Well you're both much smarter than me, and very helpful and generous with your time and advice. Thank you. Your suggestions have been immensely helpful, and have given me much food for thought. I've been turning the problem around in my head all night and I think I've come up with a stronger story as a consequence. I now need to let it marinate in its own juices for a day or two to see if holds together...
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