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Amasúrah was banished to the Nine Hells, but now she's coming out!
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Twiga's Shard RPG Campfire was based on http://www.shardrpg.com/

The Planet that Kira had seen in The Classified Lands books, the Planet that was broken into pieces but still somehow staying together, that place was called Dardunah, or the World of the False Dawn, that is because the Smaller Blue Sun Edu rises before the larger Amber Sun Lokaynu.

Chapter One: Amasúrah

Queen Benificia was originally from Dardunah before she had been banished to the Nine Hells. Back then her name had been Amasúrah before the Great Mother and Father had taken away her name, but she never lost complete contact with Dardunah for many still worshiped her...Even if they did not know who she truly was.

In the Northern Tropical Lands where the Reptile and Amphibian People or 'Sarpah' live, a Black Cobra Woman, a Sorceress or Shi'hibas as they were called, was dancing in a very specific manner. The Black Cobra, named Na'Vi, was young and prideful, she was attempting to summon a demon in order to get revenge on one who had insulted her.

Na'Vi the Cobra was ready for the Demon she summoned to spring forth. Instead SHE was sucked INTO the Nine Hells!

"Greetings...Offspring of mine." Said the Queen

"Nagamissa?!" exclaimed Na'Vi. To the Sarpah, Amasúrah was the benevolent Goddess of Healing.

The Queen laughed a hissing laugh "No..." She said "...The Furred Vajrah and the Feathered Paksin remember my true name of Amasúrah. Here I have become Queen Benificia. You are one of my descendants from before I was banished here. And since you so closely resemble me when I was still flesh and blood, I shall possess you to gain entry to the mortal coil once more!"

"No!" Screamed Na'Vi, but already the Queen's spirit flew into body...
When Na'Vi's eyes opened she was back in the land of the living, at this point Amasúrah was in complete control.

She was in a field of green grass, under a sky that was only bright blue, no other colors, with white clouds.

Of course Amasúrah already knew this from her ages of studying other realms
Na'vi lay in the field for a moment fully aware that her body was now fully possessed by the demon queen. She could only stay helplessly aware as the demon did whatever she wanted. When Na'vi spoke people would think it was Na'vi but Na'vi would know differently. She wasn't sure what was real and what wasn't.

The field in which she lay was strange and there was a strange look to the sky. Where had Queen Beneficia taken her or what kind of mind game was she playing? Na'vi wasn't certain, but she was aware that she still had her wits about her, even if the queen's personality overruled her own. She just had to catch the queen off guard and signal the inhabitants of this world that something was amiss.
An old wolf sat by a fire, scrapping food off of a pan. On the other side of the fire was a huge sword, stabbing the ground, to say nothing about the body of a middle-aged lion.

The wolf looked at the body. "Next time, don't go robbing an old wolf trying to have a bite to eat." He set the pan back on the fire, and stood up. He walked around, to look at the body, and pulled a knife from the lion's chest. "'Give me your stuff or die!,' you said," the wolf said, as he cleaned the knife off. "Well, you're the one who died, so I guess that your stuff is now mine. Sorry about the vest; leather isn't very good armor compared to certain other things, as you've found out. Shame really; this looks expensive. Well, it ought to be worth a night or two at an inn with a good female."

With experienced practice, the wolf soon stripped the lion of his possessions, and was in the process of digging a hole in the ground, off to the side of the trail. "You probably would have left me to rot, but, while I may have taken your life, and your stuff, never let it be said that I didn't put you in a good hole in the ground; it's only good manners to bury those you kill, as travelers don't like finding bodies laying around, and it ruins a person's reputation if they just let bodies lay around, and never let it be said that Muldin Lupis doesn't have a good reputation."

He then looked down the road, and saw another traveler, at some distance away. "Well, with any luck, they'll be a priest to give you some final words, before I toss the dirt on you. Still, best get this hole big enough to fit you. Never let it be said that I don't dig a good grave."
Muldin Lupis had the grave dug and the body buried by the time the distant traveler reached his location. The reason for the traveler's slow pace was revealed. He was an old bear and he carried a heavy bundle on his back.

"Good evening to you, Grandfather," said Lupis. "Have you no children to carry that load for you?"

"That load IS my children," said the bear. "Two cubs, just born, their mother dead now. I am carrying them to her family to be raised. I only hope they survive the journey."

"You are remarkably old to be a father."

"Hmph! I don't see what my age has to do with it. Their mother was young enough, but unfortunately succumbed to one of the diseases that plague the Northern Forests. I'm taking them South where they might have a better chance of reaching maturity."

"I'm headed that way myself," said Muldin Lupis. "Shall we travel together for extra security? This road is know for its bandits and cutthroats."

"Like the one you buried behind those trees?"

"How did you know that?" Muldin's face was a mask of comical surprise.

The old bear grinned. "I have a nose and I know how to use it. The scent of blood is strong. Yes, I will travel with you. I need all the help I can get. My name is Ursine."

"And mine is Muldin Lupis," said the wolf.
Meanwhile on Dardunah in the Kingdom of Andhi nobody knew about Na'Vi's disappearance until her uncle a King Cobra named Sasshundrah came in knocked on the door.

Sasshundrah was a Minor Lord or Aryah in the Kingdom of Andhi

"Na'Vi..."He said softly "You've been absent for more than a day! Don't you want something to eat?"

But as his forked tongue flicked in and out he detected the slight scent of burning, he opened the door to find...a large burn mark on the floor and on one wall!

"NaVi!" Sassundrah cried "What has happened to you?!"

He saw her Journal laying unscathed, he picked it up and read the last page that was written on. ""Soon I will will have my revenge..." He read aloud "...Against that Mockingbird Honor Guard who so brazenly insulted me...I shall summon a demon to torment her..."

Sassundrah gasped in horror "Oh...No..." He realized his beloved Niece had attempted the forbidden art of demon summoning
Muldin and Ursine began their journey south. Little did they know they were being watched. Queen Amasur'ah was watching them from a distance. She knew she had to create some chaos on this world if the world was to strike the other dimensions with it's mass destructive capabilities. The more destruction the better. Now she would have her two cronies do her dirty work.
"We're being watched," said Ursine. "I'm not sure about from which direction though."

"Been getting that same feeling myself," said Muldin. The wolf sniffed the air. "Can't smell anyone else but you, me, and your two cubs, and I don't see anyone for some distance. Might be magic, or someone flying way above us."

