Dartagnan's (dartagnan) Reviews

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#4330552

Review of Of Life To Live

Review by Dartagnan

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

First Off you've chosen a good title. It drew me in.

Secondly: I loved the wording of the poem. It was well written. I loved the form.

Thirdly: I saw nothing in this poem that I would change. It would surprise me if anyone suggested changes.

Well done.

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#4330534

Review of Realization

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.0)

WOW! Cool!

Good title. I love a good title that catches the eye of the reader.

All in all, it was a very good piece. Very well written.

Others might come along with suggestions for changes but I like it the way it is.

This was a very enjoyable poem.

Thank you.

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#4330532

Review of The Other Side of This

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.0)

First Off: I love the title. Creative. It makes the reader stop for a peek inside.

Secondly: The poem was very well constructed and as far as I could tell showed no flaws.

Thirdly: The poem was easy to read. The reader didn't have to keep going back. Also, easy to understand.

Very Good!

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#4330514

Review of Echoes of Laughter

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.0)

First Off: The title caught my attention and made me want to stop and take a look.

Secondly: The poem was well written. It was like I was actually there. I love horseback riding anyway, so this was a good piece.

Thirdly: There didn't seem to be any spelling or punctuation errors.

Good poem.

Thank you.

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#4330278

Review of ON A JOURNEY WITH WDC.

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Nice! Any poem about a sunset is a must read.

First Off: The title was the hook.

Secondly: The poem was an easy read. There was no going back to reread. If there were any mistakes I saw none.

Thirdly: The poem was very well crafted from beginning to end.

Thank you for this beautiful piece.

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#4330274

Review of Thinking in Rhymes

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Awesome piece here.

First Off: The Title was a good hook. It got my attention and grabbed me.

Secondly: The poem as a whole was easy to read. If there were any mistakes they were not noticed.

Thirdly: The poem holds your attention till the end.

Excellent poem.

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#4330050

Review of RAINING IN THE GARDEN

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Off: Bravo! Awesome! I wouldn't change one single letter. I don't see anyone suggesting that you change anything. Wonderfully written.

Secondly. There were no issues that I could see. I was able to read this without having to reread. Nice flow.

Thank you

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#4330048

Review of Aqua

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Off: Bravo! Awesome! I wouldn't change one single letter. I don't see anyone suggesting that you change anything. Wonderfully written.

Secondly. There were no issues that I could see. I was able to read this without having to reread. Nice flow.

Thank you

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#4330047

Review of Thank you

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Off: Bravo! Awesome! I wouldn't change one single letter. I don't see anyone suggesting that you change anything. Wonderfully written.

Secondly. There were no issues that I could see. I was able to read this without having to reread. Nice flow.

Thank you

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#4330045

Review of Whitechapel Memories

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

First Off: Bravo! Awesome! I wouldn't change one single letter. I don't see anyone suggesting that you change anything. Wonderfully written.

Secondly. There were no issues that I could see. I was able to read this without having to reread. Nice flow.

Thank you

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#4330043

Review of Poems

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Off: Bravo! Awesome! I wouldn't change one single letter. I don't see anyone suggesting that you change anything. Wonderfully written.

Secondly. There were no issues that I could see. I was able to read this without having to reread. Nice flow.

Thank you

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#4330041

Review of So Apropos, the Knowledge

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Off: Bravo! Awesome! I wouldn't change one single letter. I don't see anyone suggesting that you change anything. Wonderfully written.

Secondly. There were no issues that I could see. I was able to read this without having to reread. Nice flow.

Thank you

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#4330034

Review of Fight This World

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Off: Bravo! Awesome! I wouldn't change one single letter. I don't see anyone suggesting that you change anything. Wonderfully written.

Secondly. There were no issues that I could see. I was able to read this without having to reread. Nice flow.

Thank you

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#4329977

Review of WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I would like to join your group.I'm a greenhorn but I love to read and review poetry. I believe I can give a review that will not only bring a good feeling to the writer but it will be from the heart. I hope you can put your trust in me enough to make me a member.

