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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
I'm good at...
I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
I will not review...
Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review of A Dog's Christmas  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello JDennis!

I have read your christmas poem in July titled A Dog's Christmas.

I actually read this out loud. This read JUST like the original classic. It flowed smoothly and effortlessly and had a great rhyme going on. Best of all it was very humorous. I pictured all of this happening and it was quite a scene. You painted a great picture here.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dan!

I have read your poem called "Another Butterfly Effect" and I am here to tell you what I have thought about it.

Firstly, this is my favorite style of poetry. I love how the structure, rhytm, and flow is in here. I am not sure what style this is but it was reading like a limerick without actually being a limerick. I'm a total sucker for limericks.

I liked how there as a spider that was noticed in the end.

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Toressa  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Toressa!

I have read these lyrics and I can imagine them with some kind of soft music playing. It sounded like it would be a very good song.

My favorite part was I close my eyes and hear your sighs
As whispers from the leaves
Your gentle touch I love so much
Comes lightly with each breeze.

I do not see anything wrong at all with this.

Very well done!


Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Game Models  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jeffhans!

I enjoy games and seeing the title of this reeled me in.

The very beginning of this seemed a bit choppy to me, like the first two sentences may have seemed better as one.

The context is fantastic and I loved the wording and details all throughout (after the first two choppy sentences) My favorite part is Being able to upgrade my cooking skills will look good for my upgrade bonuses.


This was an overall good read!




Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Gemini!

I am doing rising stars member to member reviews and chose this one because the title really jumped out at me.

I grew up around bikers. From what I personally have always known, each biker had their own bike. None were just passengers. Maybe it is a regional thing to be a passenger and a biker all at once.

Just a suggestion, but I think you should say who you ride with, in stead of just saying "we".

I loved the humor in here. The humorous title reeled me in. The outcome is great and seems very relaxing.

My dad and his friends have made the trip to Sturgis a few times. I personally, do not even want to be in a car for that long let alone a Harley.Just thought I'd share! *Laugh*

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Untitled  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sofei!

I have read your untitled poem and I have come to give you my thoughts on it and possibly ways to improve.

I absolutely loved this poem! It would be great if there was a title to go along with it. It told of a fantastic story, the rhyming was excellent, and the rhythm superb.

The only thing that kind of seemed to throw it off a bit was this: Nearly at the speed of

Light. But Jon begged, I can see exactly what you were going for but I felt that continuing the sentence in a different stanza through it off just a tad. It was kind of like unexpectedly tripping over something.

Write on!

Jenny



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Review of Hoops and Loops  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (1.5)
Hello Victoria!

I have read your poem titled "Hoops and Loops" and I would like to share my thoughts on it and give possible suggestions.

What I did like about it was the rhythm and flow of it. I thought that was done very well.

What I did not quite get though was what it was about. It just seems like you made a long list of things of fashion. I did not get at all what this was about other than the last two lines clued me into the fact that it was about someone who was dead. Maybe you can tweak it some and add more details. Perhaps one more stanza. Of course it is only a suggestion.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Moments of Gold  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jack!

I have read your piece titled "Moments of Gold" and I would like to tell you what I thought about this and if there is any room for improvement.

I really do not recall any errors as I have read this. You explained everything quite well. As I read it, I could not help but think of the tie between your last name and the title of this. Clever! I have such a difficult time coming up with good titles.

I really liked that there were pictures in here as well. They are all good but my favorite picture is the first one where Kaleb is watching hid mom leave. Such a cutie!

Write on!

Jenny



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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dan!

I have read your poem titled "21st Century Contrition" and I would like to offer you possible suggestions on ways to improve and my thoughts on this.

I thought that i was just absolutely perfect. The flow, rhyme, rhythm, and the whole topic. I also like how it was written in that the narrator was talking to the bee.

This poem was written at least nine years ago and I have no idea if the status of the bees have improved, worsened, or stayed the same. Hopefully that is a good sign and they have not worsened.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of The Witch's House  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Webwitch!

I have come here and took a look at "The Witch's House" and I would love to share my thoughts on it.