"Let's hope they ain't stupid enough to attack me and my cubs," said Ursine.

"Have you ever been in a fight?" Muldin asked.

"Used to be a guard when I was younger, and I've seen my share of brawls, fights, and battles," said Ursine.

"Mercenary myself, and I've seen my own fair share of brawls, fights, and battles," said Muldin. "Perhaps we've fought in some of the same ones, at one point or another, in one manner or another."

"I doubt we ever met when we were younger," said Ursine. "Those who fought me tended to have issues."

"Could say the same," said Muldin. "Thing is, one gets old, and soon enough, they don't think you're worth the money to hire you, or they think you're too old to fight."

Ursine nodded at this. "I was given a fancy sword when I was forced to retire; I prefer my plain one, which is nice and sharp. They wouldn't even keep me on to teach the younger guards."

"On my last job, my employer tried to have me killed, by his supposedly elite guards," said Muldin. "Managed to kill three of them in the first five minutes, and then I ran."

"Understandable," said Ursine. "Sometimes running is the best option."

"Yeah, especially when you lead the guards into a dangerous part of the neighborhood, and let the locals deal with them." Muldin spat. "Twenty guards with swords, and they were taken out by fifty thugs armed with little more than broken bottles and boards with nails in them."

"Been there myself," said Ursine. "It's embarrassing to see a guard get killed like that. All you can do is run the other way."

"Real shame," said Muldin. "Worse was when the guy failed to give the widows due compensation. I soon removed his head, and redistributed the monies he had."
Ursine chuckled at the attempts of himself and the wolf to outdo each other with their tales of violence, some of it exaggerated he was sure.

But some distance away, Queen Amasúrah, the demon who had taken over Na'vi's body, listened and believed. "I can use these two," she thought. "Under the proper control they would wreak havoc and instill panic.

Shortly before noon, the wolf and the bear arrived at the village of Padulini. It was a pleasant place where the walls were of stucco painted pink and yellow and pale green and many large fragrant plants lined the streets.

"Good," said the bear. "I can find milk here for the cubs. What do you say we sit down to a proper meal at the inn and fill our stomachs?"

"A good idea," said Muldin Lupis. "I assume I will have to pay for your meal?"

Ursine laughed. "You assume wrong, my new friend. It just so happens that my coin pouch is full for a change and I shall happily treat both of us to the finest meal in the house."

"Let's hope it is very fine then."
Muldin and Ursine sat down, and a young female deer came over.

"What can I get you, travelers?" she asked.

"The best meal that you have for two carnivores like us," said Ursine, with a polite smile. "Big sized, if possible."

"Alright," the deer said. "Anything else?"

"You wouldn't happen to have a friend, or two, who happen to be recent mothers?" Muldin asked. "My friend has two very young cubs who need something more than water."

"Can I take a look to be sure of their ages?" the doe asked.

Ursine carefully opened his pack, and the doe smiled.

"I think I might have a few friends who might be willing to help," she said.

"There will be some money in it for them," said Ursine.

"Yes, I think there are indeed some who would be willing to help you out with that," the doe said. "Anything else?"

"Would you be available later?" Muldin asked.

"Talk to my father on that one," the doe said, with a chuckle. "After all, you don't want to anger the innkeeper by ruining his daughter."

Muldin grinned, friendly. "I'll keep that in mind."

The doe walked away.

Ursine chuckled. "Isn't she a little young for you?"

"And this coming from a new father old enough to be his cubs' grandfather," said Muldin.

Ursine grinned. "I guess you're right there."

Just then, the doors opened, and conversation quieted, as a young richly-dressed male tiger entered the place. There was a certain look about him, a look that said that trouble had arrived.

"So, what have we here?" he asked, as he came over to the table that the two sat at.

"Just a couple of travelers heading south," said Muldin. "Just stopped by for a bite to eat, and a room for the night."

"Let me take a look inside of your bags," the tiger said, reaching for Ursine's pack.

However, Ursine grabbed a hold of the tiger's wrist before he could touch it, and gave a low growl.

"I'd advise against touching that pack," said Muldin. "In it is the most valuable treasures a father could hope for, and he'll fight to protect it, if he's going to call himself a father."

"Do you know who I am?" the tiger asked. "My father is lord around here, and I could have you arrested."

"Touch the pack, and you will lose your hand," said Muldin. "Touch him, and you'll lose your life. Now, leave."

Ursine tossed the tiger away.

"I'll have you-" The tiger looked between his legs, and saw a knife quivering in the floorboards.

Na'vi was headed to a strange place she had never seen before. Na'vi saw creatures she recognize as Sarpah, Paksin and Vajrah and others she never thought could exist! Insect People, Fish People...And frequently, strange Vajrah -Na'Vi could only assume they were Vajrah-That were mostly bald except for on the head and on the males the face. These Strange Creatures were vaguely Ape-Like but they had strange features like downward pointing noses.

Meanwhile Sassundrah was with his family looking through Na'Vi's Journal, in the Earlier Pages he learned the name of the Mockingbird Honor Guard that had insulted Na'Vi so gravely, her name was Feenie and she was the Personal Honor Guard of a White-Bellied Sea Eagle Prince (Princes are both Male and Female on Dardunah)

The tiger growled at Muldin and asked "What do you plan on doing with that knife? Put it away or add to the charges the two of you are accumulating!"

"Oh I don't think anybody is going to be arresting us," Muldin answered. "For you know as well as I that even your father would agree that you are in the wrong here. We're just two travelers trying to have a bite to eat and you sir, are disrupting our meal. Now kindly back away or you'll find that I don't wield my knife unless I plan to use it. My friend here said he has a father's most precious treasure in the pouch and you will not see what that is without the father's permission."

"I will see," the tiger said and reached for the bag.

Muldin didn't hesitate. He saw Ursine move to take out aristocrat tiger and he threw the knife with a backhanded toss, burying it in the belly of the second tiger. As Ursine swung his sharp claws and huge paws, ripping open the belly of the aristocrat, Muldin grabbed a second knife from the table and cut deeply into the second tiger's already dying body, making sure there would be no coming back. Ursine was attacking the aristocrat almost insanely, blind with fury that the aristocrat would dare attempt to to threaten his cubs. "Never, ever mess with a bear's cubs," Ursine was screaming as he ripped the aristocrat tiger to shreds.

The inn quickly emptied as terrified people ran from different exits and a few even jumped out the window seeking safety, despite the fact that the inn was three stories up.

