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2,498 Public Reviews Given
2,660 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of Love Daggers  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your Fourth of Five reviews that you bought from the "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

You have someone trying to deal with the loss of their love. It feels like their heart was cut out, and a whole lot more. Sometimes they wonder why aren't they dead.

Thoughts
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Shining Blade  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Third of Five reviews you bought from the "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

An interesting poem. A woman tries to kill herself, by cutting her wrists, or some such thing. As the blood flows from her body, she realizes that her man cares for her, and tries to stop the bleeding.

Thoughts
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Second of Five reviews you bought from the "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

This poem tries to tell the definition of love. In some ways, its hard to describe- magic, addiction, royalty, celebration, and a whole lot more. Nothing can fully do it justice.

Thoughts
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Incubus  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" . However, it has been disqualified for being too old for the the contest- it's been around longer that I've been a member, let alone my contest. *Bigsmile* However, you still get a review.

You have a man, who has seen some frightening things, such as someone getting boiled alive. Now he's being contacted by someone from the Beyond.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Next round, enter a new item. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is the first of five reviews you ordered from the "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

Well, this is an interesting story. An Indian is working in at a company in the Middle East, working on the last day before he gets transferred to a company in Germany. On this day, he learns some harsh truths, such as the fact that the person whom he thought was his friend was really his enemy. He also finds out that the woman he has a crush on also likes him. How does one live their life when they only have a day to do it?

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to work on the spacing for contractions and possessions, and also the past/present/future tense of words.

Suggestions
You might want to make a glossary for words that aren't found in the English language- might help things out.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Zombie Acitvists  
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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
This is your Second and Final review for donating some packages/Gift Points to my auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy

Well, this is an interesting poem. It's certainly hard work being a protester, especially a zombie protester (and that's without some ex-Motocross Champion trying to kill you- Dead Rising 2 reference). Trying to find brains takes a good deal of hard work. Thankfully, you can push someone else in front of you to take the damage.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar.

Normally this would be worth 4.5*Star*s, but since this is in a special contest, you'll get 1*Star*. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
This is One of Two reviews for donating some packages/Gift Points to my Auction, . Enjoy.

Oh my god! A zombie Rambo! I don't know if I should laugh or scream at the thought, as I like watching many of Sylvester Stallone's movies (with the exception of the Rocky series- not a big fan of boxing.) Well, he'd certainly scare off the enemy.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

While I think this is worthy of 4.5 *Star*s, I'm going to abide by the rule of your contest and give you 1 *Star*. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is your Second and Final review for donating some Packages/Gift Points to my auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

Well, this is an interesting item. A man in a disguised vehicle is trying to figure out what to do after he has killed an undercover agent. He sees those who had paid him to do the job in front of him and comes to a decision.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
For the newspaper title, I think that "Man Gives His Life to Take Down Terrorists" would be better.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your First of Two reviews for donating packages/Gift Points to my Auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

Well, this is a nice and fun poll to vote in. Let's see, Waffles, Pancakes, French Toast- Hey, where's the option that says, "I'll tell you after I stuff my face and fill my stomach"? *Bigsmile* Lots of fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Remembrance  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final review for winning my package in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

This is a poem that talks about remembrance. It seems to take place in the spring, or fall, as there is talk of frost. It takes place just before dawn, with a number of people lighting candles for someone that they love. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" , where one has to tell a story about a nightmare they've had.

Let's see, a young boy wakes up, frightened by the sounds he has heard during his sleep. A creature then attacks the place, and his father is forced to fight it. Later, some car thieves attack his family, and another creature shows up. Very interesting.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

Suggestions
You might want to make it more clear that the story is a memoir of an old man telling what happened in his childhood.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Ice cream night  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your review for donating a package/Gift Points to my auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

You talk about a personal experience, when you and your family went out to get ice cream. On the way there, you begin to regret the idea- two teenagers and a child in the care are never quiet. Eventually, you get the ice cream, but it seems that more trouble shows up, in the form of your mother and your one daughter's boyfriend. Funny.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
In the third paragraph, we're should be were.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your entry into my contest, "Invalid Item" , where one has to tell a story based on a nightmare.

