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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
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I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
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In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
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I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
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Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
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pros, books
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Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review of Black on White  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Aundia!

As I read this poem, thought about all of the old black and white photos that my mother has on the living room wall of our ancestors. For some of them, she only knows of names of the people. None of them look really happy either. This poem reminded me about those pictures. Were they all really as unhappy as they all look? What kinds of things did they do? What made them who they are? This poem made me think all of that!

Fantastic job!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kay-Leigh!

I have never read something that was so in depth on a name. I also certainly have never heard of a baby going so long without a name. I did not know such a thing was even possible at all.

I liked how you went through a brief family history. Your mother is something like a super hero to raise children at that age. I could not imagine doing something like that at that age.

All this was just fantastic to read!

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of Heart Broken  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Awesomeness!

first of all, I would like to say before I even started reading this poem, I was just loving the look of it with every stanza as a different color. Very eye catching!

Secondly, as I read this, I felt very strong sadness for the man, having an unrequited love. The poem was very descriptive and told just how it was for him to love someone at first sight and not getting the same thing in return.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Love, Hate, Lote?  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Lillyrose!

The title of this poem, instantly make me think of an Alice In Chains song called "Love Hate Love" by Alice in Chains and the description made me think of the songs "love or confusion" by Jimi Hendrix and "Love Hate sex Pain" by Godsmack.

The poem itself, put me in the same boat. I have been there. Do I love him or am I just annoyed by everything that he does? You have described the push and pull feelings of certain relationships quite well.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Power Unit!

I love limericks, so when I saw this title, I has to come take a look.

These limericks were very funny! Fantastic content as well.

The syllables were slightly off. Not too bad though. In the first one, the fifth line needs just one more syllable. In the second one, the second line needs just one more syllable. Then in the last one, the last line needs just one more syllable.


Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello NayNizzy!

The title of this poem grabbed me, as I love anything Alice In Wonderland. Then I looked at the description and was quite intrigued, so I had to open it up and see what the contents were.

Instantly, this held my attention. I loved the choice of wording. The rhythm was superb.

I do not have a clue if this is what you have intended but after the first stanza, I was totally picturing Alice In Wonderland as she was falling down the hole. Unlike that story, this poem had the hole go even deeper. Like in the second Bill And Ted movie. Sorry, I think in movies a lot. Something I really do not have much control over. *Laugh*

I generally live a stress free life but when I am stressed out, this poem sums it up. You did an amazing job!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello Intuey!

This was a fantastic poem that told about a few ghosts and what they do. It had a really great story with a good rhythm and rhyme. I loved how it got darker towards the end. Especially in the last couple of stanzas.

There is one minor error. You said: "say a prayer to casts the spirits out," It should be cast, not casts.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of In a Daydream  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Mindertwenty!

This was such a clever little, short poem. In such a little amount of space, you have said very well what the mind is. It can take you on many adventures without even getting up or being a certain age.

I liked that it was very short and to the point although I would not have minded one bit if it were any longer.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Sherri's Web page  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sherri!

What a wonderful page that you have here! I love the layout of it and the colors are great. Everything that you said about yourself told me more about you than I've ever known. Perhaps I should have looked in here sooner. I knew nothing about you before. Now I know more than I ever have!

Your grand babies are beautiful, by the way! (As if you had no idea)

Write on!

Jenny





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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello T. Boilerman!

I actually have wondered this very thing at times so I was glad to have stumbled upon this. I personally thought that everybody, or at least more people, were going to say reviewing. I was amazed at all the very diverse answers. Great idea!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Simba's Dilemma  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sum1!

The time has come to judge for the contest: "songs, movies, and more! Oh my!"

This was a terrific poem that fit the required amount of titles in quite nicely. This poem had exceptional rhyming, fantastic rhythm, and it told of a great story. Everything went together so well within this.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Choconut!

Thank you for your entry into "Songs, movies, and more, oh my!" contest!

This was an all around spectacular story. I love that you used more than the required number of titles in the story. It made me smile each time I ran across a title. It all made perfect sense and nothing was out of place or misused.

Then the story itself was just phenomenal! I loved the end where the fairies were all home safe and had a "Nightmare before christmas"!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Alma!

First, I want to tell you how much I loathe those lights! They give me a migraine if I am around them for so long. So, the last year the regular light bulbs were around, I bought some every time I went out. I have a collection of over three hundred of them. My mother gets migraines from the florescent ones as well and she hoarded a little over two hundred of them.

