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Review of Flight Risks  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an excellent piece. The reader can enter into the thoughts of the writer. This is something we will all experience all through our lives. I know I've had my share.

If one doesn't take risks now and then you will never get anywhere in life.

Great rhythm. You have a very nice style of writing.

Look forward to more.
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Review of A Rush Of Wings  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: There is no greater poem than one about the angels. They watch over us and protect us. Your poem had great imagery. The reader could see in the mind of the writer. You took us to a place where we could almost feel we were with our guardian angel.

Secondly: The flow of the poem seemed off a bit towards the end. It seemed off balance. That may have been at the discretion of the writer. The writing showed no signs of errors. The poem was very easy to read.

Thirdly: I thought the poem was very good and I look forward to reading more in the future.



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Review of Eucharist  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this a very delightful read.

It had good rhythm. It went along smoothly.

The poem imagery was nice. The reader got an insight into the writer's mind.

You picked a very good title. It draws in the reader for a peek inside.

I myself really don't see anything I would change.
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Review of The Sea  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I too like writing about the sea. I like the flow your poem has and the pace it keeps. I noticed a variation in your rhyming in different areas of this piece.

The imagery in your poem brings out the readers imagination. You can feel the wind, smell the sea, and hear the birds. It was a fun piece to read.

The only suggestions I would have is being more consistent with your lines. But great piece.
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
The poem has a wonderful flow and is easy to read and understand. The writer treats the reader to a well-written piece. The imagery is very nice and there are no errors in grammar or punctuation that is noticeable.

The rhyme was very good and smooth. I loved reading this poem and look forward to others.
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Review by Dartagnan
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: The poem had a good flow to it and easy to read. The writing style was plain which I liked a lot. The rhythm was good and I loved the imagery. The writer's style is very impressive.

Secondly: You captured the reader from the first line and held their attention. I couldn't stop until the end. I love titles to poems and this was a good one. It made me stop for a look. I can't find one thing that I would change. The poem, I think, Is good just the way it is.

Thirdly: I look forward to more of your poems down the road.



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Review of Turn Around  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: WOW. Awesome. The imagery in this piece was fantastic. The reader could feel your hurt. Your broken heart. The trust that was no longer there, To lose your true love in such a way has to be so painful.

Secondly: I can't point out one thing I would change in this piece. It had great rhythm. The rhyme was good. If there were any errors in spelling or punctuation I saw none. Once I began reading I was hooked.

Thirdly: I loved the title you chose. Reminds me of an old Bonnie Tyler Song. All in all very Good poem. Look forward to the next one.



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Review of The Write Life  
Review by Dartagnan
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: So true. A writer is free to create something new each time. They can take us to other places, other times, and tell fantastic stories.

Secondly: I thought that the writing was plain and really can't point out anything I would change. Might have been a little short though.

Thirdly: The poem in whole was very good. I enjoyed it very much.



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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: Your poem has lots of imagery. By the time I got to the end I felt like I was the one in that chaos. The rhythm of the poem was very good.

Secondly: I found the poem to be easy to read. If there were any errors in grammar or punctuation they went un-noticed.

Thirdly: Don't like big cities but liked the poem..



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Review of Hush  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: This style of poetry is new to me. It is a unique style. I like how it is written.

Secondly: The poem showed no errors in spelling or punctuation. It was an enjoyable read. The imagery was clear and the rhyming very good.

Thirdly: The poem in whole was very good. I enjoyed it very much.



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Review of ODE TO FRANK  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I am not, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So that being said:


First Off: WOW! I love Frank's music. The Rat Pack was incredible. Your poem was well written and gave off a lot of imagery. I can see him on stage singing My Way and showing off.


Secondly: I only have one change I can even suggest as far as this poem goes. The last line should have included If you ask me, They can all go to hell.


Thirdly: This poem was very good. Thank you.





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Review by Dartagnan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Should Orcs run through our land? Depends! Are they Dems or Reps.
Does she really need new shoes? 99 pair is enough
Can we outrun flying monkeys? ????????
Is what Trump says front page news? NOOOOOO

Does the horse not have a name? Yes! Mr Ed
Are we going to be late for tea? Only if you can pass the R and S
Will there be a sequel? To Life????
Is freedom truly free? Never!!!

Isn't there a Mrs. Robot? Mr Robot hopes so.
Was the earth ever flat? No! Just Bigger
Where am I on Santa's list? Who is he?
A Cat-In-A-Hat? Is that like a puss in boots?

Who writes fortune cookies? Dumb asses.
Where's the dark side of the Moon? Opposite side of the sun.
Do you have a spare tire? What, you need one?
Can the lady sing The Blues? Depends on which lady.

