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Oct 18, 2017 at 8:42am
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Re: Re: Re: Querying Agents
by KenF
tips for reducing that are:

make sure your MS is reasonably edited yourself (kill lots of adverbs, that, just, very, passive voice, excessive dialogue taggage).

Make sure the first sentence hooks, the first paragraph reels them in. Get to the good stuff, skip the exposition..
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