This was pretty well written, telling about the florescent bulbs. I am set for the rest of my life though and will never have those! *Laugh*

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Reaching  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello W.D!

This was quite a heartfelt poem and you showed the emotion of the loss of love quite well in this. I was able to feel the strong and powerful emotion.

This poem had great form, exceptional rhyme, and great rhythm.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Elizabeth!

This was quite a good thing to read. I benefit from all three as well, although my music is quite different than yours to calm down.

There are a lot of people out there, that are very stressed out and wound up but do not do any of these things. If they did at least one of these three things, like you do, it surely would put their minds at ease.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Autumn!

I must be different from a lot of raters. I have been here for seven years and I have always rated just how I thought it should be. In the past, when I gave a deserving one star with a review, I sent it anonymously. Now though, if I rate low, I do not send the review anonymously. I have never been mean but always constructive. Not everyone would see it that way and one even asked me to change the rating, after NOT correcting it like it should have been at all.


This is quite helpful for those raters and reviewers who are scared of hurting feelings. Like you said, It is far better to rate a truthful low than to rate a not so truthful high, which is more hurtful to their work than helpful.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello LilacorFTW!

This was absolutely hilarious! It reminded me of books I read, which are collections of columns from a newspaper humor columnist. If there was a collection of these in a book, you would totally have my money!

Unlike you, I do not have this problem. I just put on clothes and make sure I look decent, then I go start my day. I have not dealt with pantyhose in a very long time. This reminds me one of the reasons that I stopped dealing with them!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Happy Birthday !  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jyo!

I loved how every stanza talked about a different animal and each animal were doing different things. All of the animals were described very well also.

Then the last stanza was about your friend. Such amazing words and it definitely portrayed how much the friendship means to you. I really hope that she liked this poem as much as I did!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Baby Powder  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Bikerider!

This was quite an amazing poem about your granddaughter that made me smile and warmed my heart when reading this. I really hope that she appreciates this when she is older.

It had a great flow, rhyme, rhythm, and the content was very touching!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of The Terrible Gift  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello GeminiGem!

This was a very well written poem about the passing on of breast cancer through the family.

I am sorry that you have gone through such a thing. I really do hope that you have overcome it. It is more like a curse than a gift though.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Joy!

I love to read anything written about wdc because I just love wdc so much!

This poem had great content. However, it needs to be fine tuned to be more of a limerick. A limerick has five lines with the first, second, and last lines all of the same amount of syllables and the middle two lines with a shorter amount of syllables but matching each other.

In the first stanza, you have: 8,9,8,8, and 8 syllables. In the second stanza, the third and fourth lines are perfect with five syllables in each. The only line in that one that doesn't match is the second one that has 9 syllables, where the rest have 8. Then the last stanza has the first, second, and last lines with 8,9, and 8 syllables. The middle to have 8 and 7. So, if you polish up the syllables, wold be happy to re-review this! The content is great, just the syllables don't match up.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Earth's Poem  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Jellyfish!

This poem had terrific imagery. I could see the animals with each description. It had a fantastic flow, rhythm, and rhyme to it.

Most of all, this had such a fantastic message that I wish more people were aware of or cared about. People are destroying earth and many just do not seem to even care.

Write on!

Jenny



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Review of Sidewinder  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Sara!

These lyrics had a terrific beat and rhythm to them. This song was different from other song lyrics I have read because it did not have a chorus but in stead, there was the same line repeated at the end of every stanza which I took as the chorus.

Very well done!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Mirror Mirror  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Sue!

This was a really great poem and something a lot of people can relate too. It was very funny, upbeat, and had a great rhythm to it.

The only things I can really relate to so far are bags and the time going y faster than ever. I was born with bags though, so that part is really no big deal. I often say I really should stop laughing so much. I have laugh lines and crow's feet Well, at least ya know I have a good sense of humor!

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Tonibarri!

This was a great sort of inspirational, pick me up poem! I did not personally need a pick me up but I often try to cheer others up by telling them that tomorrow is another day and there is always something good that happens every day. Also that the glass is half full! This poem goes right along with what I tell people.

This is pretty much the same advice I give: Think positive, trust in yourself
When you are feeling low
If in yourself you can believe
Your confidence will grow My advice would sound even better if I rhymed! I'm going to work on that for the next time. I'll be speaking like a Dr. Suess character or something.

Write on!

Jenny
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