When the two tigers were dead Ursine and Muldin sat down at the table and continued eating their lunch as if nothing was amiss. Queen Amasúrah watched the battle through the eyes of Kalass and thought "Yes, I can definitely use these two. I need ruthless killers like them to help set my plan in motion."
Queen Beneficia Amasurah contemplated her next move.

Using her far sight, she had located a wolf and a bear that would make excellent terrorists. They were currently in the small village of Padulini. She looked at them now with her far sight, but as Amaurah Beneficia lay there in the body of Na'vi, she could feel something strange and unexpected happening. She began to tremble and shake and sweat poured from her. This went on for several hours, then in the middle of the night she gave a great gasp and was able to rest.

There were now two people in the room. They both had the body of Na'vi. But only one of them was Na'vi.

"I did it!" Na'vi thought, for it had taken a supreme effort to separate herself from Queen Beneficia Amasurah. She hated the queen and thought about killing her, but she couldn't because it was Na'vi's body lying there in the bed, fast asleep.

"How strange to have a twin," Na'vi thought, "but an evil twin. I can't kill her. She looks too much like me. She IS me. What if killing her also killed me?"

Na'vi stood there for an hour, thinking, then realized she didn't want to be there when the Queen woke up. She ran from the room and out into the night.


In Padulini, it had been an exciting night. Ursine and Muldin did manage to finish their meal after killing the two tiger aristocrats, but the innkeeper insisted they not stay there. The police would be there soon and there would be trouble.

Fortunately, the house where the cubs were getting their milk seemed like a safe place to hide until the police left .



When Amasurah woke up next morning, she immediately felt that some great change had happened, but she didn't know what it was.

She used her far sight to check on the wolf and the bear.

Muldin was looking out a window. "Something is wrong."

"Been getting that feeling myself," said Ursine.
Queen Amasurah lay and gave deep thought to what could possibly be wrong. She was in full possession of Na'vi, her plan was falling in place, and even her two bumbling servants seemed to be performing properly. "Are we comfortable my pet," Amasurah asked Na'vi.

"Wait, that's it! My pet has escaped. I have full possession of her body but she has managed to escape her body. Not that it really matters because she will be unable to speak to anybody either here or on the home world without a body. Even if they see her they will consider her a ghost and run in fear, which could actually place into my hand. I plan to unleash legions of ghosts on this world in due time. However she has escaped and nobody, but nobody escapes my control. I will send demons to control the wolf and the bear. Then I will have the wolf and the bear track her down, trap her in somebody else's body, and kill the person she possesses. It is time to begin to sow evidence that the monsters of Shekandowa are maliciously and intentionally killing the inhabitants of this world and that they are doing so by order of his lowliness the emperor.
Na'Vi was floating along, looking at all the strange creatures who lived in this strange other universe.

She then heard something inside her head "Traveler, come here."

"Who...Who said that?" Na'Vi asked

"My name is Jebbie Cho." Said the Voice "I am meditating and I detected your wandering spirit...Come here...Look in the window you are next to."

Na'Vi looked in the window and sitting in lotus position was a Meditating Tiger-Woman

There are moments in time when History turns on a hinge and it is a matter of great importance how events unfold. Such a moment had come to Dardunah in the village of Padulini.

Ursine and Muldin remained hidden in the house where Ursine's cubs were being fed. The wolf and the bear were only pawns in the game, unaware of the larger forces at work around them.

The Queen in the game was Queen Beneficia Amasurah who had come out of the Nine Hells (where she had been banished) by entering the body of the young snake woman, Na'vi.

But Na'vi possessed unexpected strengths and was able to free herself from Amasurah's control by creating a twin of herself. One twin contained Na'vi and the other twin contained Amasurah. The nature of the link between the two twins was unknown, but possibly so strong that if one twin died, then the other twin also died. The whereabouts of the pure Na'vi twin were unknown.

Ever since Amasurah first discovered the wolf and the bear with her far sight vision, she had been scheming how to use them. She valued their violent urges, but first she must get their minds under her control...

Amasurah, looking quite harmless in her Na'vi body, knocked on the door of the house where Ursine and Muldin were hiding. "I bring good news!" she whispered when the door was cracked open a bit.

"Let her in," Ursine said. "She seems harmless enough. What is this good news that you bring?"
Muldin looked carefully at the snake woman. He then looked at the deer woman taking care of the cubs. "Do you know her?"

"She's new around here," the doe said.

"Just as I thought." He slammed the door, catching Amasurah in the face. "Something's wrong with her scent; it's like that of a dead person on fire."

"You sure about that?" Ursine asked. "I mean, that was rude to slam the door in her face."

"I've met up with lizards and snakes before, on a number of occasions," said Muldin. "Something is wrong with that one."

Chris, there is no General Jutjaw in this campfire. He is in MM2. The "fantasy dimension" idea has been revised. Burbank has been edited out. If you can email me a new addition I will put it in the campfire for you.

___Steev

Na'Vi's wandering spirit was greeted by Jebbie Cho
"You are flustered and upset," said Jebbie Cho.

"Yes, I am," said Na'vi. "You would be, too, if you became twins and a demon took over your twin."

"All things can be overcome with the great peace of Shamballa."

"What is that?"

Jebbie Cho made a graceful gesture with her hands. "It is the peace everlasting, the eternal calm from which the Universe is born. Each of us can find it inside us if we truly look."



After getting the door slammed in her face, Amasurah was furious and for a moment considered burning the house down, but then she thought of a simple way to control the bear. His cubs. She must hide his cubs from him. Then he would do her bidding to make sure his cubs came to no harm.
Muldin looked out at the snake woman, and looked at her eyes. There was something off about them. That was when an old story he once heard trickled through his memory, one about a demon queen. A chill ran down his spine.

"We've got to go," he said. "That woman isn't herself."

"Who is she then?" Ursine asked.

"Did your grandparents ever tell you stories?" Muldin asked, as he packed his things.

"Of course," said Ursine.

"They ever mention stories about Queen Amasurah and her Red Eyes of Death?" Muldin asked.

"But, she's been dead for centuries," said Ursine.

"Yeah, but the snakes got their own stories about how she could be summoned by a certain spell," said Muldin. "Seems someone used it, and found that she isn't a nice person."

"What do you mean?" Ursine asked.

