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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
I'm good at...
I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
I will not review...
Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review of Decomposition  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Erika!

I saw the title and I was definitely interested then I saw the description and I had to read that since I almost donated my body to one of those.

I definitely like the sound of that way more than being stuck in a box for all of eternity. Like you, I too am a bit claustrophobic and I just do not want to be in a box forever. May as well put your body to good use.

Write on!

Jenny






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Review of Ben  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Storymaster!

I really do not ever review just one picture even if I do like it because there's never really much to say about it. This though.....I have a few things to say about:

First of all, I love cats so I had to come look. This picture looks like it is professional. I love the black and white aspect of it. I also really love how Ben is looking in one direction and the cat statue is looking in the opposite direction. I wonder how many attempts that took to capture that particular picture!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Gaby!

I just absolutely loved this. Probably due to the fact that I LOVE bios and I LOVE lists. Fabulous combination!

Upon reading this it totally sounds like we would get along splendidly. I am totally go with the flow as well. I can imagine it now: You: "I heard that some wildlife expert will have a baby orangutan at the park. What are you doing today?" Me: Going to see a baby orangutan with you!"

I really do not think that you left anything out. If you did, I really have no idea what it could be.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Life as a bully  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Barnaby!

This is an excellent poem that describes why some bullies decide to go that route to seek attention. Not every bully though but maybe the majority of them. I know of a kid that is a bully and picks on every one and his brother is not a bully at all. The parents equally give attention to both, so it is not always the case as the description of this poem states.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Elaine!

This was just a very brilliant piece! I have read quite a few articles here as to what to do when seeking reviews but not with this twist to it. Love it!

When you first have the short language mentioned I knew I was going to love this! I agree with you on that part one hundred percent. It looks awful if it is not in the right full length word. Not long ago I read something of mine that had the symbol for and all throughout along with actual numbers in stead of spelled out. I can not believe I left that but I promptly fixed it.

You sound like a very tough critic. I really love that! As far as meeting all your requirements, I like to think that I meet them but I really am not sure. lol

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Born to Die  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello HWard!

I generally do not look at just the subject matter but to have an objective view about what I am reading and focus on grammar. I will not be doing that this time. I will be focusing on the actual subject.

Upon reading this, I just knew that you are a pessimist. You are a glass is half empty kind of person. Life is what you make of it. I could be wrong but I gathered that you are a teenager. Life will work out for you. Life is what you make of it. Born to die though? No. You are born to grow up, tell stories, be a farmer, an engineer, etc. You are born to be successful in whatever you put your mind to. Sure, as soon as you are born your death clock has started but life is what you make of it. It will get better at some point.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of Travel Pictures  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Beastmaster!

I just flooded your inbox with a bunch of likes and comments. I kind of love looking through pictures.

I love all of them but my favorite ones are some scenery and some animals. My ultimate favoritest picture is of you, Jeff and octobersun. I liked that picture so much I wanted to give it another thumb up.

You said in here that you travel for work. Well, what is it that you do? Truck driver?

Great pictures!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Med!

I absolutely love limericks! This was very funny! Perhaps the reason that people never told you about the original nantucket dirty limerick is probably due to the fact that nobody probably knew I am willing to bet. I had to google it myself.

While this limerick was humorous, the syllable did not match up for limericks and therefor this was just a little bit off. In a limerick, the first, second, and fifth lines always have the same amount of syllables and always rhyme each other. The third and fourth lines are a little shorter in length and only rhyme with each other.

In this limerick, the amounts of syllables for the first, second, and fifth lines are: nine, eight, and eight. Also the middle two lines are eight. The good news with this limerick is each lines are rhymed with the correct lines.

Suggestion: Give the second, fourth, and fifth lines another syllable. And then give the third and fourth lines two or three less syllables and then you will have an amazing limerick!


Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Madridista!

This is a great topic. This thought has crossed my mind before. I chose "a combination". Now for my explanation:

When I first returned here earlier this year, I had to beg for renewal help. Not just then but when time rolled around again, I still had to beg for help. I started reviewing as a daily thing to try to build my gps back up so I could get a renewal. I mostly look through the auto award page. I will review absolutely any topic but I honestly will scroll through about six different favorite topics the most. It really helps pull me in if it's got a creative title.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello filip!

I can tell this was written a long time ago. Other than it says that this was created and modified over ten years ago, there also are no music stores anymore.

This was just absolutely phenomenal! You did exceptional at telling the history and talking about all of the sub genres. I suppose that a lot of heavy metal fans ponder this sort of thing. I know I have before. This reminds me very much about the show that was on VH1 Classic which first aired in 2011 called Metal Evolution. Each episode went back into the history of each sub-genre. Well, the main sub-genres. There was an episode that listed each of the sub-genres. This essay was indeed put together just like that show. So amazing.

There is absolutely nothing that needs to be improved. Just perfect!

Write on!

Jemmy


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Review of horoscopes and  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Rick!

I just absolutely love this type of stuff. It is right up my alley!

The title was "horoscopes and" but you did not talk about horoscopes at all. Or rather the sign you were born under. Regarding actual horoscopes, those are all hogwash anyway but the signs people were born under and the cusps are right on and what makes a person who they are. Even the chinese horoscopes do the same thing. You did not mention any horoscopes or astrology at all so the title should be just a little different.

What you did talk about though was numerology. While numerology is in the same category as horoscopes it is just a little bit different. It is remarkable how the numbers that are added up for your birthday mean something about yourself. Then you can take all the letters of your full name and add them up with all their specific numbers, until you get a single number and that number also represents who you are as well.I have been doing this type of thing for years and it never ever ceases to amaze me!

