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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
I'm good at...
I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
I will not review...
Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review of Glory Daze  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Cheri!

This was a clever entry for
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The poem was short and had just the right amount of band names. I absolutely loved the rhythm of this poem!

This brought a smile to my face, reading. With the recent passing of David Bowie, the line "Wham! Bam! Thank you ma’am," made me think of one of his songs.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello D!

Thank you for your entry in
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This was very good and made me laugh right from the very beginning. Which is my favorite kinds of stories. I was absolutely loving and cracking up about the lady getting angry.

Everything in here was just perfect and not one of those bands that you chose to use were out of place. Gave me such a nice giggle!

Write on!

Jenny






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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Sarajane!

This was very clever and was the same subject I am sure that many women have thought. Personally speaking, I loved how my legs looked in pantyhose. The main thing I thought was "I really have to shave, then put on pantyhose and just like magic, I no longer have to shave. I definitely had a good chuckle reading this.

There was one little error that I noticed. You had: Nothing in more gross than seeing..... It should have said "nothing is". Simple typing error.

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Jenny



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Review of JUST BREATHE  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sandra!

This was a great entry for songs, movies, and more! Oh My! contest. This was a little story about Christine at a camp.

You fit all the titles in nicely and the story was a great read!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Megan!

I am not too hip on metaphors in poems or stories because they always seem to fly right over my head. I am a more of a say what you mean, literal, type of person. I caught this one though! The ogre is Phoebe's tragic leukemia and Jack is there protecting and looking over his little sister. Of course I could be completely wrong about the ogre being a metaphor at all. This could have just been a fairy tale type of poem. Either way, this was very well done!

I hope that when and if Phoebe and Jack find out about this poem, that they absolutely love it!

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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Maryann!

There is nothing I enjoy more quite like a good list. This was a very well done list. At very first glance, I noticed that it was very pleasing to just look at. Being the list lover that I am, I was very pleased with the looks. The list was actually longer than I had imagined and I loved the smiley faces. That added a nice, happy touch to an already happy instance of giving awardicons.

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Jenny





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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Lorilady!

This poem was absolutely phenomenal! The subject matter was of the negative aspects of being laid off. It was very dark and put in great emotions about the inner feelings on the subject.

The choice of wording in this was superb and caught my attention, holding me from the first stanza. This whole poem actually made me think of the works of Edgar Allen Poe. I could be wrong but reading this definitely makes me think that he was an inspiration for you in writing this.

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Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello Borgy!

This has really good potential to be a nice little poem about autumn. However you have it reading as a little paragraph. In order for it to fall more into the poetry category, you should have lines and take out some words. It does not necessarily have to rhyme to be considered a poem but it should be in a different kind of format.

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Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Bruce!

You did exceptionally well with this little piece. This is exactly how a dog would act and definitely how a dog would think.

I believe that this would be more fitting if it was listed as a monologue because this was from the dog's perspective as he talked.

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Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tim!

What a very wonderful poem that tells exactly just how you feel about your girlfriend. The wording in this, actually almost made me feel the same way about your girlfriend. Really, I am kidding there but I definitely have felt exactly like that about a certain individual in my life.


My favorite part was the simile: Like a crystal blue, exotic day,
Forever unblemished and sparkling


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Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Whitemorn!

This was quite enjoyable to read. As I read this I actually thought of it as a song. Given the content, it is a safe bet that it would in fact be a country song. I could totally see that!

I loved the story of Skully. I could see him quite well with the descriptions. 6'10? Woo! He sure was bigger than anybody that I have ever known! Skully was definitely somebody you would not want to mess with.

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Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Cat!

This started out fantastic, with a terrific memory of your mother dancing around, being carefree. Then suddenly the mood shifted to your mothers change in personality and appearance and how she just was not the same at all any more.

I was able to feel the emotions as I read this. Both the good and bad emotions.

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Jenny




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Review of Once Upon A Cock  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello Keaton!

This was a very interesting poem. As I was reading it, I thought that perhaps it was a metaphor poem about something such as racism. Then as I reached the ending, I realized that it was not. Just a silly kind of poem about different names of a body part. You could have made it a metaphor poem though if you chose to do so.