Did I let the dogs out? It wasn't me!!!
Do batteries really die? Yes! And their dead acids get thrown away.
Are blind people racist? I wouldn't race if I was blind.
Wait a minute....Do monkeys fly?!? Hey, you kinda finally thought that one through HUH.

This was fun lets do it again sometime.
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: I think this is going to bring back memories for a lot of people. I know it does for me. My granddaddy Norman would sit in the front yard with no shoes on in his overalls and watch all us kids play. He had little education but was a hard working man who made sure his family was provided for.

Secondly: The imagery in this piece is wonderful. The reader can envision and relate.

Thirdly: This was a wonderful piece. I really enjoyed it.



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Review of Forever and Ever  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am not, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So that being said:


First Off: The title coaxed me in and I wasn't disappointed. This piece was well worth the read. The imagery was very nice.


Secondly: It was very well written. The reader did not have to go back and reread. There didn't seem to be any errors in grammar or punctuation.


Thirdly: All in all I found the poem to be very good and look forward to others.





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Review of Cleft Wings  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So that being said:


First Off: Curiosity pulled me in and I'm glad it did. I'm really not that familiar with this style of poetry but, I thought it was very well constructed. The imagery was very good.


Secondly: The reader was able to read without having to go back. There didn't appear to be any errors in grammar.


Thirdly: All in all I found the poem to be very good.Look forward to others.





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Review of Melting Snow  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: Wow. I have always seen this posted but had never come in. This is a garden that grows food for thought. I was blown away by every thought-provoking line.

Secondly: This blog, as I assume it is, is filled with such interesting material. I love the way it is put together. Very informative.


Thirdly: This blog has left me thirsting for more from your garden of knowledge



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Review by Dartagnan
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: Very good and very well written poem. I enjoyed this very much.

Secondly: I found the poem to be easy to read. The reader doesn't have to reread. If there were any errors in grammar or punctuation they went un-noticed. I liked the feeling the poem gave me.

Thirdly: The title had me wondering what I was about to read. It didn't take long to figure it out.

Thanks.



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Review by Dartagnan
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: You have a good title. It catches the readers attention. It made me stop for a look.

Secondly: This piece didn't feel like it had that smooth flow to it like poetry should. It seemed a bit off beat.

Thirdly: I liked what the poet was saying. A lot of people can relate. The body of the poem seemed quickly put together.I can't exactly point to in places to make improvements but, I think if you wait and go back in a week or so you might find where you need to make changes.

I did like the content and look forward to reading more.




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Review of Red Flag  
Review by Dartagnan
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: This is the second piece of your writing I have reviewed. You do have a different style. I have to say, it makes it easy to read.

Secondly: I found no flaws with spelling or punctuation. The reader has no need to reread. It speaks to the reader in plain language.

Thirdly: The poem was very good. I enjoyed it very much and look forward to reading more.



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Review by Dartagnan
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: I thought you had a good title. It pulls in your reader.

Secondly: I'm not familiar with this style of poem but it seems the writer had something to say and relays it to the reader in their own style.

Thirdly: The poem all in all was very good. I enjoyed it very much.



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Review of In our memory  
Review by Dartagnan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful tribute.

First Off. I like the title. It was a good hook to reel in the reader.

Secondly: I was able to read comfortably without having to reread. There didn't seem to be any mistakes in grammar or punctuation.

Thirdly: The body of this piece seemed well constructed. Very good piece
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Review of Autumn Fall  
Review by Dartagnan
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: Good title. Grabs the reader's attention. I like it.

Secondly: I found the poem to be easy to read. The reader doesn't have to reread. If there were any errors in grammar or punctuation they went un-noticed.

Thirdly: The poem in whole was very good. I enjoyed it very much.



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Review by Dartagnan
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: The title was good. It grabs the reader's attention. I liked it.

Secondly: I found the poem to be easy to read but you were right, it was silly. If there were any errors in grammar or punctuation they went un-noticed.

Thirdly: The poem in whole was very silly but a fun read. I enjoyed it very much.



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Review by Dartagnan
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love to read, write, and review poetry. So with that said:

First Off: Good title. Grabs the reader's attention. I like it.

Secondly: I found the poem to be easy to read. The reader doesn't have to reread. If there were any errors in grammar or punctuation they went un-noticed.

Thirdly: The poem in whole was very good. I enjoyed it very much.
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Review of Misfortune  
Review by Dartagnan
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I am not, by no means, an expert in the field of literature. I love poetry. I love reading and reviewing poetry. So with that said:

First Off: The title is a good hook. It catches the reader's eye and makes them want to see what is here.

Secondly: With all due respect, the poem to me seemed a bit choppy.
The second verse seemed to have a different composure.

Thirdly: I liked what the poem had to say. The Grammer and punctuation didn't show any mistakes.

Thanks.
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