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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
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I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
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Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
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pros, books
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Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review of Tourette-Sestina  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Art Crusade!

First off, I would like to address the rating. The rating for this in particular poem is too low. It should be GC because of the cussing. I'm an extreme fan of cussing and you would think I have tourette's syndrome at times as well.

I completely loved this poem! Of course there are different things of tourette's and the aspect you wrote of is certainly one of them. I laughed reading this too.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of GO YOUR OWN WAY  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello SandraLynn!

The story was about two people that were in a marathon. It has been an exceptionally long time since I have been on a bike but I could almost feel like I was, with some of the descriptions.


I had quite a chuckle a few times as I read this. You fit all of the song titles amazingly throughout this story.

Write n!

Jenny




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Review of My Wife's Escape  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Simple Dykie!

This was very well written and had fabulous descriptions all throughout about the car, "Burt". I thought it was a little unusual that the car had a male name because anyone that I have ever heard of that named their cars, gave them female names. Then again, I thought that anybody can name absolutely anything of their's whatever they want If they choose to do that.

The ending was very good. I would love to see the wife's monologue about Sally.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of My Family History  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Peedee!

I love reading things like these. In fact, I have tried to research my family history, even interviewing older relatives and getting documents. I then decided that I am not good at that andI am better at creating stories. So I gave up on that quest. It is good to see that you did not give up and you have a little bit of history there before reaching a certain point in history. Very well done!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Steve!

This was absolutely incredible! I laughed outloud as I read this poem. It was a great little story about being the grinch.

The flow, rhythm, and rhymes were just perfect.

My favorite part was Underneath the disguise wasn’t Santa at all
But my weeping old friend who’s name is Paul. Gave me a real chuckle.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Joshua!

Terror in the night is a fabulous poem.

I'm not exactly certain but this The stillness brings the ghastly quivers
As the shutters bang I fill with shivers seemed to me to have an Edgar Allen poem flare.

One more thing I must share before ending this review.....The title made me think of the Billy Squier song "Lonely is the Night."

Write on!

Jenny






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Review of The Voices  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello Amy!

I really enjoyed the plot behind this story. The plot was well thought out and creative. I really enjoyed the ending of it!

While I liked the plot, there are some things that need work such as you need to show more in here, not just tell what happened. I still struggle with that at times. It can be a difficult thing to achieve at first but with a bit of practice, it can come with ease.


Periodically, you repeat words in here. That is unnecessary. Example: She had scars, scars on the inside and out. I suggest going through this story and removing the second words unless there is actually dialogue like that not just narration.


You have: The things they shout, they could drive a person mad. Insane. I totally understand what you tried to do though. You tried to give it extra emphasis. I don't think that extra oomph is needed but if you think it is, maybe you can try another word. Like an adjective. Maybe try to cut it down into once sentence without repeat words.


I hope you have found this at least somewhat helpful.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Casper!

This was a great story with amazing descriptions. Some of which made me distort my face, such as: The accompanying crack sounded like a dried stick being broken over a raised knee.


Just my thought, but I don't think this sentence is needed. I chose not to sue and I'll touch on that in a moment.

and could barely hold my coffee cup *Shock* I would've held it with the other hand. Being a regular coffee drinker, I gasped reading that sentence.

Loved the ending! The reason for not sewing was just amazing. The last sentence gave me a chuckle.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Softly!

This was an incredible poem! It started out as an exhibitionist in her own home then ended up with a group. It went through great details but yet left just enough to the imagination.

The only thing I would change with this is the rating. 18+ is suitable but XC or XGC would be even more suitable.

Write on!

Jenny






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Review of Walruses Waltz  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (1.0)
Hello Lawrence!

This was not a poem. This was not even an attempt at a poem. Maybe you thought it was though. The description definitely piqued my curiosity. I was expecting to see lines of more than one word that started with the letter w.

Instead, this was just a list of words that begin with the letter w. This needs more. It is just a list of random w words.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Number Ten  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Scorpio!

While this was very well written and even funny, it was kind of a bummer as well. I felt for the chickens.

The rhythm and rhyme were very well done and written in a way that it had a light hearted and catchy beat that took away from the fact that it was a bit of a bummer for the chickens.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Adam!

I have never grown out of madlibs. I really hope that you can see what I created. I forgot if you can. It has been a very long time since I have done any of these here.

