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Futuristic Science Fiction. First draft edition. In desperate need of critique! |
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This is a story I began and finished when I was 14. I've suddenly gotten the ambition to start working on it again. THIS IS IN DESPERATE NEED OF CRITIQUE!!! DO NOT FEAR TEARING THIS BABY APART; I'M A GLUTTON FOR PUNISHMENT!! That said... Meet Eve, Travis, Duke, Andrew, Melissa, and Jake - the crew of a racing ship called Black Lightning. In this version, they're part of a group called POISON, the reasons for the group name have changed several times to the point that I can't remember. Mac Bounty, now the leader of a dangerous space pirate syndicate called the Mioshi, is a childhood acquaintance - a lot of his motivations are clearer in the prequel, which I started writing in lue to the sequel to this particular book. In all, this particular book is first of a trilogy with a prequel set a few years before this novel. |
| Chapter | 1 | Chapter 1 | 20.10k |
| Chapter | 2 | Chapter 2 | 4.48k |
| Chapter | 3 | Chapter 3 | 9.33k |
| Chapter | 4 | Chapter 4 | 8.08k |
| Chapter | 5 | Chapter 5 | 23.17k |
| Chapter | 6 | Chapter 6 | 7.36k |
| Chapter | 7 | Chapter 7 | 21.31k |
| Chapter | 8 | Chapter 8 | 19.34k |
| Chapter | 9 | Chapter 9 | 7.23k |
| Chapter | 10 | Chapter 10 | 19.89k |
| Chapter | 11 | Chapter 11 | 23.04k |
| Chapter | 12 | Chapter 12 | 9.99k |
| Chapter | 13 | Chapter 13 | 4.70k |
| Chapter | 14 | Chapter 14 | 9.83k |
| Chapter | 15 | Chapter 15 | 17.69k |
| Chapter | 16 | Chapter 16 | 18.25k |
| Chapter | 17 | Chapter 17 | 15.89k |
| Chapter | 18 | Chapter 18 | 8.32k |
| Chapter | 19 | Chapter 19 | 2.87k |
| Chapter | 20 | Chapter 20 | 3.55k |
| Chapter | 21 | Chapter 21 | 6.97k |
| Chapter | 22 | Chapter 22 | 0.81k |
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