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I love to read just about anything I get my hands on. I will give you my honest opinion, and I will try and help you with errors. If it is a good read I will tell you all about it.
I'm good at...
I'm good at children's story's. and short stories. and poetry, music, medical, holiday, friendship.
Favorite Genres
animal, children, family, inspirational, drama, nature, poetry, music, friendship.
Least Favorite Genres
mystery, science fiction
Favorite Item Types
poetry, short stories.
Least Favorite Item Types
no novel's I don't have time to read them.. I love them just don't have time.
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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my attention



Overall Impression: This is a good poem, and very touching.



My Favorite part: So as I stare up at the big blue sky, I see a face of joy passing by. A beautiful spirit, with a lovely smile, wishing that she could stay just awhile.



My final thoughts: This is a great poem, very touching, and a great way to remember your mom.
keep up the good work.












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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The Title is what made me read this, and I have read other poetry by you, and loved it.



Overall Impression: This is very touching. I can relate.



My Favorite part: I sit beside a cool, rippling stream,
I feel, rather than hear,
a sudden rush of wings.

I often have wondered , when I hear y name being said, and no one is around. if this is God trying to get my attention.



My final thoughts: This is a great poem, I love how you write, keep up the good work.
I am going to submit this to good deeds.












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Review of Unexpected Grace  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title



Overall Impression: I really liked this poem. it speaks volumes.



My Favorite part: This journey can be such a trial,
heartaches, joys, tears, smiles;



My final thoughts: this Is a great poem, and so very true. we as Christians don't deserve grace, but yet God freely gives us grace when needed. keep writing. you did a wonderful job on this poem.












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for entry "Parenting Skills" 
Review by Rebecca
Rated: E | (3.0)
I love it. Can't wait for more.
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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my eye.



Overall Impression: As I said before, the title is what caught my eye, its not what I expected, but let me tell you. this
is a wonderful poem, very touching.



My Favorite part :At the last moment,
i found a hope,
they were cattles of the SHEPHERD,
they offered me with alive soul.
they rescued me to the surface
from the deep see
where i was sinking down with my body



My final thoughts: It amazing how much everyday we worry about how we look on the outside, and how much we try to
improve pur appearance, that we forget about our inside, how we get lost in the business of life, until we feel completely empty and at the last minute, we seek refuge in God, and He is always there to rescue us. all we have to do is call on him.












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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my attention, and of course you asked me to look at this.



Overall Impression: This a great poem,I was smiling the whole time I read it.



My Favorite part: Me shooting drivers behind with my gun.
Holding candy sticks as if they were smokes,
Both giving it eyes with pinches and pokes.

This reminds me of something my granddaughter would do.


My final thoughts: I really loved this poem, it was everything you would do on a family outing to the beach. very well written.
I am going to submit this to good deeds get cash.












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Review of Life  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: my name is Rebecca and I will be reviewing your story:

Please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my attention



Overall Impression: This is a very good poem, very touching.



My Favorite part: Don't look as if you understand. I agree with this, there are many people that claim they understand, and really have no clue.



My final thoughts: This was well written, and very touching. you did a great job on this poem. keep up the good work, I am going to submit this to good deeds get chash.








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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi: my name is Rebecca and I will be reviewing your story:

Please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title is what caught my eye.



Overall Impression: it was a funny story. so I see why you rated it comedy.



My Favorite part: I quickly pulled off my civilian clothes to reveal my secret identity and flew to the rescue. you never did say what your identity was?



My final thoughts: you have a good imagination, keep writing.












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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi: my name is Rebecca and I will be reviewing your story:

Please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title is what caught my eye, and you asked me to check this out.



Overall Impression: this is a very good write, and very interesting. a lot of stuff I didn't know.



My Favorite part: the questions are my favorite part. yes many questions. and unanswered questions.



My final thoughts: I find it ironic that someone who didn't want anything to do with children, could write such great children books. and his legacy will go on for many many years.












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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi: my name is Rebecca and I will be reviewing your story:

Please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught me eye.



Overall Impression: Well first off I want to say. you are a great writer, you have accomplished so much, I am jealous. I have read quite a few things in your portfolio. you have done a awesome job.



My Favorite part: Our families take a lot when it comes to our behavior or actions towards them. They tolerate us and will always forgive, because they love us. And, we love them. We are secure. The comfort factor is there. Is it right for us to do such things? Of course not. One would think you would never hurt them, because they are your family. It's a strange paradox yet a paradox nonetheless. It's one of those things in life we'll never truly understand.




My final thoughts: family is family, it's just that. no matter what they do or don't do, you still love them unconditionally.
I look forward to reading more of your stories.











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Review of Friendships Lost  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a wonderful story. I am so glad you entered it in the contest, you did a great job on this.
I like everything about it. it is very sad, almost brought me to tears. and it's sad to think that this happens to so many animals. its very heart breaking.

