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Review of Teriyaki Kabobs  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE RECIPE

*Reading* Teriyaki Kabobs is a delicious recipe with a Hawaiian flare.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the story behind the recipe. The ingredients mesh well together.

*Star* ENGAGING

The recipe/how to was very engaging and easy to read.

*Star*DIRECTIONS EASY OR HARD?

The directions were easy.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I have no suggestions for improvement. A fun summer recipe to enjoy in the summer heat. I'm looking forward to making the recipe myself! Thanks for your entry for the Bard's Hall July Contest.

Glowing Steph
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE CNOTES

*Reading* "Cnotes for Strength" is a great way to encourage and uplift someone who might be a bit "down."

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the quotes. I thought they were inspiring.

*Star* ENGAGING

Great quotes and I thought they matched the pictures well.

*Star*VARIETY

There's a good selection for specific occasions such as strength, courage, and inspiration. My favorite was the sunflower.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

The introduction sets the tone of what to expect. If anything, maybe add a graphic to set the tone/mood? I loved the images for the cnotes and thought they were appropriate. Also, I thought the cnotes were priced well and affordable.

Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army July Reviewing month.
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Review of Happy Birthday!  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE CNOTES

*Reading* Happy Birthday are a collection of Cnotes that I would recommend for birthdays or even WDC Anniversaries.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the whimsical presentation of the notes.

*Star* ENGAGING

I thought the notes were very appealing.

*Star*VARIETY

There are 2 notes in the folder. Each note is *ThumbsUpL*. If anything, I'd love to see a couple more of these types of notes in the folder.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I thought the price point was affordable for the notes.
*ThumbsUpL* for Heartwarming.
*ThumbsUpL* for Creativity.


Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army July Challenge.
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE CNOTES

*Reading* Ornament Greetings are a collection CNotes that I would recommend sending during the December holiday season.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed the artistry of the notes.

*Star* ENGAGING

I liked how the ornament was the "tying" element with all the Cnotes.

*Star*VARIETY

Each note varied on color and message. There's a cnote for every Christmas wish.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I have no suggestions for improvement. I thought the price point was affordable for the notes.
*ThumbsUpL* for Artistry.
*ThumbsUpL* for Creativity.

Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army July Challenge.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE LYRIC

Home is where the Heart is in the Green Mountains of Vermont.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the refrain. It's so heartwarming. I can hear the musically in my head as I read the refrain.

*Star* STRUCTURE

There are 2 stanzas and a refrain to the lyric.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The lyric is easy to read and understand.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I loved the honest voice. It really connects with the reader.

Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army.
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Review of Gary the Gnome  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
So I visited
FORUM
Anniversary Reviews  (E)
Celebrate Writing.Com member account anniversaries with reviews. GPs and exclusive MBs.
#1565040 by Aennaytte: Free & Wild in GoT
and found it was your anniversary!!

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


I popped into your port and found Gary the Gnome!

*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE STORY

Gary and Gnome is kidnapped and goes on the adventure of a lifetime.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the whimsical feel of the story. Very fun and heartwarming.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the third person from Gary's perspective. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

There's enough to set the scenes.

*Star* SETTING

TIME: modern day
PLACE: rural travel/tourist places

This is something that is clarified for the reader.

*Star* CHARACTERS

Gary

Gary wants to go home. If I was him, I would too. If anything I thought that Gary just remembering the spell was a bit too convenient and I might have had him find a piece of trash with the words, or a maybe he overheard two other gnomes talking about the spell.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestion as mentioned above. The opening engages the reader. A lighthearted story that is fun to read.
StephB for the Angel Army
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE FORUM

*Reading* WdC SuperPowers Reviewers Group is a forum that encourages and rewards group members for reviewing the WDC Community.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the Raid with Us link. I thought it was a great opportunity to develop reviewers. The list of Quill nominations and finalist badges were impressive.

*Star* ENGAGING

I thought was very engaging. The community members are listed which I liked and it was heartwarming to see the white suitcases as well.

*Star*RULES

I thought the rules were easy to understand and read.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

Good use of WDC WL and graphics. The opening YouTube video was something neat and that I hadn't seen before. It does a great job setting the tone/mood for the Group. If anything, I would have loved to see what the exclusive merit badges were.

Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE FORUM

*Reading* Daily Flash Fiction Challenge is a forum that offers a daily prompt for the writer. The flash fiction must be under 300 words.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

This contest is definately a challenge - in a good way. I thought of it like a "tune up" - in that if you were getting ready, this is a good way to focus on a particiliar element of your writing you wanted to develop.

*Star* ENGAGING

The form is very encouraging. There is a lot of community support and entries.

*Star*RULES

The rules were clearly stated.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to highlight rules/points for the contest.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

The graphic grabs the visitor's attention and sets a good mood/tone for the the forum. This contest is a good way to be active on WDC.

Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE FORUM

*Reading* Shadows and Light Poetry Contest is a forum that focuses on Free Form poetry. The contest is open from the 15th to the 14th of every month.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked that the focus was on free form poetry.

*Star* ENGAGING

The form is very engaging. There is a lot of community engagement. I thought the title/name of the forum was intriguing.

*Star*RULES

The rules were clearly stated and easy to understand.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to highlight rules/points for the contest.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I liked the presentation. The graphic grabs the visitor's attention and sets a good mood/tone for the the forum. I'm happy to say I was honored to enter the contest! I would encourage others who enjoy writing Free Form poetry to enter as well.

Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE FOLDER

*Reading* The Folder contains a variety of nature poems.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed all the poems I read. They were easy to read and enjoy.

*Star* ENGAGING

I liked the conversational style and rythmes of the poem.

*Star*VARIETY

I read a poem about the sun, winter, a flower and autumn. I enjoyed how one poem played with words, and how one tapped into the sense of touch. One poem evoked emotion, while another evoked a heartwarming visual for me.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic in the introduction to set the tone/mood for the folder, if doable. The folder stays consistent with the types of items within it.

Reviewed by StephB
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The sun is a busy force of nature.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the verse regarding night and repeat, bringing the cycle of the sun full circle.

*Star* STRUCTURE

There are 2 stanza with 4 lines and and a AABB rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem implies the busyness of the sun, providing warmth and food to the birds, invigorating all.

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Review of Autumn.  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem evokes a visual of the autumn climate.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the complexity of the last line, autumn is for all but don't expect it to be pleasant, at least, that's my take.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a 3 line poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem evokes a visual of the wetness/dampness of the season.

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Review of Winter.  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the beauty of winter.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play of the poem, using the word "beautiful" in the first lines makes the words "frost" and "stars" (implying cold) glitter in beauty.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a contest entry which requires the poem to be 24 syllables and use the word tarnish.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem is easy to read and is cold, evoking a shiver, with a focus on the sensation of touch.

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Review of The Flower I Was.  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the life of a flower.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the last stanza. For me, it summed up the emotional simplicity of just being a flower.

*Star* STRUCTURE

Each stanza rythmes and there are two lines in each stanza, (couplet) except the last stanza which does not rythme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem is easy to read, understand, and quietly poignant.

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Review of On The Write Path  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE BLOG

On The Write Path is a travel blog and engages readers through the various travels of the author. The author went to Portugal for a visit!

*Smile*WHAT I LIKED

I loved the pictures and just every day notes about the places visited.

*Star* ENGAGING

The blog invites the reader to engage. I posted several times on topics.

*Star*VARIETY

There was a variety of posts in that it was a different city, different day, different people, and different set of circumstances. Every hostel is different.

*Star*EXPRESSIVE

The blog was easy to read.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes, but then when it comes to reviewing blogs, I'm not so picky.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

Good use of graphics, pictures, and WDC ML. I enjoyed visiting your blog and sharing your adventures. *Smile*

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall Blogging Contest.
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE BLOG

Writing Under the Influence engages the reader using poetry and videos.

*Smile*WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the poetry tapped into emotions.

*Star* ENGAGING

I posted a couple of times on topics.

*Star*VARIETY

The posts were most poetry/lyrics. The variety was in the topic the poetry tackled. Most had an emotional slant.

*Star*EXPRESSIVE

The blog was easy to read. Nice word play to make the reader reflect.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes, but then when it comes to reviewing blogs, I'm not so picky.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

Good use of graphics and videos to set the mood/tone for the Blog. I enjoyed visiting your blog. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Blogging Contest. *Smile*

Reviewed by StephB
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for entry "Pivotal" 
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE BLOG

Spiral Bound Journal engages the reader by telling a fictional story of characters who are a couple of degrees related to each other.