Thanks

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#4329715

Review of Is abstinence the best policy?

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

Loved the story. I love reading funny stories like this and this was a good one. Very well told. Held my attention from beginning to end. There didn't seem to be any kind of mistakes. If anyone suggests any changes it would surprise me. Look forward to more stories.

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#4329546

Review of Marshmallow Summer

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

First Off: The poem takes back to my childhood. Going fishing with our granddaddy. Brings back sweet memories.

Secondly: Your poems always seem to be so effortless. Nice flow, no flaws, easy to read.

Thirdly: I wrote a poem using the same words and mine was much shorter. Loved your poem.

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#4329180

Review of Fun facts with the great Dr. Seuss

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I loved Dr. Seuce Books. As a kid, I loved reading them to my kids. Now my kids are reading them to their kids. Dr. Seuse will be around for a while I think. You really know your stuff about Dr. Seuce. I love the old cartoons he did during World War II. Private Snafu. They were really funny. This was some fun reading and good questions.

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#4329169

Review of Fill in the Blanks

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Once upon a time, there was a there was a Jack Ass named Woody. Everyday Woody pulled a plow for the farmer to plow the fields. One day Woody up and disappeared. Because of that, the farmer had to borrow his neighbor's tractor. He enjoyed using the tractor because he didnt have to walk behind Woody and work that un pleasant plow. Until finally the farmer turned woody out to pasture. bought him a tractor and they both lived happily ever after. Moral of the story: Dont work your ass off or, There's nothing wrong with sitting on your ass.

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#4328888

Review of Shadows Do Not Have Hearts

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Firstly: The title is a real attention getter. It makes the reader want to drop in for a look. Kiss the shadows on the ground. Good line.

Secondly: I love the feel of the poem. It has a relaxed feel to it. The poem as a whole is very good.

Thank you for sharing.

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#4328853

Review of Ashes from the past

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Firstly: The man in the poem has to face the facts that a relationship has died and move on. I was engaged five times before I married.

Secondly: Very good poem. Well written. If there were any mistakes I saw none.

Thirdly: The Title was short and plain not much to hook someone but still got my attention.

Good poem.

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#4328725

Review of Untitled. April 2017

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

First Off: The love game is a tough one. This coming from a guy who was engaged 5 times. This is pretty much a rant from beginning to end. Correct me if I'm wrong but, you seem to show a lot of anger here.

Secondly: I thought the poem was good. It seemed easy to read with few flaws.

Thanks

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#4328715

Review of America, Who Can Make You Great Again?

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I am not qualified to review such a beautiful, patriotic poem as this one. I have read many poems since I have been here but this is the best one that I have read yet. You are indeed a gifted poet. This poem speaks patriotism from beginning to end. I have always been very patriotic because I've had so many family members in the service and now my oldest daughter's husband is in the Army and has been sent over twice so far. So thank you so much for your patriotism.

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#4328697

Review of The magic flower

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hey Little Red Pen

First Off: Your title makes for a good hook. It grabs you. Gloomy with a cloud of tears overhead sets the tone for the rest of the poem.

Secondly: To walk up on a lonely flower and find a smile, wipe away your tears, set your memories free, And find happiness.

Very good poem.

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#4328681

Review of I Miss You Mom, I Said Goodbye

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: E

| (4.5)

First off: The title is an attention getter. We all love and cherish our mothers. I am so sorry for your loss. It sounds like you have very fond memories.

Secondly: The whole poem in all was beautifully written. I was so into the poem itself, I did not notice any mistakes if there were any.

Thank you.

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#4328415

Review of The Letters from No One

Review by Dartagnan

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

I see someone is a Harry Potter fan. They are some good movies. My daughter and her husband are both Harry Potter fans. Anyway, very good poem. Those were good scenes where the letter's come flying through from everywhere. If I recall the rest of the family was trying to stop them.

Keep writing
Thanks