There was one error that I encountered. When you said: "We all have to have someplace that we can be found to give us information." There should be a space between some and place as that is two words.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Johnathan  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Morgan!

This is a rising star member to member review.

I absolutely love acrostic poems! However this was the saddest one I have ever came across. You have everything written so perfectly in here. The memories, the feelings, and the sort of loneliness and emptiness that is left inside. So much that was in here. Amazing!

Write on!

Jenny






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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tim!

This was a remarkable poem! It told a story of a bird so effortlessly and flawlessly with impeccable rhythm and rhyme.

I thought that the bird was going to be eaten but I saw that the tiger was scared away. I had no idea if this was going to turn out very bad for the bird. I am glad to see that it did not turn out as bad as it could have for him. Glad to see that the poem stayed light and fun to read. Even the rhythm of it was fun.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Acceptance  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Survivor48!

This poem had a really fantastic message at the end that things can be dealt with accordingly with coping.

While the poem had a superb message at the end, I felt that this was really pessimistic. Turning happy memories into negative emotions why? There's really no reason to ever do that. Every situation has a bright side even if you can not see it at the time. I'm an optimist. Can you tell? *Laugh*

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Krum!

I absolutely loved the word twisting of this, making it trying to sound justifiable. The person must have gotten in trouble somehow and that is why they were twisting the words around. Maybe somebody else bought into it. Maybe this person was the gangs spokesperson.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tim!

This was a really great poem. I was able to picture everything happen and I was fully able to feel what the driver was feeling.

I completely took this as the driver was emotionally somewhere else and was not paying attention to the actual road for a second but his actual thoughts. You did not imply that but that was my interpretation. I could completely be wrong though.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello goldylocks!

This was written quite well. It had a good flow, rhythm, tone, and rhyme. Plus it was a great topic. Personally speaking, I review to help or tell them how much I enjoyed the poem.

My favorite word in here was literarily which when I read it sounded like literally until I read it outloud.

Write on!

Jenny






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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sandra Lynn!

This was quite a good entry and the titles were pretty much there just right. I love how you went thirteen more titles than what was required!

One thing that did not quite make a lot of sense to me was when you had: and considered ourselves wkrp in Cincinnati; without kids running perpetually. How does anyone consider themselves as that?


Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Pumpkin!

This was such a great story and you fit in all the sitcom titles of the '80's in quite nicely. Everything seemed to go on very smoothly and effortlessly. From beginning to end this was exceptionally done!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of The Memory Chest  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Choconut!

This was such a terrific entry! It made me smile how you worked all the titles in so well. The story of the finding and keeping the chest to share the memories was very well written. I can't even tell you of a favorite part in here. Every part was superb!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of A Father to Us  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tim!

This was quite a fabulous tribute to all of the fathers out there. Telling about what fathers are and do.

I really enjoyed reading about the laughter and story telling around the table. That was probably my favorite part in here.

Write on!






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Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Hooves!

What a very heartfelt poem. I could definitely feel the strong emotion within this.

This part was the worst How could I ever tell her why
Her eldest grandchild came to die I am very sorry to hear that. Your mother is supposed to die before you. No matter how difficult it is and will be probably forever but your child is not supposed to go before you. I know that it happens though. Way too often than it should.

This was a great poem and I loved that each stanza was two lines The rhyme and rhythm were perfect.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lanis!

I have got to tell you, when I saw the title of this, I exclaimed, "Yes!" Because I only know a handful of people that are annoyed by this, including myself. I mean really....how hard is it to walk five or ten extra feet and put the cart in the corral?

I actually saw an episode about this on Brain Games. People left their carts everywhere other than where they go. Then there was an experiment and the cart returns were painted in different way and there would be fun games once returning the carts. People did not mind then.


You mentioned that some people have legitimate reasons. Well, I disagree. If they were at the store at all, they can put the carts back where they belong.

You also mentioned those "fun carts kids can sit in". Have you ever had to ush one of those? I did and it was horrible. Would never turn or steer right. I thought that maybe it was that cart, so I tried on some other shopping trip. Same thing! So I vowed to never push one of those again, I told my kid why and he understood.


Write on!

Jenny






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Review of Gym Teacher  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: ASR | (1.5)
Hello Alex!

Right at the start, you have he children that did attend PE were mostly their for fun, *there* is the one that you want.

You have that Terri was only 5'4 and while that is no where near tall, it is about average height for a female. Maybe a little on the short side but nothing like you were describing. If you want somebody, I suggest maybe saying 5'0 or even better 4'9 or something.

The last sentence of one paragraph you said When Terri turned around she was shocked to see her younger niece, Marla. Then the first sentence of the paragraph after that said Marla Simmons might've been Terri's cousin Was she the niece or cousin?

The cousin or niece was 6'2! That is outrageously tall for a female. Females can be that height but t is rare and they are almost always basketball players.

The story also does not seem done to me. I feel like there needs to be more about Teri. I felt like I was left hanging at the end of this.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of My love.  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Natty!

I could tell this was a deeply emotional and loving letter written by a vampire.

To my love your blood is my infection for the more I refuse the taste of such sweet nectar the deeper my lust becomes. There are a couple things that can be fixed with this. Firstly,since this is a letter, you should start with it like this: To my love, (Just like a letter would start. Then the next sentence is entirely too long. I do see what you were trying to do. With just a little bit rewording it would be superb!

Since this is a letter, I think it would be best if it was signed off somehow. "All my love" or something. Then maybe a name or a nick name.

Write on!

Jenny




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