I am going to submit this to Good Deeds Get Cash.
Keep up the good work.


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Review of Fried Pickles  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I never had these before until a friend made these. I love them. i am going to have to try your recipie, Im glad i was looking through your portfolio.
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Review of My Beloved  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a really great poem, I like how it goes so smoothly,
And,yes our Lord is our one true love. We will never find anyone so loyal and faithful.
and who has a unconditional love for us.
Thank you for the great read.
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Review of Crazy Faith  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi: my name is Rebecca and I will be reviewing your story:

Please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The title is what caught my eye.as you know I love to read anything of faith.



Overall Impression; This is a perfect writing for a sermon, if I didn't already be a born again Christian, and have such a strong faith of my own, I would definetly be taking that walk to the alter. and begging on my knees to accept Jesus as my personal savor. You have a lot of great points that I think people sometimes forget. even people with strong faith sometimes lose there way, the struggles of everyday life can take control. And that old devil is right there to step in and ruin everything.

New Christians that have just received Christ as there savior they are the on fire ones, they are so eager to learn
they want to learn so much, and sometimes get overwhelmed, I always encourage them to take it slow, they have a lifetime to learn. and I tell them if you don't know something then please don't be afraid or embarrassed to ask, we were all there at one point in our walk.




My Favorite part:, but too many of us are scared to stretch our faith that far. We worry about whether we are doing it right. We worry about others’ opinions. We worry about scaring others away from the saving truth of Jesus. We worry that we will become one of those “Jesus Freaks” who take the whole faith thing way too far. Name your excuse – we use them every day. This I believe happens everyday. if you truly have a strong faith, and you are not ashamed of Jesus Christ being your savior, then you shouldn't care what people think, I think that people always want to "fit in". Well I'm hear to tell you, your not going to get into heaven by fitting in.. Hold your head up and never ever be ashamed to say I Believe in Jesus Christ.

My favorite verse and it kind of goes along with your verse; Hebrews 11:6 But without faith it is impossible to please him: for he that cometh to God must believe :that he is, and that he is a rewarder of them that diligently seek him.

I have listened to the song Crazy Faith. excellent song. Again when the Lord speaks to you, you need to listen. He will never steer you in the wrong direction.




My final thoughts: Again my final thoughts are that this is a excellent sermon, and one that I hope someday you will get to present. I wish you all the luck in bible school. if ever by chance you get to present this I would love to hear from you on how it went.












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Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: my name is Rebecca and I will be reviewing your story:

Please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: I liked the title that is what prompted me to read your oem



Overall Impression I thought it was very catchy,


I desperately wanted to earn a badge

Now I have earned a few

With recognitions too.

The last time I looked I had fifty two.

Promotion in November said I prefer you

My Favorite part:



My final thoughts: I think this is what every new member on WDC is hoping ofr.












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Review of Check Please  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a very good poem. not at all what i expected by the title.
As i was reading, I could relate to alot of the poem, its very true about a girls broken heart, and how she won't let her heart be broken again. as I read I was thinking. good for her. to get out while she did.
The end isn't what I expected. but once again. it was a great poem.
Keep up the good work.

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Review of Goodbye  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very good piece, and oh so very true in alot of realtionships. i personally can relate to the story. I was the girl that use to back all the time. until one day it did get worse. and I finally just didn't go back. and I became that person who just listened when people talked and gave comfort and advice. and I also had to learn that I couldn't save everyone either, its very heart breaking.

I think that you did a awesome write here. keep up the good work.

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Review of Without You  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
I love it, this is a simple poem with alot of meaning. there are alot of without you.. things. the imagination could run wild with this poem. keep up the good work,
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Review of it's coming....  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a very good poem, Autumn is my favorite season, you did a wonderful job pointing out all the things you can do in the fall , and very discripitive of the fall leaves with the bright colors. I love fall because of high school football, sweatshirt weather, and the smell of fresh crisp air. also the hay rides, and the beautiful colors.
keep up the good work.
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Review of Into The Sea  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very good, i haven't read a good my iterestpeom in awhile. congtrats!!! it's very captivating, and keeps
my interest.

Keep up the good work. im going to submit it to good deeds.


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Review of End of the Season  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
A good poem, so sad to see autumn come to a end, as it is one of my favorite season's.
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Review of Rains Bow  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is very cute. we all would like to find that pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.
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Review of Blue  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
this is really cute, and I like how it rhymes, I think it would be a cute book someday, good luck.
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Review of The Rushings  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (2.0)
This could be a good story, it just needs to ne laid out a little better, and maybe a little more info on the rushings. Who wouldn't let you walk?
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Review of Blessed Release  
Review by Rebecca
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
this is a very good write, I can relate I have had a lot of those feelings, I pray through them, and then feel better.


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