I enjoyed the read. It was definitely very unique.

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Jenny




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Review of Coffee  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Micah!

I really quite enjoyed this free verse poem. When I was reading this, I was practically able to see all of the things described: The cloudy night sky, the fog, and the moon. I was practically able to feel the cool, crisp air. I was able to see the animals, fog. I was able to hear the dogs barking, and the best of all is feeling the warmth of the coffee and tasting the delightfulness ff it. Fabulous use of the senses!

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Jenny





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Review of Revenge  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Choconut!

Thank you for your entry!

This was very well written, made perfect sense, and not one metaphor or idiom was used out of place. I loved the metaphors and idioms that you chose to use.

I hope to see a future entry from you!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Wastor!

This was really good. The story kept me hanging on. I was actually hoping that more happened but where my mind was taking me as I read this, just does not seem to happen in daily life much.

There only mistake that I encountered was: "It is definitely a proclivity of mine! Does anyone else remember the scene in 9 1/2 weeks were Kim Bassinger dresses up?" The word "were" should be "where"

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Jenny




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Review of Crypt of Flesh  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Daniel!

Quite a very sad poem this was about an aborted fetus. I could definitely feel the emotions within here. To have them die in such a way with no say or nothing beneficial to them at all is just horrible.

I did not think that it was necessary at all though, to mention at the end of the actual poem about how it was written. Just the poem there would have been plenty.

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Jenny



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Review of A Pet's Love  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Stripes!

This poem describes just perfectly what it is like to have a loving pet. More specifically a dog. The wagging of the tail and the licking of your face after you returning home is something that a loving canine definitely is known for. In such a short amount of time, you have captured everything quite well.

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Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Story Weaver!

After reading this poem, I must say that now I want a sundae with all of the goodies mentioned! Fantastic descriptions that made my mouth water.

I only have one suggestion. You said: "And its delightfully cold taste" Cold does not really go with taste since cold is a feeling and not a flavor.

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Jenny




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Review of The Final Outcome  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tim!

This poem describes perfectly about a good relationship. Honor, restraint, hurt, but yet remaining loyal and sticking it through the good times and the bad are perfect ingredients for a great relationship.

I really loved the rhyme and rhythm of this. It flowed smoothly and effortlessly. Perfect all around!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello Bob!

Well, this was definitely an interesting poll. A poll like none other that I have run across.

My answer was not on there. My answer would be "Just stare at it" but I chose "Take a bite an ask if it hurts". I would probably do that after I stared at it for about five minutes or so.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The Dark Society  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Beck!

This was definitely hilarious but there are a few things that I personally think should be mentioned. Like:

Somebody should not park in a handicap parking spot unless they are handicapped. When entering the store, a person should pay attention and enter the door that says enter. When getting ready to leave, put the cart into the cart corral.

I get aisle rage so very often when I'm at the stores. People sure do seem to lack common sense. It really is not that common!

Fantastic piece and I do not see any type of error.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Robin!

I just love when I stumble upon something like this! It was definitely quite hilarious!

You have told this story of a modern family christmas quite well. I could picture it happening for sure. A teenager gabbing on the phone and embarrassed by her mother, at first. Then everybody was singing, all cheerful.

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Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Chris!

I really like to see the different reason everybody has for reviewing. Some of what you have said, rings true for me. You said that you only review things that show promise. It is like that for me as well, as I do not even review things that I can not get through. If it has a lot of mistakes, I will point them out.

Unlike you and many reviewers here: It does not hut me at all, to give a low rating. As long as there is a constructive review about how it was written, it's fine. It is something else entirely, if there is a low rating just because somebody does not like the subject.

When you said . I never take cheap shots. I try to be as kind as possible. I have been
verbally abused, I will NEVER do it to anyone else. I completely agreed. A do unto others as they would do unto you thing.

Lastly, I love lists! So this was just absolutely fantastic, all around for me!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of The Haunting  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Arakun!

I just love this poem! It had a fantastic rhythm and rhyme with a great rhyme!

As I read this, I was expecting it to be dark but I was surprised at the end when I saw that it was really just a lighthearted poem about trick or treaters!

Write on!

Jenny




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