Let's see, a woman wakes up to a cold room. She goes to close the window, when she hears a sound. She goes to check it out, and gets attacked by a wolf creature- but she wakes up in her bed. Then, she hears the sound, and the cycle repeats. Very interesting.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to put some space between paragraphs.

Good luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of A DREAM I HAVE  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" , where people have to tell a story about a nightmare.

You have a woman and her boyfriend driving home having an argument. There is an accident, and the boyfriend is killed as a result. Now the woman is trying to find a way to forgive herself, and get forgiveness from her dead boyfriend.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You ought to capitalize the title, and the intro. Also, have some space in the paragraphs- the no spacing is really scary.

Good luck in the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Followed  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" , in which one has to tell a scary story based on a nightmare they had.

Let's see... You have a young woman running away from a crazy person, due to a little incident involving the other's driving. The crazy person chases the woman to her home and does terrible things to her and her family. This is most certainly scary.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to work on your contractions, and you have some spelling errors- one very prominent in the first paragraph.

Suggestions
You might want to remove the last paragraph that says the woman was killed and is now a ghost- an open ending would be more interesting- as it would make others wonder what happened.

Best of luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a useful item to find. While many Items deal with what to look for when writing a review, this actually deals with how to write a review. It talks about making sure that the Review and Rating correspond to each other. It talks about how the spelling in the review should be correct, and that one should try the Review Tool when reviewing for a number of groups. Very useful.

Originality
I've seen many Reviewing items, but none about the writing of a review.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a place where people can come and celebrate this person's account's Birthday- talk about being on for a long time, since 4/16/02. Something tells me they've seen a lot of good people come and go. Well, here's to another ten years of being on the site.

Originality
I've seen other Birthday-types of forums, but it's always nice to drop in.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Have a Happy Birthday!

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This looks like a fun little activity. Bid on someone, and if you win, that person has to send you a gift every day for a month. Such gifts are of course up to the person, but they could range from reviews, to reviewing packages, Gift Points, Merit Badges, Awardicons, and more. I hope I win the person I made my bid on.

Originality
Haven't seen too many of these type of Auctions.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your Auction.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Well, this is an interesting poem. A princess and her pet leopard are curse, she to live forever, and the leopard to remain a statue. As the centuries pass, the odds of them finding each other gets slimmer. Will they ever find the other one? We shall see.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting contest event. While many contests deal in static items, mainly short stories and poems, this one deals in a whole lot more. Of course, like all contests, it has some rules, namely that the item being submitted must not have been given a 50K Awardicon or higher from another event.

Originality
Looks interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a funny little poem, which is about a video that's been showing up in a few places, about a lion that attacked a zebra, but messed up somehow and the zebra managed to escape. Well, such things do happen from time to time- not every hunt will go right.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to post a link to the video, if you can.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little story. A dog thinks that his owner needs his protection, and is always barking when someone is near the house, such as the garbageman and the postman. As the owner of a dog myself, I know just how things can get with them- crazy.

Characters
Relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response for the "What an Old Character!" prompt, in which the responder was to read some old stories they'd written and come up with a profile for one of the characters and create a short story about the person. Since you're more of a poet, and the main character tends to be yourself, you did a poem about yourself. Looks pretty good.

Characters
Relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Story Cafe  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well, this is a useful forum. Here people can come and discuss things about there writing, as well as those of others. Also, they can come here looking for help with a new story or chapter they are working on and ask for advice from other people. Very useful.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

May plenty of people come and talk about things.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Acid Tongued  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, this looks like a useful forum to locate. If someone dabbles in things that don't get many reviews, such as graphic stories, controversial topics, or their writing style just scares people away, they can come here looking for a review. I might have to come here from time to time.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

May you give plenty of reviews.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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