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2,498 Public Reviews Given
2,660 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well, this is an interesting interactive. A young teenage boy, or girl, is sent to a land that is full of dragons. Also, it seems that there are a wide variety of dragons, from those who want them as a meal, to those who want them as a lover, to those who want them as a friend. Interesting.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I've located some spelling and grammar errors. To fix them, use Word for the basic spelling and grammar. Also, leave some space between the paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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352
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a nice story to read. A woman finds out that a young man wishes to marry her daughter, and agrees to keep it a secret from the young bride-to-be. However, sometimes, keeping a secret from your daughter can be tricky, especially when you want to go tell the whole world.

Characters
Very relating- It can be hard to keep some secrets secret.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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353
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting group. Open primarily to those who have the ability to create book items, specifically blogs/journals, this group has an interesting contest; using a prompt of the day, create a blog entry every day until the contest is over, and a nice prize awaits some lucky bloggers. Sounds like a mess of fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your group. May you get plenty of bloggers.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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354
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little poem. The various prey animals try to chose which predator is the most savage of them all. Each animal says a candidate, and explains why they believe the predator is the most savage. However, the winner is a bit of a surprise.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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355
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little story. After dealing with her controlling parents for the last time, a young woman decides to go someplace where no one knows who she is. However, along the way, someplace near a small town, she ends up with a flat tire.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar, but the young woman's personal thoughts ought to be in italics.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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356
Review of 54 EXCUSES  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is a funny story. A man tells of a time that he and a bunch of friends bought themselves a racehorse. However, when they try to race it, the horse losses. They then try to figure out why, but they get a bunch of crazy information, from a bunch of people. Crazy.

Characters
Really crazy.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Question
Where did the 54 excuses come from?

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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357
Review of I Am Not a Hero  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. Since his birth, one man was destined to slay an evil king. He was trained by a group of brothers, who were skilled in the arts of combat. However, when he and his men encounter the evil king, the chosen one finds himself frozen in fear.

Characters
Sometimes, others are the ones who will do what is needed.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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358
Review of Trick or Tweet  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story that shows how dependence on technology can be very detrimental to people's health. A man from the 2020's writes about how things had changed over the last 20-odd years, from a terrorist attack at the end of 2012, to the use of computer implants in everyone. However, it all comes with a price.

Characters
They make one wonder.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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359
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well, here's a useful little item for writers to check out. It gives plenty of tips that new writers could use, such as certain things like when to use "who" or "whom" and "on to" or "onto" and a wide variety of other useful tips. I can see it helping plenty of people out.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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360
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting item that I'm sure that most users new to Writing.Com could relate to. A young writer comes to a strange place, where she meets up with writers of all walks of life, from all over the world, and finds herself right at home with them.

Characters
Certainly relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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361
Review of The Dialogue 500  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, this is a fun contest. Create a story that's five hundred words or less, using only dialogue, and following the prompt, and you could win a nice prize, with five hundred Gift Points guarantied to those who present eligible entries. Makes one want to start talking.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your contest. May plenty of people enter.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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362
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. Three young youths, with strange powers, go through life, living with whomever would care for them, until they met up with a powerful seer, who cared for them like a mother. However, a strange and powerful man has come for the youths.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
In the paragraph about them using others' abilities, "others" should be "others'".

Suggestions
You might want to put some space between the paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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363
Review of Drone  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little poem about what it might be like to be an android, following a certain set of commands, and living out a basic routine, with no variation. Sounds like a good deal of life, as there rarely is any variation in a person's life.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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364
Review of Big Bad Wolf  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. After a series of grisly murders, two supernatural detectives decide to go after the perpetrator- a wolf-creature that likes to kill women. Magic spells fly when the two forces encounter each other. Makes one wonder what's out there.

Characters
Very interesting. I want to see the rest of the series.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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365
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting poem. A man goes to a special lake, which houses the Lady of the Lake and tries to claim Excalibur, the sword of King Author. However, the Lady decides to test the man, to see if he is worthy of the sword. Very interesting.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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366
Review of Resolutions Kept  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting short story. A elderly man makes a New Years resolution- Clean out the closet. While doing so, it seems like he's stepping back in time- finding a long lost golf club, an old bowling trophy, and finally, a cigar box containing his first resolutions. Nice.

Characters
This is the sort of person many want to be when they get older- being able to keep their promises, even those made for themselves.

Spelling and Grammar
For the final resolution, "Find" needs an "i" to be correct.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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367
Review of INDEPENDENCE  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting poem. Written from the point of view of a woman whose husband puts her down, this poem addresses issues that deal with inequality between the sexes. This is something that people should think about, as it is quite common.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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368
Review of The Office  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little story. A young girl has a hard time choosing what she wants to be when she grows up, from a puppy, to a policeman, to a teacher, to a swing, and a bunch of other things. Then she decides to be an "adult" but finds out that things are very boring.

Characters
Makes one remember what they wanted to be when they grew up.

Spelling and grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Fading Stars  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting short story. While on the job, a barkeeper listens to one of his usual customer's problems. It seems that the man, a former rock star, was having some trouble with his family, as his wife left him, taking the kids. Makes one wonder.

Characters
Some people can relate to this.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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370
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this looks like a fun little event. Buy some C-notes to send to your friends, group-mates, and maybe family members, and you'll be helping out a great group, ROAK, which spends its time giving out memberships to those who have trouble affording them. Given the fact that this group has helped me out on many occasions, I might just have to join in on the fun and help them for a change.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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371
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Now this is interesting. After dealing with his condition for a long time, a woman finally convinces her husband to go and see a doctor for his problems. I had to laugh when I found out what the condition was; I wonder if it's related to the other issues.

Characters
They make me wonder.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

This is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this looks like an interesting introduction to your story. You talk about how there was once a war between humans and machines, but thanks to a massive effort, humans were able to destroy the machines. However, it seems that some of the machines survived. Makes me want to read the rest of the book, not to mention the series.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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373
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well this is an interesting series of poems, which seem to about one person as he changes over a period of weeks, from a civilian into a member of the Navy. Sometimes, certain experiences will change you. Sometimes it's for the better, sometimes it's for the worse.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to add the Category Military to this, as it reflects your experiences as you went through boot camp.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. A pirate captain is given a job to help some revolutionaries end the reign of a very powerful man. The price they are offering is a way for her to put an end to her immortality. However, it seems that the powers that be, which are led by the Pirate's own father, are not in the mood to step aside peacefully. I hope to see the rest of the story put up.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting chapter in your story. After being lied to, the pirate captain decides to question her perspective employers, threatening to report them to the authorities, unless they tell her the real reason that they want to hire her.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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