*Smile*WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the characters were interwoven into each other's lives. Well done.

*Star* ENGAGING

The blog invites the reader to keep reading - onto the next post to find out what's going on next. It may not be what you think, which keeps the reader on their toes.

*Star*VARIETY

There was a variety of posts, in that characters, setting, situations changed. Nice focus on life situations.

*Star*EXPRESSIVE

The blog was easy to read. I liked the color switches with the font, if anything, my only suggestion would be to increase the font size a little.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes, but then when it comes to reviewing blogs, I'm not so picky.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic maybe in the manner of a cover in the introduction to set a tone/mood for your blog. I enjoyed visiting your blog. Thanks for blogging for the Bard's Hall 2022 contest! *Smile*

Reviewed by StephB
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE STORY

Kid thinks a chocolate covered strawberry is icky poo-poo.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

Great ending. Nailed it! I got a nice chuckle out of the ending.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the first person by the toddler. Good job with narration. Good job with past tense.

*Star* DIALOGUE

It's all dialogue. Good job catching the voice of a toddler.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

There's enough to set the scene.


*Star* SETTING

TIME: modern day
PLACE: urban setting

This is something that is clarified for the reader.

*Star* CHARACTERS

Toddler

There's enough here to understand his motivations. He's not eating anything that will kill him, especially icky poo-poo. *Thumbsup*

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader. Good luck in the Bard's Hall contest.

Glowing Steph
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE STORY

Plums, Strawberries or Oranges? What's a boy to pick?

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved how Mom tricked Thomas into going to the zoo.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the first person by Thomas. Good job with narration. Past tense is used, which, for me, makes the story flow better.

*Star* DIALOGUE

It's all dialogue. Good job capturing Thomas's voice.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

There's enough to set the scene.


*Star* SETTING

TIME: modern day
PLACE: urban setting

This is something that is clarified for the reader.

*Star* CHARACTERS

Thomas

There's enough here to understand his motivations. He wants to go to the zoo. *Thumbsup*

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestion as mentioned above. The opening engages the reader. Good luck in the Bard's Hall contest.

Glowing Steph
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Review of Birth of a memory  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE STORY

Mom took said 12 chocolate covered strawberries was enough for little Reggie.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

Great opening. It really set the scene for what was to come.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the third person omniscient. Good job with narration. I might suggest an edit for past tense.

*Star* DIALOGUE

There's a good blend of dialogue and narration.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

There's enough to set the scene.


*Star* SETTING

TIME: modern day
PLACE: urban setting

This is something that is clarified for the reader.

*Star* CHARACTERS

Reggie

There's enough here to understand his motivations. Reggie likes strawberries. *Thumbsup*

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestion as mentioned above. The opening engages the reader. Good luck in the Bard's Hall contest.

Glowing Steph
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

Looking at spring from a tropical point of view.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the poem tapped into the senses.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a sonnet.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem was easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Dandelion dances with each rhythmic cue."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I liked the simmering emotion of hope and good vibes that was painted by the word pictures. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall

Glowing Steph
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem paints a rich word picture of a spring storm.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the poem tugged at my memories, growing up in New England and watching spring storm march in and then away.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a villanelle which has 19 lines. Good use of Poet's note.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Inhale the petrichor perfume of dawn."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I felt like I was watching the storm come in. Great use of the five senses. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall

Glowing Steph
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Review of Remembrance  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

While spring is known for rebirth, it's just another cycle in the cycle of life.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the strong imagery.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a villanelle which is a 19 line poem, however there are only 18 lines in this poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "the clear clang of a bay's red bouy bright."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I poem evokes emotion well. Well written. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall

Glowing Steph
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Review of Meditation  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem hints of past visions, forgotten sorrows and joys from the spring.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed the word play.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a villanelle which is a 19 line poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "gossamer rainbows shimmer in the light"

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I poem evokes emotion well painting bittersweet word pictures. Well written. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall

Glowing Steph
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Review of Manna  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem that talks about spring bloom.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked visuals and how the author weaved in grey clouds, flowers/daffodil, and hummingbirds. I could see spring unfolding with every verse I read.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This sapphic verse.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Nice visuals. The poem evokes emotion well.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall
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