"She's got the red eyes, and not those from drinking too much."
Ursine looked out the window and saw the woman's eyes himself. Without Na'vi in the body with her Queen Amasurah had forgotten that her eyes would glow red, if she was ever aware of it to begin with. Chances were that she wasn't because such things as a person escaping their own body were brand new territory.

"Man her eyes are red! It's almost as if there was fire behind them. You're absolutely right Muldin. We need to get out of here. I don't want to go out the front with the cubs. Chances are she'll try to possess them and use them to manipulate me into doing her dirty work. of We need to find somebody that specializes in magic to put a protective field around the cubs."

"And ourselves," Muldin added. "We're both warrions who have been through the nine hells and back but neither of is capable of taking on a demon, and certainly not one as p[owerful as Amasurah."

"My father is a licensed magi," the doe interjected. "I'm sure he'd help you wouldn't you father?"

An old owl looked up from his studies and answered "Yes I would. You must be warned though that Amasurah is one of the most sinister and evil of all the demons in the nine hells. She has plotted foe centuries to get her "revenge" on the people who rejected her. So be very careful. I also want to place a hex on the two of you that will prevent her from possessing you. You are mighty warriors, but Amasurah will fight her battle through the soul. I suggest that you don't encounter her directly but that you use distance vision to fight her as she will you."
In Shard Birds can't reproduce with Mammals or Reptiles, we can say the Owl adopted the Doe

"So...You are adopted?" Asked Ursine said

"Yes." Said the Doe.

"And I am not the only one. Father Owl has been good to us orphans."

"Pshaw!" said the Owl. "I love kids. It's the least I can do to feed and clothe those who have lost their parents. Ah... here is the spell I need." He had in his hands one of those gigantic ancient leather books that magicians of the past favored for keeping spells.

Ursine rubbed it. "This is impressive, but I've always wondered why not convenient, pocket-sized spell books?"

The Owl chuckled. "That's fine if you want to cast a pocket-sized spell. You don't fully understand magic, my friend. Many people think it is purely idealistic, but it is also very materialistic. It's important how big the spell book is and what it is made of. This one is covered in dragon hide, for example, and will last for centuries."

Ursine nodded. "So you are saying all the strange rituals of magic are for good reasons and not just to put on a show?"

"When you are dealing with a good magician that's true, but if you happen to be dealing with a charlatan, then who knows, eh? But don't worry, I am very good. Let's light some candles and I will need you to prick your finger and produce a drop of blood. Debbie! Get the black candles with a left hand twist to them."

"I will," said the doe and they soon heard her rummaging around in the next room.


Meanwhile, Amasurah was gathering up materials for a spell of her own. She relied on no spell book as all demons are born with nine essential spells in their bones. The exact spells vary from demon to demon.

One of Amasurah's most powerful spells involved taking over the mind of another. But she also had spells of protection and spells of attack and even one spell of weather-making which she had never used since all it did was make it rain for a few minutes. But if you are a demon you can't expect every one of your nine spells to be a winner.
"Are you sure you need all of this stuff?" Muldin asked. "I mean, wouldn't a simple drop of blood do the trick, along with an invocation to the Gods?"

"It might do the job, but the spell wouldn't last as long as you want it to," the Owl said. "The Gods are very short-minded, and short-sighted, in my experience - they'd grant you what you wanted, but, unless you put on a show, the spell would only last thirty minutes at the most. Put on one hell of a performance however, and they'll want you around to put on another one."

"Useful to know," said Muldin.

"That, and I have a reputation to uphold," said the Owl. "Never let it be said that I never give the Gods a poor showing."
Soon the owl had everything he needed. He set the candles at the different points of a pentagram on the floor and had every member of his household hold hands in a circle around the pentagram. Ursine and Muldin joined in, not being surprised by the pentagram. Pentagrams are a part of magic and in this realm every house had several.

The owl lit the candles in their proper sequence, mixed together some herbs and other things, and mingled a droplet of blood from both Ursine and Muldin's finger's, mixing a goblet fro each using his own blood. "Drink these quickly," the old owl said.

The two of them drank it and Ursine fed a small amount to his cubs. Then the owl began to dance and chant an incantation.

Amasurah immediately felt the link she was attempting to establish between her dark soul and the group being severed. She sought out the source of the disruption with her mind. However she knew it was no use because the power of the gods much outweighed the power of demons. The group and everybody in the circle,as well as the dancing magi were beyond her powers.
Meanwhile far to the North in the Kingdom Andhi, Na'Vi's Uncle Lord Sassundrah had summoned the Mockingbird Honor Guard Feenie, who had so gravely insulted Na'Vi in the first place.

"So..." The Elder Cobra said as he circled the Mockingbird as she quivered in her chair "...My beloved niece seems to have been destroyed in the attempt to summon a demon after meeting you."

"What do you expect me to do?"Feenie asked "I am an Honor Guard, I have no talent for sorcery!"

"You don't." Said Sassundrah "But I do have a Summoner."

Lord Sassundrah's Serving Summoner a Tuatara, came forth and bowed

"Ttark will need you to help him summon a means to find Na'Vi."
"What am I supposed to do?" Feenie asked.

Ttark gave her a long look. The tuatara was notorious for how slowly he could move and act. "You are supposed to do what I tell you to do."


Meanwhile, the owl finally finished his dance and chant.

"Is it over?" Ursine asked. He had a headache from drinking blood and herb tea and hearing loud music and dancing.

"Yes," said the owl. "Amasurah can possess neither you nor Muldin. As for the cubs, they should be able to resist her, but I don't know for sure how strong she is.
"So, do you know of a way to defeat her?" Muldin asked. "Don't want to kill the Host unless we have to."
Na'vi entered the house where Jebbie was sitting. The tiger looked at her curiously. "You aren't dead yet are you? Are you an astral projection? I can see you clearly with my mind's eye but something seems different about you."

"I am Navi, ward of the Lord Sussundrah. I used the forbidden arts to summon a demon and instead became possessed by one. She is still in my body and thus it remains alive."

"Yes," Jebbie answered. "A body must have a soul in it to remain alive. I suggest you get back to your body before the demon leaves it."

"She isn't going to leave. She has some very sinister plans she wants to carry out and she needs me to make them happen."

"How can I help? I am willing to help you."

"First of all get a message to my Uncle, Lord Sussundrah and let him know I am alive but demon possessed and out out my body. Then contact a wolf and bear she has special interest in. If they aren't possessed themselves, they may be able to help me."
Ttark took Feenie to his special chamber,he lit some incense he ordered Feenie to swing the incense around while Ttark meditated.