Personally speaking I thought it was very visually appealing. I like the colors and the different pictures and my favorite part was the little list of merit badges. I love looking at personal badges. I would donate to get One but I can not currently do such a thing. I have just returned to wdc and I am working on getting my points back up. Perhaps eventually I will donate.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Shopaholics  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Solace!

I have read your article titled "Shopaholics" and I'd like to give you my thoughts on it and possible suggestions to improve.

The topic itself was very god. I personally can not see how anybody can be a shopaholic. I like to buy things from time to time but no where even near the ballpark of a shopaholic.

There are more commas in here than there needs to be. For example this has too many in it: At times, when you are stressed, facing a period of anxiety or depression, then you may turn to excessive shopping to divert your attention and from some people's point of view, to keep yourselves busy. There are a couple other instances with comma overuse in here but that is all I see as far as ways to improve.

Write on!

Jenny






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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello StoryMistress!

I have looked through the folder "Cat walks and Coffee talks" and I can not believe that this is the first time I have run across it. This is a very excellent assignment book in my opinion. It reminded me of writing classes in school. The next time that I want to write something but need to find inspiration I now know where to go. I just can not believe that it took me nine years to discover this! Better late than never! *Laugh*

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of On Being Thankful  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Judy!

I am not going to review this as I normally would review something but I am still going to review in a way. I can not believe it had been seven years since you were here. I barely got to know you at all but I remember sending you a home made du rag that I know you got to use a few times before your passing. Reading this almost made my eyes water. It was like you are still here but I will not get your response to this. (Although that would be super cool) I am not even really certain as to why I am giving this review as you will not see it.

It is always better to be positive. It seems not to be so bad then. I am glad you got to spend time with your grandchildren although not for very long. Whatever amount of time you had with them was precious.

I will not be closing this by saying Write on but by saying Rest In Peace.

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Joey!

I have read "Google Supports Criminals" and would like to share my thoughts on it and possible ways to improve.

As I was reading this I could not help but think of the old e mails from when the internet was young about having a long lost relative in Africa and all they needed was information from me and I will inherit their riches. There always was and always will be scams like this on the internet. Google or not. The most recent kind is: They call you and say you have something wrong with your computer and that you have requested assistance. I have had this happen twice. I just hung up. Well...the first time I just hung up. The second time, I cussed at him a little bit.


My favorite part of this was (Yes, I do believe Google execs would sell their grandmothers into prostitution if they made money on it.) (Yes, I do believe Google execs would sell their grandmothers into prostitution if they made money on it.)

Write on!

Jenny

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Review of Lightning  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: E | (1.5)
Hell Vercerise!

I have read your poem titled Lightning" and I would like to give you my thoughts on it and perhaps a couple of suggestions.

I have got to tell you first of all that this whole poem gave me no impression of lightning. The only thing I would even think was about lightning at all is this line When she graced the damp earth. And I suppose the she is the lightning? In my opinion, it could have used different wording and descriptions.

Write on!

Jenny





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Review of Tiny Fingers  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello ImpulseZip!

I have read your poem titled "Tiny Fingers" and I would like to share what I have thought about it.

First of all, what really hooked me was the rhyme pattern and rhythm / It hooked me in from the very fist line.

At first I was a little bit confused but then it dawned on me upon reading it again.....Grimm's Fairy tales! Why that just did not click with me at first, I just do not know.

Very well done!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Double Wide  
Review by *Jenny*
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello HuntersMoon!

I have read this poem titled "Double-Wide" and I absolutely loved it! For some reason, my inner voice was reading it in a southern accent. I guess my inner voice made the wal mart one that is in Arkansas.

When I read the last stanza: The years have passed. Our love has grown;
our passion has not been abated
by time or the discovery
that we are closely blood-related. That really made me think of Arkansas. Just because of the stereotype there. Just as with the wal mart stereotype. (Although there is truth to walmart stereotypes. *Laugh*

Fantastic job!

Write on!





Jenny
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Review of My Hobbies  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello River!

This is quite a fantastic list that you have here!


