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Review of My Elixir  
Review by Dartagnan
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very enjoyable poem. Lots of imagery.

I liked how the poem was constructed. Although there was no punctuation it did not effect the poem.

I didn't see anything that I would change. The poem felt comfortable to me as I read.

It had a nice flow and good rhythm.
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Review of Grey  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a splendid piece. So much truth to what you said. There is a quote that says,"Racism, the ugly face of humanity". And ugly it is.

They are wanting us to take down statues of southern figures but what will that accomplish. It's not going to change anything.

Racism goes on no matter whet.
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good poem. I thought it showed lots of imagery. This piece had good rhythm and a nice flow.

I can not pick out anything I would change.

It didn't show any errors in spelling. There did not appear to be any punctuation used but that did not take away from the poem at all.
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Review of Portrait  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought this was a very good piece. Remembering our wives on our anniversaries is very important. It means so much to them. And I guess if they are not around, talk to their picture.

Lots of imagery. Good rhythm and flow.

This was a good piece.

Thanks for sharing.
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good piece. You had the imagery but was lacking something.

Its rhythm seemed off somehow.

I loved the title of your piece and the subject matter. This piece has a lot of promise.

Sometimes if you wait a week or two then go over it again you can usually do a good revision. I know I posted one tonight that will really need some more attention.
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Review of The Distant Song  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Awesome poem. Lots of imagery. You paint beautifully with your words. You give the reader a vivid look into your thoughts.

Rhythm and flow were very good.

The rhyming was excellent.

There did not appear to be any errors in spelling.

This was a very good piece.
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Review of A Collection  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Excellent piece. I think we all have had thoughts like this. One minute you're here next minute you're there.

Random thoughts running a muck. Sometimes it's amazing what our minds will ponder on. Sometimes I think about the dumbest things.

But, all in all what a great piece.
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is happening more and more. People have to protect themselves somehow. Putting in more lights is a good move.

The style of your poem is unique. It shows a lot of imagery. The rhythm was very good.

If there were any errors in spelling or punctuation it went unnoticed.

Very good piece.
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Review of Pants on Fire  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey, Ken. Your political stuff is great. Looks like you really get into your politics. Of course, I think we are all down on Trump. These poems may be short but they say a lot.

I like this style of poetry. I think this style has so much potential. So many ways to work with it.

I think you should run for President.
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Review of Sometimes  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Excellent. Sometimes? Very good title.

Stop and take a breath. Also, your friends have to do the same.

Wonderful piece. Cool message. Imagery not strong but the message makes up for that.

Nothing better than friendship. Everybody needs a good friend to fall back on.
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is funny. The life of a CEO of a company or a higher up.I can picture the boss going through singing this rap to the employees.

The imagery was very good. It had excellent rhythm. It kept the reader captivated.

This was a pleasure to read.

Thanks
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Don't go trying to be something your not. You are you and you are unique. I have always lived my life on my own terms. People can say you should do this or do that. You live your life your way and your way only. My mom and dad never pushed us to do stuff we didn't want to do and I will always be grateful for that. So don't compare yourself to other people because you are not them and they are not you.
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Review of Pants on Fire  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
LOL. I like it.

Donald Trump is a poor excuse for a human being much less a President or Politician for that matter.

The sooner they get him out of there the better. He and his tweeting must go. I think that's how he talks to his wife and kids. He tweets messages to them.
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Review of "You"  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your poem had lots of imagery and was very well written. The flow was nice and it showed no errors in spelling or punctuation. The rhyme was good and it was easy to read. The poem kept the reader hooked till the end. It had a very good title that reeled in the reader for a look.
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Review of Not to Be  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The imagery in your poem paints an ugly picture of someone who takes and can not give, leads you on with lies that sound a lot like truths. Someone who can not commit to a relationship.

Your poem had good rhythm and good flow. It showed no errors in spelling or punctuation.

Very good.
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
LOL! Funny. I have to assume you are Scottish. This was a real treat. I certainly hope I get to read more like this. The imagery was there but didn't want to see. I hope you have more of these to offer. Poetry like this is always a hoot to read.

Thanks
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Cool story. I am more into poetry than stories but once I got started it grabbed my attention and I couldn't stop. I enjoyed this piece very much. I have been in search of inspiration to help me get started writing stories and this one is pushing me that way. Look forward to other stories.
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Review of Blog  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have a wonderful blog. You bring with you a message we all need to hear. I have always lived what I consider a poor man's comfortable life. I have always felt like that I had a close relationship with God. I don't talk to him as often as I should but I have always felt that he was always with me. My prayers will be with you and your ministry.

God bless.
Ricky aka Dartagnan
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Review by Dartagnan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good. I think sometimes it doesn't hurt to get away from the beaten path and experience what we have gotten away from. Get away from that cell phone, get out of that office, try something different.

Sounds like the main character had a calling. And he answered.
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Review of The Fun House  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WOW. Awesome story. I haven't read anything like this in a long time. Usually, I keep to more pleasant stuff but this got me hooked and I couldn't stop. I had to finish no matter what.

The imagery in your story is incredible. I could feel what the main character was feeling. I could feel his fear.

AWESOME
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Review of Grandma's House  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Excellent Piece. You have painted a wonderful image with words. This was a very enjoyable read.

The rhythm was good and it flowed peacefully as the story went on.

And you should have oiled that hinge. Nothing more annoying than a squeaky hinge.

All in all, very good piece.
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Review of Dave's Longing  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
First Off: I'm the old fashion type that doesn't believe in gay marriage but at the same time I believe everyone deserves to be happy no matter how or where they find that happiness. Happiness should never be denied to anyone.

Your story was very good. The imagery was excellent. I have to admit I enjoyed it very much.
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Review of LOVE IS...  
Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a wonderful piece. Love is all we need. Love should be spread daily.

Love is, had a nice flow. It was easy to easy to read and understand.

The title is an eye catcher. Everyone likes to read about love.

All in all, this was a very good piece.
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
These stories always get my attention. I was always a big Puff The Magic Dragon fan.

Your story reminds me of that song just a little.

Your story has very good imagery and the flow is excellent. It kind of took me back to my childhood.

There didn't seem to be any errors in spelling or punctuation as far as I could tell.

For good story.
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Review by Dartagnan
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Excellent. Enjoyed this piece very much. Your writing style is very good. I really didn't see anything that needed to be changed. The imagery was great. The story was easy to read and didn't have to reread. Thank you for a wonderful tale Look forward to the next one.
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