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Hi Wanderlust Twenty-Something I found your writing ad random. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirit.
On Title/Subject
Today, on Election Day I found your excellent and polite letter to one of the candidates for President of the United States, Donald Trump. As an outsider, but a very concerned global citizen from Europe, I have to thank you for this clear and very personal letter. I agreed totally. With the words of CNN on election day polls and reactions audible in the other room, I am going to dissect your letter. Stay tuned!
General impressions
I love this open letter to Donald Trump with your concerns and thoughts about what might happen if he wins. I like it that you don't lower yourself to his level of contempt and hatred to make your point, although I could have understood that as well, but you didn't. You chose your words carefully and kept being polite.
I like it that you are thinking of what may happen in the future with your future kids. Donald Trump is by no means a role model and you make sure that is understood.
Favorite Parts
Truth be told, Mr. Trump, I need to first and foremost begin by thanking you. I am a registered democrat from the great state of Pennsylvania and, admittedly, up until recently couldn’t have cared any less about politics. The reason I need to thank you is that due in large part to your campaign for president, I deemed it necessary to do my homework and educate myself. I delved further into not only each party’s platforms but also each candidate’s. This began way back in the beginning of the primary season and continues on a daily basis. Not only do I need to thank you for sparking my newfound interest in politics, but also for helping me come to the revelation that the party I belong to and the candidate I support is, without question, perfectly aligned with my own personal beliefs and opinions. Fair warning: proceed with caution. That is, I assure you, the first and final compliment I have for you, Mr. Trump.
Indeed, if you have to thank Trump for doing anything, it is for making you enthusiastic about politics again. I think it is understood that politics, how sordid sometimes it may be, is so important in our everyday lives. It affects everything. Him being the one that pulled you back into the realm of politics is indeed worthy of a thank you.
I loved the returning "Truth be told, Mr. Trump." It gives this letter it's own rhythm.
Suggestions
No grammar or spelling errors found. This letter has a beginning, middle, and end.
Final thoughts
I am hoping the Democrats will win this election, and I am very apprehensive since it's going to be a close call. I wish you wisdom in voting, although you made it perfectly clear who you are voting for. Thanks for sharing and have a great (victorious) day!
Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!
WakeUpAndLive
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