As I was filling in words, I thought "I hope this turns out good!" Then as I read the result, I laughed outloud! So funny!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Ennazus!

I completely agree with the things you have in here. I myself am a pagan. I can prove nature exists. My family is catholic and had me baptized before I could voice my opinion so they swear I'm that religion too. Whatever, no changing their minds. As you said, they'll believe what they want to believe.

This needs just a little work. One of the things I am about to point out is a personal pet peeve of mine: I don't understand. It literally blows my mind, It does not literally blow your mind. It figuratively blows your mind. No matter how much it blows your mind, it is always actually only figurtively.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of The Table  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Cassandra!

This was indefinitely an interesting concept about a table talking about it's history.

There are some things that need to be worked on. I will point a couple of them out.

and each peice Should be piece.

her most prised posession should be prized possession

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello ennazus!

This kind of thing goes on through everybody's minds. We were all teens before. It is hard to believe that since we were all there at one point so you think that we would remember. I have a teenager...a 13 year old, so it is just starting for him.

Here are a couple of things: especially if they are used of getting what they want. used of should be used to.

And to them, Trust is one of their biggest issuesTake out the word And. Then put lower case t on trust since it is not the start of a sentence.


Write on!

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ann Ticipation!

This was a very good poem. I loved how it was questions all the way through of wonderings.

Even though I really enjoyed reading the poem, my favorite part to read was the part that was actually before it. From the moment that I read that your birthday is a few days before mine, I was pulled right in. I enjoyed reading every word of this!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Poker With Slim  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Doug!

This was a very clever story written as a poem.

As I read this, for some reason I kept seeing it taking place in an old west saloon. I really saw it take place in there after he lost his boots and his hat even though you did not mention whether they were cowboy boots and cowboy hat but that is what I saw.

The end of this gave me quite a chuckle. Great read!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SWPoet!

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was extremely well written and tod such an amazing story about an old southern lady.It told about how she lived and her manners, also the things that she has seen or has gone through.

Write on!

Jenny






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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Rose!

I am just so happy that I stumbled upon this! It was extremely well put together and loved the colors!

I loved reading about the roses commitments in helping.

After seeing this, I'm wondering is your name actually Rose or do you just enjoy roses?

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Why wonder  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello Svetana!

This had a fantastic concept. There were a couple of interesting points such as "why do I exist?" I think everybody wonders that every now and then.

The main problem with this were from things like this And wonder⦠âWhy do I exist?â You wonder why you were put upon this world to endure all the utter stupidity its people have to offer. You ask yourself âwhy canât I just be as easily amused as the othersâ. All of those weird symbols threw reading this way off and I stumbled in reading it. Take out those symbols and it will be a bit better. At least it will be better n the eyes.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of Rock Bottom  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Amanda!

This poem was short but was incredibly deep with a lot of meaning. This told of just how you felt about your friend's situation and your hope that they will come up from rock bottom.

I see nothing that needs improvement.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Pubhouse!

When I was reading this poem, I could feel like I was marching out. Very descriptive and great choice of words.

My favorite part was the first line. It grabbed me and pulled me in with The crisp air of Autumn, fall leaves


Write on!

Jenny


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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello EvilEgg!

I just had to read this because I had no idea what steampunk genre had in it. I have read the genre but I did not really know what made it steampunk. I used to think that steampunk was only fashion. Very interesting to finally know what the genre is.

This was very informative and taught me all about this in particular genre.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Dreary Night  
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Charles!

This was absolutely incredible! I totally love when I stumble upon something here that was inspired by Edgar Allen Poe. I also have written such things.

The rhythms and rhymes of this was terrific. Also the lines was so similar to Poe's work. lines such as: It was a dark and dreary night some twenty years ago. And It started with a rapping at my fronted door,
But it ‘twas not the raven chanting his nevermore.

All around fantastic pem!

Write on!

Jenny






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Review of "HURRICANES"  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kings!

Once again, you have such an incredible poem! Something that was this well written about a hurricane I am almost 100% certain that it means that you have experienced at least one. Perhaps I'm wrong about that though.

I on the other hand, have never been through any sort of natural disaster. Not that I'm complaining at all. I'm just saying that I don't have the experience to right something like this. Frankly, I never want the experience.


This was very descriptive, had great adjectives all throughout, and rhymed well.

Write on!

Jenny




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