"I see in my mind's eye..." Said "...That Na'Vi's body has become possessed by a demon!"

Feenie continued to swing the incense around

"This...Is a very powerful demon..." Said Ttark,"...We need a very powerful sorcerer to exorcise the demon."

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Amasurah - a demon woman who took possession of Na'vi's body
Na'vi - a snake woman of the north country
Lord Sussundra - Na'vi's uncle
Feenie - a Mockingbird Honor guard at Lord sussundra's castle who insulted Na'vi
Ttark - a Tuatara who was one of Lord Sussundra's summoners
Jebbie Cho - a meditating tiger woman
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Na'vi waited while Jebbie Cho went into a trance so she could communicate with Lord Sussundra. When Jebbie came out of the trance she assured Na'vi that Lord Sussundra knew about her difficulty and was working to resolve it.

Meanwhile, Ttark discovered with Feenie that Amasurah had possessed Na'vi's body. He suggested they find a powerful sorcerer.

"But where?" Feenie said. "I thought powerful sorcerers were extinct. I thought they ended when the last of the Old Magicians died."

Ttuark took forever to answer her. "It's true that the claims of the Old Magicians and Sorcerers to have discovered the secret of immortality eventually proved to be wrong, but their knowledge was not completely forgotten. There is an ancient monastery in the Northern mountains where 9 monks guard the Ancient Books of the Eclipse."

"The eclipse?"

"Yes," Ttark said. "Many people believe that it was a solar eclipse that caused the era of the Magicians to end. I don't. But many do."

"Then why do you think these nine monks know anything?"

"There are rumors," Ttark said. "I have heard tales of great magic being practiced there. I will go into a trance and see if I can contact one of them. This may take all night."

"I will wait," Feenie said. "Would you like some tea or anything?"

"Yes, that would be nice."


Meanwhile, Ursine and Muldin were trying to think of a way to get out of the house without being seen by Amasurah.

Ursine paced back and forth. "If we could just get away from this cursed village of Padulini and lose ourselves in the woods, I am certain I can get us to a much safer place."

"I trust your knowledge of the local woods, Grandfather Bear, but those red eyes of Amasurah are focused on us like a laser. Perhaps we can create a diversion and get her attention off of us for a few seconds?"

"That's all we need," said Ursine, "a few seconds."
"Well, I doubt the local lord will like us, given who we killed," said Muldin. "This might be the part where we end up splitting."

"What do you mean?" Ursine asked.

"We could try a diversion, where I cause enough of a commotion, she looks at me, allowing you to sneak away with the cubs," said Muldin.

"I don't like that," said Ursine.
Na'vi knew that she had to contact the wolf and the bear. Jebbie Cho had ascertained that they were travelers passing through Padulini. She also knew that they would willingly see to it that no harm came to Na'vi's body while she was dispossessed and that they would help Na'vi defeat Quenn Amasurah. It was just a matter of contacting them.

Jebbie Cho began meditating and suddenly shouted out. "I got it. I know how to contact the bear and wolf for you."

She began meditating again and her spirit touched the spirit of the owl. She informed the owl of Na'vi's situation.

"Before you two leave I have to ask something of you," the owl said.

"I think I can speak for both of us when i say anything," Muldin replied.

"Sure can," Ursine answered. "You helped us now we'll help you."

The owl told them of Na'vi and her situation. He asked them to protect Na'vi and see to it that her body was also unharmed.

"Are you crazy?" Ursine said. "I have no desire to protect that demon woman Amasurah, no matter whose body she is in. I'd rather see her go back to the Nine Hells."

"It's understandable," said the owl, "since she threatened your cubs, but remember that Na'vi is someone's cub."

"We're all someone's cub, Father Owl."

"Are you ready to make your escape?" Muldin asked.

"Yes," Ursine said, " but I wish we were leaving together."

"I'm still heading South. We'll meet again one day down there."

"I hope so."

"Give me the bundle you carried the cubs in and you put the cubs in a blanket or something wrapped around you. I want Amasurah to think I have the cubs."

They got on opposite ends of the house, front door and back door, and Muldin said, "Count to five after I bust out. Give her time to see me. Then you go out the other door. And you will only have seconds. Make them count."

Muldin took a few deep breaths and then burst out of the house running toward the woods, the "bundle of cubs" on his back.

Amasurah came after him. He drew his sword and swung at her but she had a protective shield that rang like a bell, making his arm shake and sending an electric shock through him. He dropped both his sword and the bundle as he fell to the ground.

Amasurah snatched up the bundle and pulled it open. Her eyes widened in surprise to see no cubs in it, then narrowed as she realized she had been tricked. She ran back toward the house but could already sense the bear had made his getaway.

It doesn't matter, she thought. I don't need the bear and the wolf. There are other ways.

Ursine continued on his way South and eventually arrived there never to be bothered by Amasurah again.

Father Owl found Muldin lying in the woods and dragged him back to the house.

"Will he live?" asked the Doe.

"I think so if we care for him and watch over him."


Meanwhile, at Lord Sussundra's castle, Ttark shook Feenie awake. "I was successful contacting the Nine Monks Monastery. One who claims to be a sorcerer is on his way here now."


And at Jebbie Cho's house, the tiger woman's eyes opened after a meditation. "There is an Owl and a Wolf. They can help you get your body back. You must go to them in Padulini."

"Please come with me," Na'vi said. "I need your help, too."
Muldin groaned, as he woke up. "What hit me?"

"A pissed-off demon," said the Owl. "You were lucky."

"Ursine?"

"He made it, safely, along with his cubs."

"That's good to know."

The Owl picked up a vial. "Drink this. It will make you better."

Muldin took a sip. "Tastes like piss."

"Drink it; it has healing herbs, among other things."
"Please Jebbie. I have nobody to communicate with the wolf and the owl for me. I know the owl is a magi and a mystic but thus far you are the only one who has been able to see me. If you don't come with me the wolf and the owl won't be able to help me because they won't know I am there."

"Yes," Jebbie said. "I will go with you. I will be your liaison."

"My uncle will reward you well."
As they traveled Jebbie Cho was greeted by various other Zoics, as she was a well respected Zoic in her community.

