You said (sung to the tune of " joy to the world") but I still don't know what tune that was. Was it the christmas version or the Three Dog Night version of Joy To The Wrld?

Write on!

Jenny





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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello typingrhyme!

Man! I can relate to this! I would definitely never have a computer type job because of this very reason. I mean to do a ton of thing on the computer but get sidetracked from all of the addictions. So, I multi task as best I can!

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of Shopping!!  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Grimmy!

This was an interesting thing to read. I personally don't care too greatly for shopping. Especially being with someone for over an hour in one store. Nothing is that interesting and we do not have a lot of money to begin with. It is cool sometimes to get something that you have not had before if you have the money for it when ya see it.

I don't see any real room for improvement on this.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Cootaloo!

This was quite an interesting thing to read and it definitely brought a smile upon my face. Probably because I agree.

Things like "If he has me why does he need this smut?". Or the "Masturbation is the same as cheating" excuse. WRONG!!!! Cheating is the same as cheating. is what I have always thought! I do not see the logic on how that could be considered cheating.

I see absolutely no room for improvement!

Write on!

Jenny






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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello David!

In such a short amount of time reading, I had a few terrific laughs with this. At first I thought you were talking about someone that was rich in a very well established, almost snooty neighborhood. When I saw the twist, it gave quite a laugh!

The ending was perfect. There was not really room for improvement.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Endearing  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Natalie!

This was great and very funny. So very true about cats! Only thing different about mine is, whenever she's looking outside she wants out.

This part made me laugh out loud! . The cats are saying, “That was really cool last time when she walked out in her bathrobe in the dark. I got caught between her feet and she almost landed right on my tail! Let’s do that again!” Very funny. Maybe because I can relate. I've stepped on mine a few times because of that. You'd think she'd learn by now but nope.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Danny!

What a very talented little girl you have there! This story was absolutely fantastic and seeing that it came from a three year old was even more fantastic!

It not only was clever and everything went together quite well but there was a good little moral at the end.

I did wonder though how you did this and I had different scenarios in my head. I imagined your daughter telling you, then you were typing it all up like a stenographer or she told you and you remembered it. Maybe even you had a voice recorder. I like to get behind the scenes sometimes.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Kathie!

What an awful thing to read. It was written very well but the actual content was horrible. I was really glad to read that nothing more happened. I am really unsure but I think that something like that happens to more females than not. Something similar happened with me and the father of a friend who was a cop so naturally, I thought he was a "safe" adult like you did.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Lynne!

This was a great thing to read. I am sorry to have read about the death of your father but I am happy to have read the entire family was there and he died in peace where he wanted.

My favorite part was He flung his arms in the air, looked around and muttered, “I was almost there.” I find humor in all things. If I was there then, I would have chuckled at that or at least smiled. That had to have made it easier on you. I would think so anyway.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Winter Writing  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Alabama!

This was very well written. I can totally relate to hating winter and shopping sprees. With winter though, I do not have my nose going haywire being inside.

Then in spring unlike you, I do not suffer from allergies. Which by the way was a great ending that gave me a bit of a chuckle.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Inkwell!

The title of this caught my attention because I just absolutely love dream catchers. I have one above my bed and one above my closet.

This is only an eight line poem but you have said everything so perfectly in here that it really does not need any improvement.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Hell's Angel  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello T.L!

This was a really great song about the bike gang Hell's angels. Absolutely loved every word of this!

The topic was great and the content was fabulous. The rhythm was terrific. I see absolutely no areas that need improvement.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of In Your Face  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with UNITED  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Hello Keaton!

The form of this was good. There were no spelling or grammar errors.....there was one but I will get to that momentarily. The flow and rhythm were just great.

Us straight people Don’t go around screaming
We really love vagina No. Straight people do not do that since straight people have never had to worry about getting beat up or made fun of for who they are attracted to.

Here is the error I mentioned earlier A real classic dike The correct word is dyke. Dike IS a word but it means something totally different.

My favorite part Get your freak on
Spank the monkey
Ride that pony
Do the holy baloney
Munch some carpet
Chomp some linoleum
Scissor each other... Despite the fact that spank the monkey is masturbation. That is a completely different topic itself.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Truesecret!

This was a very incredible thing to read. While it is incredible, I gave it a 3.0 rating because it does not at all belong in adult, emotional, and relationship genres.

I see absolutely nothing what s ever about relationships. This should be under fod, hobby, or baking. This is all about food and the descriptions of the bread were so amazing. If I didn't just stuff myself with food, I totally would have hungered for bread after reading that.

Maybe you meant this t be a metaphor but I really don not know how at all. No mention at all of a person. Maybe it is a personal thing. I am personally totally a literal type of person.

Write on!

Jenny



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Review of The Walk Home  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello R. Stone!

Reading this made me remember the times that I had to walk in the dark (ok, run) all by myself. I had these same or very similar thoughts any time I walk at night, alone. This, plus there's werewolves and mummies walking around and such!

There is just one thing I am wondering sure it was a man coming out of the darkness to slit my throat, or worse. What is worse than that?

Write on!

Jenny





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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jenna!

These lyrics were amazing! My kind of song for sure.

There was just one minor problem i'ts not me you see The apostrophe is in the wrong place.

My favorite part is Shake me
take me
hate me
but you'll never break me
you are nothing
and I am everything It had a great rhythm.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of Wake Up? Dead?  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Geoff!

This was incredibly short and definitely to the point but not real sweet.

I am not sure but I think that we all have these thoughts. I know that I do and have thought these things over half of my life. The one thing I CAN NOT know and have absolutely no control of at all, I want to know the answer to while still alive and kicking.

Write on!

Jenny




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