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7 Public Reviews Given
7 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll offer constructive criticism on your prose, grammar, spelling, formatting, and other technical elements. I'll also offer feedback on your storytelling, pacing, and character development.
I'm good at...
Providing background building up to depravity rather than diving in face-first with no particular direction. Even adult stories need to have something to keep the reader invested in the story.
Favorite Genres
Adult, mature, femsub, maledom, youngersub, olderdom, filth, fart, toilet, noncon, bdsm, s&m, etc.
Least Favorite Genres
Vanilla, young, malesub, youngerdom, oldersub, foot fetish, vomiting, gore, death, horror, etc.
Favorite Item Types
Interactives
Least Favorite Item Types
Poetry
I will not review...
I'll review just about anything. Just bear in mind the sort of content I produce and am interested in.
Public Reviews
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Review by ProudEdemaRuh
Rated: E | (5.0)
It feels like this would make for a great song. I get the impression this is about the infatuation of new love, but I sincerely hope that this is something that can be felt with that stable, supportive kind of old-love too. It's touching, comfortable, and warm.
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Review by ProudEdemaRuh
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very artistic interpretation of the ups and downs we encounter throughout life... and how incredibly all-consuming those downs can feel. I've felt this kind of despair and hopelessness before. But, I usually pull out of it too, and the very ending of this work seems to allude to attempting to ascend again, even knowing that you could and probably will crash and burn once more. But, what's life if not a series of failures that we have to learn to overcome?
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Review of Going Back  
Review by ProudEdemaRuh
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem. I read it twice over to try to understand its meaning. I like that anyone who has ever gone to college can relate to this--whether they've graduated, or have dropped out. We've all fought our fair share of stress in higher education, and with or without a degree to show for it, people can hold their heads high knowing that they gave it their all.
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Review of The Coffee Shop  
Review by ProudEdemaRuh
Rated: E | (5.0)
A unique short story. The character development for Lucy and Tom is handled perfectly given the length of the story. There are a few typographical errors, but those are easy to miss. This is a nice, feel-good story. Even in just the first few paragraphs, the author established the protagonist's backstory and implicitly strengthened the intrigue of the character.


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