Meanwhile Ttark and Feenie along with Lord Sussundrah were worried for Na'Vi's safety (Well...Not so much Feenie, Feenie was more concerned for her own safety as she as a mere Honor Guard could easily be sacrificed by a Lord)

"I am not sure the Monks will be able to save Na'Vi." Lord Sussundrah said "Are you sure we can't find someone more powerful?"
Lord Sussundra and the others flinched as a loud thunderclap sounded right over the castle. Then the sound of a sizzling cymbal grew louder and louder as an intense point of white light appeared in the center of the room and expanded in size until it was a sphere of crackling energy. It emitted no heat, but suddenly flared through all the colors of the rainbow, then dissolved with the soft sound of an elevator chime.

A grinning fat man stood there. He was wearing a white sarong and white silk slippers. His chest was bare other than the numerous necklaces around his neck. He was bald, had big gold rings in his ears, and a had a very merry facial expression.

"Greetings, Dwellers of the Hills! I am Dwabii the Magnificent, Inheritor of the Nine Books, Master of the Eclipse, and Caretaker of the Seventh Key. How may I help you?"

Ttark responded in his usual slow way. "How shall we address you, great sorcerer?"

"Call me Dwabbi. I am informal. Now what is your problem, Ttark?"

"You know my name?"

"I know all your names," said Dwabii, "for I drew them from your minds, but my abilities are limited in that direction and problems are too complicated for me to see that way. You must actually tell me your problem."

"Very well," Ttark said. "A friend of ours, a snake woman named Na'vi, has had her body possessed by a demon woman from the Nine Hells named Amasurah."

"And you want to get Na'vi's body back and return Amasurah to the Nine Hells? You are in luck. I know Amasurah well. This is not the first time she has gotten out. The last time was before you were born, but I was an apprentice monk at the time and witnessed the entire episode. I know how we overpowered her then."

"Can't we just kill her?" Feenie asked. "Why do we have to return her to the Nine Hells?"

Dwabii laughed. "You can't just kill a demon queen. A regular demon, maybe yes, but not a queen. She must be banished to the Nine Hells for nine times before she is lost there forever."

"How many times has she already been banished?"

"I don't know," Dwabii said, "but apparently less than nine."



The Owl responded cautiously to the knock on his door. Outside was a floating Tiger Woman. He opened the door wider. "You must be the Jebbie Cho of my trance."

"That I am," said Jebbie Cho, gracefully entering the room. "And with me is Na'vi, although you cannot see her at the moment."

"I see her misty outline," said the Owl.

"Ah, then you do possess strong psychic abilities. That is good. We will need all the strength we have to help Na'vi escape from the possession of Amasurah. You do intend to help."

The Owl glanced over to where Muldin lay on a mattress in the corner. Muldin feebly raised one finger to indicate yes, let's help.


"Got anything that will help me heal quicker?" Muldin asked.
"I can heal you from your weakness and accompanying nausea. The bruises will have to heal on their own. I can also see that you have a broken rib. I can prescribe some herbs that will help it heal faster."

She floated over to Muldin and stretched forth her hands. She placed them upon Muldin's chest and they began to softly glow. When she withdrew them Muldin raised up. "I'm a little stiff and sore from the bruising but she's absolutely right. I feel one hundred per cent better now."

"Good," Jebbie answered. We will need everybody at their best to battle Queen Amasurah. She is a powerful demon and we will need the assistance of a monk to banish her. During the meantime we have a more pressing problem. Na''vi has been out of her body for several hours. If she does not inhabit a body soon, even if she has to share a body, she will be unable to return to her own body. We need to find somebody who will not be directly involved in the upcoming confrontation to be her host. I was thinking perhaps a doe we all know would her host."

"Sure, if she doesn't mind waiting tables," the doe said.

"She says to tell you that if you do this you will no longer be forced to wait tables," Jebbie told the the doe. "Lord Sussundrah will reward you abundantly and give you a home in his castle. You all will be made aristocracy."
"I could never leave Father Owl," said the Doe. "He needs me."

"Then we will find some other way to reward you," said Jebbie Cho. "Meanwhile, may Na'vi enter you now? It's a quick and painless spell the way I do it."

"Yes, I am not afraid."

The tiger woman and the doe went into the other room for some privacy while Father Owl remained to gaze into the small fire crackling in the fireplace and listen to Muldin snore.

Muldin woke up from his nap and stood up. "Ah, it feels good to be on my feet again. I am not one who can tolerate inaction. I must always be doing something."

"You should still get plenty of rest until you are fully recovered."
Muldin looked at the owl. "It gets a little boring."
At Lord Sussundra's castle, Dwabii said, "In order to banish Amasurah back to the Nine Hells I will need a little assistance. I need your best warrior, your best psychic, and your best healer."

Lord Sussundra rubbed his chin. "Ttark here is my best psychic."

Dwabii frowned. "No offense, Ttark, but you are way too slow for a job like this."

"No offense taken," Ttark said. "I pride myself on being cautious and deliberate. I regret that my methods are too slow for your taste."

Lord Sussundra called for his best warrior and his best healer and when they were standing before Dwabii, the sorcerer closed his eyes and touched them with his hands.

"Nope," he said. "This is a fine warrior but he does not have the time-proven heart we need for this experience."

Of the healer, he said, "An excellent healer, I am sure, but limited to diseases of biological origin. We need a mystic healer."

"Then what shall we do?" Ttark said. "Nothing we offer seems to satisfy you."

"Let me trance on this for a moment. I'll scan the area with my mind to see if there are any individuals we can use."

Feenie and Ttark and Lord Sussundra waited patiently while Dwabii sat on a plump cushion, legs crossed, fingertips touching, and emitted an eerie chanting sound that made their skin crawl. After some minutes had passed, Dwabii stopped chanting and opened his eyes.

"I have found three people and they are all within easy travel distance of your castle. The warrior is a wolf named Muldin Lupis and he just happens to be staying at the home of the healer, an old owl known as Father Owl. Also in the house is our psychic, a tiger woman named Jebbie Cho."

"That's a miracle," Feenie said, "that they would all be in the same place at the same time."

Dwabii chuckled. "Coincidence is the engine of Fate."

"I know of Father Owl," said Lord Sussundrah. "I will send a speedy messenger to him right now. Can you not contact the psychic tiger woman with your mind?"

"When I scanned to locate them I discovered they were sleeping, which actually made it easier for me, but you can't contact a sleeping person until they wake up. Let's remember it is the middle of the night. I suggest you all get some sleep. I must gather the materials I will need."