Personally speaking, I have never and probably will never crochet or cross stitch but I used to scrapbook all the time when my kid was a baby. I also make some jewelry at times and I love puzzle games. Oh and years ago, I tried to get into genealogy to trace my heritage. Even talked to some family members and got documents. But decided that I did not care to do all that research so I just made up stories for everyone. *FacePalm*



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Review of Movie Talk  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Maryann!

I know that months ago, I posted in this forum and we had a couple of discussions. It did not even dawn on me at all then to review this forum. I was just enjoying talking and reading about movies! *Laugh*

Well, anything about movies and other entertainment things are right up my alley. I love the picture of the movie theater right up top then the different colors when you were telling about the rules and such.

The only thing that I do not like at all, is it has not seen anything happen in here for seven months!! I thought for sure that there'd be some more postings.

Write on!

Jenny



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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Hooves!

I just loved this. You have told just who you are around writing.com and your different personas.

I do not think that you left anything out. If you did, I sure have no idea what it could even be!

I have two ultimate favorite parts in here that I have read. Numero uno: When you showed all of the badges that you have commissioned. I love all of the designs. You said that two of them are exclusively for you but did not say which ones. I am going to take a wild guess on one and say the bull is for you only. I could not even begin to imagine what the other one is.

The other ultimate favorite part is where you saying how there are bullies here and you are not afraid to use the block feature. I have never had to use that feature. While I have had several disagreements because of personality clashes, I have never had to use the block feature. I also hope that I never have to. I know that being a social site, it very well could happen. I just loved how you were up front and put everyone in their places before they even started!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Tatanka  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Oldwarrior!

The description "Spirit in the sky" honestly made me think of the one hit wonder of the '60's by the same name which is one of my very favorite songs.

I really love this picture! I am a really big fan of weather things so seeing clouds and lightning is just fantastic to me!

The picture made me think that when it storms, the person sees his recently passed horse. I could be way off but that is what my mind came up with almost immediately.

The only thing I have ever known tatanka as, was buffalo or bison. (From the movie Dances with Wolves. And they say you don't learn anything from tv.) So I was a bit surprised once I opened this and saw a horse in stead. Tatanka might just have another meaning that I am unaware of.

Write on!

Jenny







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Review of Music to write by  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Joey!

What an eclectic piece. There was such a variety of music in here. More so than I was expecting. I was expecting to find songs that were by a few artists but there were definitely more than I anticipated.

Being a nature lover myself, I was quite pleased with the nature sounds!

In the first sentence, you have Okay, I stated collecting some music to write by, as I find more I will add it. I think it would be better, if you took the word "okay" out. Also, you do not have the letter r in the word: started.

Write on!

Jenny




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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Kat!

I really enjoyed reading this. Personally, I just love to see things about heaven and hell. All things. I am not exactly a believer of either one, but they both hold major entertainment value for me.

I really liked how you gave examples to back up your thoughts on everything in here. Also, you mentioned something that I have never thought before. That people would adapt as they have done with anything else in the history of human kind and it will no longer be torture or bliss. As I read on, it made me think of yin and yang. You just can't have the good without the bad and vice versa.


Write on!

Jenny



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Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello D Carlson!

This was an entry for the contest "Songs, movies, and more! Oh my!"

This was a very well written story about a romance. My favorite part was reading the letter that was to Lucy.

You fit all of the titles in nicely and I really enjoyed that you went above and beyond the required amount of titles. I am glad that you had a lot of fun with this.

There were even thing in here that I could relate to, on a personal level: I live in St. Louis and I was born in August so therefore my birthstone is peridot. I just love the personal coincidences!

Write on!

Jenny




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Review of Kiss of Death  
Review by *Jenny*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Jen!

This was an entry for the contest "Songs, movies, and more! Oh my!"

I really enjoyed this poem! This was very short but yet it fit all of the titles in perfectly. AND you fit in more titles than was required. I couldn't wait to see what happened next. This had me on the edge of my seat.

Since this was a dark/horror poem, I love how you made it all red and still had the titles highlighted in bold, not even changing colors. So it looks dark/horrific.

Write on!

Jenny




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