"I'll help you," Feenie said. "I can't possibly sleep right now."
"Good, for I will need some help with a few of the things," said Dwabii.
"Now if we could just get Na'vi here as well," said Lord Sussundrah.

"Na'vi will be coming," Dwabi replied. "The doe who is the adopted daughter of the owl has allowed Na''vi to enter her. It was necessary to prevent Na'vi from being forever banished from her body."

I will reward the doe nicely for saving Na'vi," Lord Sussundrah replied. "I never forget my friends."

Meanwhile in Dardunah's Heaven The Devah, whom Amasurah was once one of before she became a demon, looked down at what was happening Karmah, the Mighty Lion and his lover Krilárah the Lovely Fox decided to call a meeting of all the other Devah
By the evening of the following day everyone had arrived and they assembled in what Lord Sussundra called his Stargazing Room. It was the highest point of the castle and open on all sides to the night air.

"Here is what we must do," said Dwabii. "To battle a demon on equal terms, you have to be in the same mental space with them. We are going to create that space. Tiger Woman Jebbie Cho, you and I will transport ourselves and Amasurah into a new psychomental dimension that will become our battle arena."

"I'm not sure I know how to do that," said Jebbie Cho.

"You don't know," said Dwabii. "I will provide the knowledge, but I am only half of the Ying Yang. I will provide the masculine activating principle and you will provide the feminine. Don't worry. It's like dancing. You need only follow my lead."

Dwabii turned to Muldin Lupis, the wolf warrior. "Have you ever fought inside a psychic space before?"

"I don't think so," said Muldin, "although I have battled some dream warriors that might qualify."

"Ah, yes!" said Dwabii. "It's very much like dreaming, except that unfortunately you can get wounded or killed."

"I think I see where I fit in," said Father Owl.

"That's right," said Dwabii. "You are our healer. You must keep Muldin alive and healthy in the battle dimension until Amasurah is defeated.."

"I'll do my best."

"What about Na'vi and me?" Feenie asked.

"You two will have to wait patiently and hope that Amasurah does not win."
Muldin took a look at his knives. "Is there some sort of weapon we can use to make the fight easier? Granted, a steel blade will do the job for most foes, but we are talking about a demon here; I need to be sure about this sort of thing."
Karmah said to his Fellow Devah "Banishing Amasurah to the Nine Hells did nothing to stop her! She has only grown more powerful!"
Dwabii said to Muldin. "The weapons you use must be the ones you have used all your life and that are the most familiar to you. In your case, your knives, and of course your teeth, feet, claws, etc. But if there was some time in your life when you used another weapon and used it so much that it became a part of you that you can recall into your imagination in full detail, then it will be available to you in the battle dream arena."
"Good to know," said Muldin. "I've used plenty of weapons over the years."
Na'vi was communicating with the doe. "Thank you for allowing me to dwell in your body until mine is released. It was very kind of you and I assure you my uncle will reward you."

"You're very welcome," thought the doe, knowing Na'vi would hear her. "They were now telepathically connected and would be until they died. "By the way, would you like to speak to your uncle?"

"Yes" said Na'vi, knowing that Lord Sussundrah would play no role in the battle except host.

"Lord Sussundrah," the doe said. "I have somebody in me that wishes to talk to you. I'm permitting her to use my voice but it will be her that you hear. You'll hear her voice too I believe."
"How are you feeling, Na'vi?" asked Lord Sussundrah.

"Full of regrets," Na'vi said, "that I dabbled in things I didn't know enough about. I wish I could undo all the trouble I have caused."

"If you survive this you will be wiser and stronger."

"Uncle, do you believe I might not survive?"

"I should not have said it that way. You will survive, Na'vi, and we will all be together soon and back to our normal lives."

"I hope so, Uncle."



Dwabii and Jebbie Cho sat face to face, chanting to help them mentally create the battle space needed.

Feenie whispered to Father Owl, "But how will they get Amasurah into it?"

"I don't know," said Father Owl, "and don't ask me any more questions. I must devote my full attention to the battle space."

Father Owl's eyes rolled up and showed their whites and Feenie knew the battle space must have been created and he was there now.

Inside the Battle Arena the world at first appeared to be filled with fog and Muldin called out, "Dwabii?Father Owl? Is anyone here?"

The fog gradually cleared to reveal a peaceful meadow with a stream running through it. They sat on a grassy bank of the stream - Dwabii, Muldin, Jebbie Cho, and Father Owl. On the other bank of the stream stood the shining demon Queen Amasurah. She radiated power so that her image seemed to warp and tremble like heat waves in summertime. When she spoke her voice was like a trumpet horn that echoed throughout the arena.

"What fools you mortals be to battle me!
An easy loser, Muldin Lupis, you shall be!
Hahahahaha!"

But Muldin was already on the move. He had decided that it would be best to strike strong, strike first, and strike fast in the hopes of surprising her.
Muldin moved fast, and punched Amasurah in the stomach.

"You'd dare to touch a Queen?" the demon gasped out.

The wolf merely grinned. "Most don't complain when I do." He then jerked his knee up, hitting her in the chin, knocking her back.

Amasurah rubbed her jaw, and then looked at her hand. "Blood? You do realize that if I die, so does my host."

Muldin's grin vanished. "I have no issues killing her; death would be a release for her." He pulled out his knives.

"But, I am a Queen!" Amasurah screeched. "You cannot kill me!"

Muldin looked right at her. "I've killed queens before, and I'll kill you to free the young one."

"You are an old wolf," the demon said. "You can't hope to defeat me."

Muldin rushed forward, and stabbed Amasurah's shoulders. "I don't think she'll mind losing the use of her arms, as a small price for her freedom."

"You cannot defeat me!"

"I've only gotten so old by beating everyone else," said Muldin. "Now, relinquish the body, and go back to wear you belong, or, I'll kill the Host body."

"You wouldn't." She then looked into the wolf's eyes, and found them to be very cold, and hard. "Oh, I guess you would."
Amasurah hunched down slightly and when she raised herself back up a blast of energy shaped like her skin jumped outward and pushed Muldin about 30 feet across the meadow.

"Ha!" said Amasurah, her eyes blazing red. "You are like a mosquito to me, old wolf. You can prick me with your knives and slap me with your paws, but I command the power of Hell itself! Burn, wolf, burn!"

She pointed her finger at Muldin and a long flame reached across to singe his leg. He jumped up, twisting, turning, trying to be as evasive to her finger of flame as he could. When the flame flickered and went out, he knew her powers were limited. Probably she had to recharge her power in some way. Now was the time to strike again! Before she could recharge her magic.
"If you kill her here in the dream world, the host body will go back to it's owner," Dwabi called to Muldin.

"Good to know," Muldin said as he rushed Queen Amasurah. She was still recharging her demonic powers.

"Give up the host body or I will kill you Old Demon. Queen my eye! You're just an old has been. Why I'll bet the other demons of hell are planning a coup while you're gone."

"The demons are all loyal to me."

Muldin struck Amasurah in the face with the handle of the knife and heard a sickening crushing sound come from it. The sound was music to his ears. Amasurah screamed in both pain and shock that he could do that to her. "Release the young lady or I'll do much worse before I finally kill you!"

"You can't kill a demon," laughed Aamasurah.

Muldin knew he was now in control and victory would be his. He wanted to not only kill the demon but also banish her even from hell to an inescapable place. Killing her would send her straight to the ninth hell where she would never escape again.

"In the dream world I can Muldin answerd. "In fact I have an idea. How about I put a world of hurt on you before I send you to the ninth hell. Now be prepared to suffer and by the way, Go to hell!"
But when Muldin tried to move, he could not.

Amasurah was making strange gestures with her hands. Her red eyes blazed. "Yes, wolf, you are paralyzed. I think the world of hurt you mentioned belongs more properly to you, doesn't it?'

She made a hook like gesture with one hand and tugged.

Muldin Lupis screamed. Never had he felt such pain. It was as if a there was a hook inside him trying to tear out his entrails.

Father Owl was busily at work outside of Amasurah's line of sight. Suddenly there was a puff of blue smoke and he said, "Thank goodness that worked!"

Muldin went limp as the pain abruptly stopped.

Amasurah whirled around, furious at the old owl for breaking her spell. "I think I will roast a turkey today!" she said as she pointed her finger of flame at him.

She didn't hear Muldin Lupis running up behind her until the last moment.
Muldin grabbed her from behind with one arm, throwing off her aim, and stabbed her with the other, right in the heart.

"Do you know what you've done?" Amasurah asked, as flames started to envelope both of them.

The wolf grinned, as his fur and clothes caught fire. "I'll see you in Hell!" He then twisted the knife.
"No." Amasurah screamed as Muldin pulled the knife out and again stabbed straight into her heart, By now he had the other knife in his hand as well and stabbed her through the heart from t.he back Amasurah's screams were music to his ears. He continued to stab her as the flame around them grew more intense. He knew the intensity of the flame determined which level of hell they were in. He was determined to make sure the now defenseless Queen was in the ninth level of hell from which there was no escape. Hed heard Amasurah scream both from the flame that engulfed them and the knife wounds to her chest. Suddenly Amasurah's appearance changed. Muldin at first thought that perhaps she was trying a new trick. Then he realized that he was looking at the real Amasurah and that she had been exorcised from Na'vi. Taking no chances however he kept stabbing her. By now the flames around them were at their full intensity and Muldin knew he had driven the demon to the ninth hell from which there would be no escape. She screamed in agony as the flames burned her. "Welcome to hell," Muldin said as he released her.

He could not figure out why the flames didn't seem to bother him though. Suddenly Jebbie Cho appeared before him.

"Well doneHero Wolf", she said. "You have defeated the demon queen and banished her to the ninth hell. However you do not belong here as she does. Come and I will take you home."

"I thought there was no escaping from the ninth hell," Muldin said

"There isn't if you belong here as she does. The ninth hell is for demons and the extremely wicked. You have proven you are not evil by being willing to sacrifice yourself to help a stranger. So you do not belong here."

Soon they rejoined Dwabi and Father Owl in the field. "We must close the dream gate," Jebbie told Dwabi and Father Owl."

More chanting and then the meadow vanished and they were all back in the Stargazing Room of Lord Sussundrah's palace.

Feenie brought them brass cups filled with cold spring water. Dwabii and Jebbie Cho drink deeply.

Feenie pointed at where Muldin and Father Owl lay sprawled on the floor. "Will they live?"

"Yes, yes," Dwabii said. "Do not worry. Did you not notice someone new in the room?"

Feenie looked behind her. "Na'vi!"

"Yes," Na'vi said. "Oh, I am so glad to be back."

Feenie hugged her. "Please forgive me for what I did to you?"

"You are forgiven many times over. Now everyone must forgive me for the troubles I caused."

Lord Sussundrah put his arms around his niece. "We're just glad to have you back, Na'vi, and think of the great service you did by causing Amasurah to be banished to the Ninth Hell from which she can never return."

"I'll miss her," Dwabii said. "Ha! Just a joke, but she has been around since I was a youngster. Nevertheless, there are plenty of other evil things to fight. If you folks are satisfied with the results, I think I'll be on my way back to the Monastery now."

"Wait!" said Lord Sussundrah. "You must let me reward you in some way."

"Thank you. There is nothing I want, but the Monastery has charities. Perhaps you can donate to them?"

"Gladly!"

"Then good-bye and good luck," said Dwabii. While still in his sitting position, he closed his eyes and began to fade away. This time there were no fireworks, just the sound of a gentle breeze, and after a while, when Dwabii was completely gone, they still heard the breeze.

Ever since that day, even on days with no wind, in the Star Gazing Room there is the sound of a breeze and Lord Sussundrah will tell a guest, "That is the memory of Dwabii, the most powerful sorcerer I ever met."

Father Owl returned to his home with Muldin Lupis, who once again needed a little healing.

When Sussundrah asked Muldin if he would like to stay in the palace as an official guard with light duties and a big paycheck, Muldin said, "Thank you, my lord, but the wandering lust is still strong in me. I have always wanted to see the world and I don't think I've covered even a quarter of it yet."

Lord Sussundrah grinned. "I think I envy you a bit to be so free of encumbrances. You will get old like we all do. Come see me when you tire of wandering and spend your old age at my palace telling me tales of your adventures."

Muldin returned his grin. "I just might do that."



I really enjoyed this campfire with all your great additions!

I'm open to the idea of another campfire with these characters and a fantasy setting.

I think "Muldin Lupis" is one of the best names the wolf has had yet!

The idea of Amasurah taking over the body of Na'vi was a great plot driver.

I had fun creating Dwabii and would like to write about him again.

Anyway, if you have an idea for a new campfire about these characters, send me an email.


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